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The one thing I did learn about writing is that it's a hell of a lot of work. After spending countless hours, writing, correcting mistakes, rewriting, self-editing, rewriting because I tend to become wordy and rewriting again to meet Literotica requirements for submittal (Yes, my first submittal and I screwed up), I feel I have finally polished the work.
I will let the readers determine whether I have any skill to continue this dream. If you enjoyed the story, let me know. If you didn't, then tell me my errors and how I should improve upon them. Regardless, I'm fully aware I need to improve and still have much to learn. Perhaps if people enjoy this story, I will write more, more, and who knows where it goes from there. This is my first story submittal to Literotica. Enjoy and thanks for your support.
- COMMENTS
Slutsonxxxmomalmost 3 years agoI'm having a great time here in the middle of my mother's living room with her computer. I know that I am a pervert maybe more than you know. I am not going to sell the pictures of my mom I secretly took the day I got my step dad high on meth and discuss with him how much it would be so nice to sexually debase and humiliate my mom . I remember that day and we are going to continue to use my mom in ways that are sexually and morally wrong. He is a good step dad and I have been a lot more meaner to Mom. I love it so much when we make sure her pussy is hanging out with no panties and her neighbor came out to watch me butt fuck her. Please put together a story about Debbie, Dan, and Danny.
Slutsonxxxmomabout 3 years agoI'm fixing the most beautiful thing to get a new host in my house and she's my mom. I was just wondering if you are available to get together with me and I will send you a picture of the family room and my friends are going to have a lot of fun with my mom and my mom is a in the upstairs bedroom with Dan my friends Dad and I will talk with him about something like this is going to have a great impression of speed and Viagra. It's not only your fault I didn't get a chance to get the guys high on speed but I've got a lot for Mom. He got the family room ready and the other guys and I will talk to my mom and she will get a new dick to suck the moment she swallow and gasped and choking
Anonymousover 3 years agoI personally have just started writing, and it is a long road for all of us. You will notice that your story becomes better and better as you keep writing, like it happens for most of us. Your work is great and is giving me thoughts of writing erotic fiction as some...practice.
Keep Writing!
Jackspeed2uover 3 years agoThis is crazy. I LOVE IT.. yeah Jacob should have some karma for getting his mum reprogrammed. Goes to show that you should be careful what info you give away on online surveys.
Now part 2.
