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Click here"Well here it goes." I get down on one knee and said, "Mikel Dawson, I love you with all my heart. I want to spend the rest of my life you. I ask you this question in front of everyone because I want the world to know. Will you do the honor in becoming my husband?"
Everyone looks at us waiting for the answer and I look up and see that Mikel is starting to cry.
"I have been waiting a long time to say these words, Alec. I will most definitely, positively do the honor in marrying you." Mikel had said looking down at me crying.
- COMMENTS
88nicegirlover 1 year agoMy only criticism is the change in names could be confusing. Next story you write read through your final draft once just to make sure the names are correct. Consider having someone edit for you too. Otherwise a great story!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThank You for a beautiful love story. Please be kind to us and give us a follow-up.
cyan18almost 7 years agoNice work
l'd like to say that I really admire Alec's strength. And I commend Mikel for not screwing up in his situation.
All in all,this story's like a breath of fresh air.
keep up the good work !
cyan18almost 7 years agoNice work
l'd like to say that I really admire Alec's strength. And I commend Mikel for not screwing up in his situation.
All in all,this story's like a breath of fresh air.
keep up the good work !
browder12about 7 years agoAuthorthank you for you comments...they are really helpful I would like to say it was rushed at the end for the fact the story it based om true events in my life and it was rushed bc i cant finish it now MIkel and i (or i should say Michael and I) are o longer together. Please give me your ideas on stories you think i should do.
