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Click herePlease vote and comment. It makes this smutty girl ever so happy when you do.
Go on, lay some sugar on me.
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Very interesting style and I love the endings - Dirty Train Girl and this one. Will read and share with others your address on Literotica.
Oh my gosh! How did I know? I just knew it was going to turn out that way! Amazing.
Oh how Nikki needs an oral lesson from Miss Kitty.
Please??
You started with a tutorial and ended by making it the best crafted story I've read since my Frank Barone comment. Thank you!!!
Dear Anonymous,
Yes I did go and read the story you suggested. It was one of those well crafted little tales that made me think. Resonant (and not entirely likeable - the hardest to write I think) and complex characters in such a short tale is a very difficult thing to do. I don't normally read LW as the wives aren't so loving and the commenters make me both rage and despair at their toxic misery. I left a comment and already got a LW feedback from it. I won't head back into LW territory again for some time, I don't have the armor for it. I'm too soft, I get too easily engaged by the sad and crazy.