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Click here"I think we might be late for dinner," she gasped. I pulled my fingers from her and made a point of spreading her wide as I slid them up to her clit. I could see a smidge of lime green out the window, so close he could have fingered her himself if the glass was gone.
I was hard all over again and pushed against Jen's ass. "Fuck me," she moaned and I bent her forward, and entered her from behind. I didn't care anymore if Lance was watching or not, all I wanted was to fuck my amazingly hot wife. When we finished, which ended up being doggy style on the floor, I noticed that the shadow in the bamboo was gone. I have no idea what Lance saw that day for sure, but when we finally left for dinner, late, there was a GoneBuggy placard hanging on the front door. Lance had smartly written the time for a few hours earlier in the day, signed his name, and then written in the "notes" section, Took extra care with the bamboo. Thank you.
- COMMENTS
mikeswivesabout 8 years agoAn excellent story both with technically good writing and an inspirational topic. It was not, IMHO, too fast or too slow. It does set up a potential for an extended story line which I encourage you to consider. Too many stories try to start at a simple scene in daily life and end up with a gangbang two pages later. That ignores the value of buidling some tension and depth of character. Next step in this line might add some internal thoughts and emotions of the characters that would provide a rationale for a transition to whatever next phase you would choose. Good start!
Poorwriterover 8 years agoDude or Lady,
You are the best. That story was the best, most engaging, believable, and most fun story I think I have ever read on Literotica! Way to go. It can't really be your first. You must have a hundred under another name. Tell us if you do, okay? I LOVED that there was no raunchy sex. Like humor without filthy words takes a real pro to be really funny, good erotica in the exhibitionist category takes real talent to make it exciting without reverting to nasty sex.
Thanks!
Poorwriter
Anonymousover 8 years agoI enjoy reading this kind of story. You seemed to rush the story so next time don't rush your story. Thanks for a good read.
Many_Memoriesover 8 years agoEspecially if SHE had slid in a remark about Lance enjoying the show, TOO...
I can't help but think about the reaction if she had seen him and gave BOTH of them a show!
