My lovers cock.
"I don't think I have ever been better."
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My lovers cock.
"I don't think I have ever been better."
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HEY!!! ANNONY!!!!! You ass wipe
no one gives a shit about your English grading of a story but you. Jesus man get a fucking life. 5 for all the errors
A FIRST DRAFT MASQUERADING AS A FINISHED STORY!!!!
Pillar (pillar)
Bartending School (bartending school) (2)
Plan (plan)
baby sitting (babysitting)
Birthday (birthday)
State (state)
shoulder to the side (shouldered)
chanced the way (changed)
bar tending (bartending)
child like (childlike) (2)
out (of) my sight
"Threw?" "Yea. They way your (you’re) (5) using it. '9th through 11th grade' it's spelled 'through'." (I CAN’T DECIDE WHETHER THIS STATEMENT IS IRONIC OR HYPOCRITICAL SINCE THIS AUTHOR MADE THE SAME MISTAKE 11 TIMES IN CH 1)
else where (elsewhere)
tendon's (tendons)
life like (lifelike)
god (God) (11)
it's him (he)
That's it's (That)
to quickly (too)
half hearted (half-hearted)
g-string (G-string) (3)
when every (night) (-that is) (it) varies (AWKWARDLY EXPRESSED!!!!)
large D cup (IS THERE SUCH A THING AS A SMALL D CUP????)
mater Hun (matter hon) (3)
get changes (changed)
old fashion (fashioned)
Neon (neon)
bodies of the stripper (strippers)
laying on my side (lying)
Machine (machine)
Hurts (hurts)
Stops (stops)
A vice (a)
hit's me (hits)
with out (without)
round about (roundabout)
Sis (sis) (4)
he hold me (holds)
He cum (came)
its Kevin (it’s) (2)
every thing (everything)
Fuck you Fairy (fuck)
child like (childlike)
knell down (kneel)
what ever (whatever)
to bad (too)
over powering (overpowering)
some times (sometimes)
In minuets (minutes)
large breast (breasts) (3)
apartment is quite (quiet)
Mom (mom)
Mother (mother)
few give away (giveaways)
tart and sweat (sweet)
tip pinto (into)
his lip's (lips)
Tattoo (tattoo)
rose pedals (petals)
me hole (my)
lovers cock (lover’s)more...
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