Jade's pussy began to grip him like he had several soft female hands stroking his length. John held her head in his hand and tilted it back so that his face was inches above hers. The Nymph's eyes were screwed tightly shut as she rode wave after wave of pleasure.
"Look into my eyes while I cum inside you!" he urged her.
Jade's eyes flew wide open, emerald green now and cat-like as she stared back at him in disbelief, never having cum so hard before. John stared into those beautiful sparkling eyes, feeling unbelievably close to the girl and he couldn't hold back any longer. He cried out as he came, straining to keep staring into her eyes as his four balls shot long spurts of cum into her eagerly sucking pussy. Jade gasped as she felt his cum pump into her womb and just stared up at him in wonder as he rounded out her belly with his heavy load. Again and again his quad flexed and pulsed as they stuffed her body full of every last drop of his cum. With a last trembling quiver his balls were finally done and he sagged against her, feeling deliciously wasted after such an intense climax.
Jade held him to her chest and murmured grateful appreciative words as he rested on her. He eventually recovered enough so he could lean back and take his weight on his arms, smiling down at her happily.
Real Alyssa stroked her hand through Jade's imitation blonde hair and smiled at her fondly. "That looked like it was a good one," she said to the Nymph affectionately.
"Oh thank you Alyssa!" Jade said, her voice tinged with awe. "That was better than I could have dreamed."
She winced and then looked back at John. "I guess I just gave the game away," she said with a shy grin.
"It's ok, I knew at the end anyway and I meant what I said," he spoke to her lovingly.
Jade looked up at John, sheer adoration in her eyes. "You make me so happy, you have no idea," she sighed blissfully.
"I think I do," he said with a warm smile. "Now turn back to normal please," he requested gently.
Jade shimmered and returned to her dark green Nymph form. "Mmm, much better!" John said and leaned down to kiss her passionately.
*Hey!* Alyssa said with pretend indignation in his mind.
*Just one of you is more than any man can hope to manage,* he thought back to her in amusement.
*Hmm,* she replied. *You seem to keep me under control with a firm hand,* she purred seductively.
John and Jade kissed for a while before he finally pulled back, easing his way out of her and then lay in the middle of the bed. Jade and Alyssa snuggled up against him and they all cuddled together contentedly.
"Thanks, both of you," John said. "That was amazingly sexy."
"Yeah I loved it too," Alyssa said happily as she looked up at him. "I hope it wasn't too much of a chore having to copy me Jade?" she asked the girl resting on the other side of his chest.
"Are you kidding?" Jade laughed incredulously. "I've never cum that hard before," she said with a lovely smile on her face.
"What are Dana and Calara up to anyway?" John asked curiously. "I'm surprised they didn't want to be around for that."
"Oh they did," Alyssa said. "But I wanted you focused solely on the twins," she said, rubbing her breasts against his chest.
"Don't you mean the quad?" Jade said as she copied Alyssa's movements and John was flanked on both sides by warm, pliant boobs.
"Yes, true," Alyssa conceded. "Both sets of quads," she said and gently stroked John's emptied sack.
John let out a big belly laugh at that and the girls looked up at him and smiled.
"To answer your question though," Alyssa continued. "I laid in a course back to Ashana, where Dana will oversee the repairs. Calara is studying Kappa-Indarran to find good places to hide in for when we scout out the system."
"Sounds like it's all well under control," John said with satisfaction, as he relaxed in bed.
"Oh it is," Alyssa replied confidently. "Now you have a rest, while I see if Jade feels like sharing..."
The Nymph giggled excitedly and John settled back to enjoy the show.
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Best ever
I love you story , so much so I have read it a couple of times now !!!!!
Please don't stop writing!
Thanks for the nice comments Nick, I'm pleased you've been enjoying everything so far!
I've finished chapter 30 and it's being edited right now. I hope to submit that later today or tomorrow.
The biggest potential of any story I have read on Literotica
Very well done indeed !
I can see excellent things and some cahllenges in your story.
Some of the excellent:
- A well rounded story with a good context and a natural potential for expansion.
- Well thought out characters allthough they could do with a bit more depth and not only of the sexual kind.
- Continuity. One of the biggest problems of Lit are the excellebt but discontinued stories. Having read a long story then its just so annoying when the author for one reason or another, discontinues the story. The better the story the more sad it is to seee it die.
- a good basic storyplot, sometimes the authors manage to paint themselves in acorner, not here.
- The sex is good if a bit repetitive. I am not talking about the need for the protagonist to whack himself in the bottom with an old slipper while covering the floor with salad leaves, during a blowjob with a customfitted vacuum cleaner that plays the magic flute. But simply that the sex works in The context.
- well written. A story can die from poorly construced sentences and grammatical errors - not here.
- an almost suspension of disbelief. With a sci-fi story like this its hard to write something that doesnt spiral out of control and keeps it sort of grounded. This you manage.
Challenges:
- Momentum. This story has the potential to become a novel length story. But it means you need dicipline, time and the will to sacrifice the time to keep it going which I really hope you do.
- story threads resolved. You have already many that we as children at christmas are waiting for closure upon.
- unpredictability. Allthough we expect the rearmanwt of the spaceship and a new medical chief officer... Then we also need the twist and turns you have aleady delivered ... Only moore :-)
- sci tech believability. Its hard coming up with new techs out of the blue that makes sense.
All in all a brillant story, which means we have great expectations... No pressure at all ,-)
If you need another set of hands, eyes and ears, then just write so in the comments.
I havent actually signed up as amember of literotica for a number of reasons.
But I would for you if it mades sense with your plans and needs.
Kind regards
Nickmore...
Used to check many times a day til.......
I used to check many times a day for updates as well. I like this story that much. In doing this I found that literotica.com seems to update around 1 a.m. cst. Now with day light savings time, it looks like closer to 2 a.m. cst. Keep up the great work.more...
Patience
"The Ashanath, Maliri, Trankarans and the Brimorians, in that order." John replied.
We haven't even gotten through the Ashanath yet so I think it is a bad idea to want chapters at the almost daily rate they peaked at.
I get to read when they are ready. It is a good deal.
:)
Looking forward to the next chapter.more...
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