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Irillith slipped her arm around her twin. "Perhaps you can just describe what you saw, Tashana? How much can you remember?"
Alyssa suddenly looked up sharply and exclaimed, "Maybe there is a way to see it all again!"
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agothat twinkle effect is caused by being viewed through a planets atmosphere. When viewed from space, stars only shine.
tavernkeeperover 2 years agoThis comment is meant to apply to the series as a whole:
I have found myself overwhelmed chapter after chapter by the sheer insanity of your creativity. Every time I think you have leveled off you find a turbo button and take the story to new heights. At the risk of sounding redundant you should publish this, not just for any monetary gain but also to bring it to a wider audience. Compared to some of the "romance" books I have read drinking gallons of cum should not be a deal breaker for publication.
Thank you so much.
Brian
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoSo Alyssa is a progenitor. Does that mean she can enThrall her own group or something? What with Alyssa being female, would she enThrall only men? Just wondering.
The grav-tube is still a serious security and damage control threat. In the event of a breach, fire will spread through the tube to other decks. Same thing is intruders make it to the tubes. I’d think having blast doors side horizontally between decks would mitigate some risk. And adding sonic blasters in the tube in the event of intrusion could help. If in the event of a power failure though, how do John and the girls get from d clan to deck? You made no mention of any kind of Jeffries tubes in the ship.
I thought the hacking deck was actually two devices. Could there be a backup memory or something on the other piece? What about the technology itself, could it be expanded upon to allow the AI (just brain fart her name) to become mobile? I’m still wondering if you are going to come up with something to allow her a physical body like an android or transfer her program to a clone body not w that you introduced the clone facility.
Since this is my first read through your tale, I don’t know. But I’m looking forward to seeing what you have come up with.
Thank you and respectfully,
JAFCritic on literotica
ChasingtheSkyabout 3 years agoYour imagination and creativity with the characters and storylines continue to keep me fascinated. Thank you so much for the excellent read.
