They made the rounds of handshakes, hugs, and kisses with the rest of their friends.
Finally Ed was settled on a loveseat under the cabana awning with Grace sipping cool and sweet sangrias while they watched the kids play, supervised by Rachel, Zoe, and Sophia. They were surrounded by their extended family. He thought back to the days when it was just Shirley, Grace, and him and realized how much happier he and Grace were now.
Back then he'd been excited about graduating and starting his new job with Mr. Drakos, hoping he'd make enough to support Grace going back to school. He had never expected all this!
Most of all he hadn't dared believe Grace would ever love him as much as he loved her. He certainly never expected to fall in love with Rachel and the others. He realized just how far he'd come. From the lonely boy who lost the love of the one person who meant the most to him to the man, loved so much by so many. A tear escaped and ran down his cheek and Grace caught the motion.
"What's wrong?" she asked in concern as she gently wiped it away.
He looked to her and smiled. "Nothing. Absolutely nothing. I don't think I've ever been happier! How did all this happen?"
Grace snuggled in against him and smiled up at his look of wonder. "Because you're a good man Ed, a generous and exciting lover, and a great father. And you didn't need an example of how to be a good dad. You set the standard. Other dads need to walk a mile in your shoes."
Ed heard her words and saw her conviction but he still didn't really understand.
But that was ok. He knew Grace would help him understand and as long as he had her love everything else was a bonus.
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The best of all time.. (seriously)
Everything in this series is top-notch, excellently written, good thing is that its not straight forward like other stories (totally driven by Lust) and too much LOVED by me...even if it contained 200 pages I would read it (3 times!!)...
Looking forward *eagerly* for next chapters....more...
Excellent series!
So when Carolyn gave her acceptance speech, why wasn't it mentioned that Ed discovered how to discipher the tattoo?
Not that it matters, great reading.
so good
Usually more than two or three pages and I lose intetest, but I've read and loved all three of these!
Great read
Plenty of twists to the story keep up the good work
Great series
I have to say for being such a long read you did fantastic. The sex was well written, I personally appreciated not having to much kink or any thing that would really make the story seem greatly outlandish. Grammatically there were minimal errors if any. I might have noticed a character mix up or 2 but for all 3 series being upwards of 90 pages, holy crap you were on point. My favorite characters were Zoe and Stephanie. I would have loved their stories to have been a little more to the front. Congrats on a job very well done. I must say at this point I can't wait to peruse your other works.
Voted 5 stars not a single point deducted because these 3 pieces were well written and, for me, I could see there was a lot of time and creativity invested here.more...
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