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"Pretty good," I replied. "I'm being more personable like I said and getting to know some new people—like you, of course."
She softly laughed. "That's awesome. I wish I could branch out to more people, but... when guys take one look at me they end up with only one idea in mind."
Her words hit home with me and made me feel guilty. "That sucks," I remarked as I kept my gaze forward. "I mean, I will say that you are very pretty but..., you know I've realized that there's more to a person than just how they look."
She seemed genuinely surprised by my remark as she looked over at me. "Glad to hear you say that," she said with a gentle smile.
"Now, show me these guys and I'll punch them in the face for you."
She laughed. "Come on. You know you wouldn't punch them in the face."
"I'd give it my best shot," I said as I held the building's outer gate open for her and looked at her with a grin, "just for you."
She smiled at me as I caught up with her again. "Have you always been this respectful towards girls?"
"What can I say?" I replied as we walked past the outside fountain. "I like girls. I think they should be treated respectfully. Maybe that's pretty corny and old-fashioned but... that's just how I was raised."
"I like it," she said. "Not a lot of guys I've met feel the same way."
"Yeah, well, that's just who they are. I am who I am—I don't feel like changing that."
She looked at me with an intrigued smile. "That's good. I'm glad."
We were then buzzed in through the front and I held the door open for her. We both smiled as we waited for the elevator to arrive, stepping inside and pressing for our respective floors. The doors closed and, almost in unison, the two of us looked at each other.
"Well, see you tomorrow," I said as the elevator opened for my floor and I stepped out.
"Bye, Anthony," she said with a polite smile.
"Bye, Sofia," I replied with my own smile and stood there until the doors closed.
That night, I'd finished with my homework and gave a sigh as I looked out the window. Sofia's remarks about the way guys see her really made me give pause to my own unabashed lechery. I was being honest when I told her I was starting to recognize there was more to girls than how they looked—that was obvious. However, I couldn't exactly 'turn off' the switch hardwired into my brain when it came to the opposite sex. Women were always going to be attractive to me and always get my juices flowing. But if I could take anything away with my interactions with Sofia, Jennifer, Talia, Eve, Tamara and Nora it was that there was more than just wanting to rip off their clothes and fuck them.
Although, that was still a pretty hot fantasy.
Fantasies were just fantasies. It was how I treated those young women and respected them in real life that actually mattered. I had to admit, getting close to and bonding with Jennifer and Talia felt just as good as sex—if not better. Still, the sex was really awesome.
Ah, well. That was just how life was, I suppose. I was still on my path to turning a new leaf, living my life to the fullest and enjoying every minute of it. I was tired of being tired all the time. I wanted something more, something new, fresh and exciting. I really felt like after making new friends with Eve and Sofia that I was definitely getting there.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI appreciate all of the hard work! I wish someone would make a film of this story it would be amazing. Ignore the morons who don't understand this site, it's.community or how feedback and criticism work. I look forward to the rest of the story, this is the best time-stop story I have ever read.
jester9217almost 10 years agoThe storys good you got a lot of plot with the slight back drop of something mysterious in the the foreground that maybe giving him his new powers.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThe story is developing and improving as it is going along. I am very much enjoying the growth in the main character as he is realising the universe is not just driven by teenage hormones but by real people with real emotions and feelings.
AnthonyFictionabout 10 years agoAuthorI deleted a couple comments on this chapter a moment ago. Let me reiterate some things I said at the very top of the very first chapter.
"Basically it's an actual story and not some random, ham-handed fuckfic.
This is my own series, I will write it as I see fit.
For those that are still here, enjoy. Please feel free to offer constructive criticism wherever you find plot holes, typos and grammatical errors, as well as any reasonable comments and suggestions you may have."
I really don't care if you don't like this story or how it's going, etc. Close the tab and go somewhere else or go write your own story. I really don't care that you think the story is getting "boring" because it's too wordy and there's not enough sex for you. I'm not going to apologize for enhancing the story and not making it some nonstop sexfest.
That's it.
