- Transgender & Crossdressers
- Tricked!
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Click hereRachel laughed at her friend's joke, and tipped her head back to take a sip of her beer. Her long black hair spilled down her back as she did so, its shine contrasting with her scuffed leather jacket. Hearing the door to the bar open, she put down her beer mug and looked over her shoulder. Steve behind her gave a low whistle. Rachel had to agree.
The woman entering the bar wore a tight fitting, long red evening dress. The slit up the side gave a look at a long slender leg. The low cut in the front gave a tantalizing view of her ample cleavage. Tall heels gave more curve to her already impressive ass. The newcomer's eyes took in the attention of the bar with a hint of a smile.
"She's back," Tim mentioned, with a hint of regret. Rachel gave him a questioning look.
"Back...?" she asked, trailing off a bit. Rachel had not remembered seeing this woman come into he bar before.
"Yeah," Steve interjected, leaning back in their booth, "She's been in a few times, you weren't here. She shoots down everyone who comes close. You're welcome to try." Steve's smug assuarance and the amused looks of her friends told Rachel that they had tried and failed to impress the tall, red headed beauty who had descended into their crummy dive bar. Rachel watched as the woman accepted a glass of red wine.
"Maybe I will." Rachel said, throwing back the last of her beer, "Watch and learn boys." she exited the booth and headed towards the bar to a chorus of groans and taunts from her friends.
"Hey Sarah," Rachel said to the bartender, "Can I get a couple shots of whiskey?" the bartender complied as Rachel caught the newcomer's eye and gave her a smile. The redhead gave her an inviting smile back. Rachel collected her shots and headed down the bar.
"Hey there, I'm Rachel, I took the liberty of buying you a shot." Rachel gave the woman her most winning smile.
"Well, that's very kind of you, I'm Michelle." The woman extended her hand, which Rachel shook, then slid one shot glass down the bar towards Michelle. "Bottoms up." Both women took a shot, Michelle wincing heavily.
"Not used to whiskey?" Rachel asked faux sweetly, batting her eyes. Michelle laughed.
"No, no I am not." Michelle replied, laughing, and still wincing. "That's a little harsh."
"Well, if you're more used to going home with a beautiful woman, we could try that." Rachel said with a smile. Michelle paused and looked Rachel up and down, taking in her slender frame, but wide hips, perky breasts, her smiling brown eyes and pale skin.
"Yeah, I think that would work a lot better." Rachel smiled at this, threw some cash down on the bar for her tab, and then looked over her shoulder with a smirk as her friends groaned.
"Come on, my place isn't far." Rachel said as she put one hand on Michelle's hip and led her from the bar.
The night was cool as the two women walked down the street. Flirting and exchanging small talk, slightly nervously as one does with a relative stranger that you are going home with. Seeing a small alley off to the side Rachel dragged Michelle down it.
"Here, this is far enough for now," Rachel said with a giggle, pushing Michelle up against the wall gently. She leaned for a kiss, which Michelle eagerly returned. Opening her mouth to Rachel's tongue she moaned a little bit, sliding her hands up Rachel's back. Rachel pushed her tongue hungrily into Michelle's mouth, hands sliding up and down Michelle's hips, sliding up her stomach and squeezing her breasts.
Rachel became more forceful, kissing down Michelle's neck, sliding one of her hands up the slit down the side of Michelle's dress and up her smooth, toned leg. Sliding slowly up Rachel's hand hit something she was not expecting, and stopped dead, her eyes going wide.
"Whoops." Michelle said with some amusement. "Looks like you found me out." Rachel did not know what to say as she felt a cock hardening in her hand. She tried to stammer out something, but Michelle just shoved Rachel back against the other alley wall, causing her to stumble and fall onto her ass. Rachel scrambled onto her knees, but Michelle stepped forward and used her knees to pin Rachel's shoulders to the wall.
"Is this your first time with a girlcock? Or maybe any cock?" Michelle asked mockingly as she hiked up the front of her skirt, letting her hardening clit out. Rachel nodded, angrily glaring up at Michelle.
"Yes! Get that fucking thing out of my face!" Rachel spat, but then winced as Michelle just slapped her in the face with the girlcock and laughed.
"No, I think this little bitch deserves this fucking thing IN her face." Michelle said with relish. As Rachel opened her mouth to respond, Michelle shoved her girlcock into Rachel's mouth. "Now suck on it, little bitch." Rachel glared at her, so Michelle shook her head and just pushed her hips forward, sliding her cock in and out of Rachel's mouth. Rachel tried to escape, but she had no leverage, and her head was pinned against the alley wall.
"Come on honey, you're going to have to work harder, or I'm going to do the work for you." Michelle said mockingly. Rachel felt anger rise in her, and then a little puke as Michelle shoved her girlcock down Rachel's throat. Rachel choked and gagged, drooling on herself, fighting the urge to throw up. Michelle pumped her girlcock in and out a few more times.
"That's more like it slut. You're such a good little cocksucking bitch." Michelle said with a laugh. "You like that? You going to work a little harder?" Rachel just glared, but was eager for the respite, she weakly nodded and began to suck.
She was not good at it, but she tried, sliding her lips up and down Michelle's girl cock. She could not take much of it in her mouth, and Michelle sighed.
"You're going to have to do better than that, or I'm going to have to take over again!" Michelle said mockingly. Rachel whimpered and picked up her pace. She tried to keep her lips sealed around the thick shaft in her mouth. She tried to lick the underside while she sucked, desperately trying to please the throat invading girlcock to spare herself the abuse. But Michelle was not having it.
"Nice try slut, but not good enough." Michelle savagely rammed her girlcock down into Rachel's throat, and held her head there. Rachel whined and struggled, feeling herself gag, her eyes watering as ropes of spit flew out around Michelle's girl dick. Rachel's face went red as she couldn't breathe, trying to push Michelle away. Just as she thought she might pass out Michelle backed off.
Michelle pulled her spit covered cock out of Rachel's mouth and Rachel gasped for breath. Michelle slapped her cock heavily across Rachel's face several times and laughed.
"You look like a total whore you know Rachel. Spit all over your face, a face getting slapped by a girlcock. Do you feel like a whore?" Michelle asked, matter of factly.
"Yes..." Rachel squeaked out as the cock slapped her again.
"Say it louder whore!" Michelle shouted. Rachel whimpered.
"I feel like a whore!" Rachel shouted hoarsely back, on the verge of tears, her earlier defiance quickly gagged out of her. Michelle sneered and used her cock to smear spit and some precum all over Rachel's face.
"Yeah, I bet you do, you dumb little slut." Michelle shoved her girlcock back into Rachel's mouth, finding no resistance. Slowly at first, but picking up speed Michelle fucked Rachel's face. Rachel was disgusted to hear the squelching of her spit as Michelle's cock slammed in and out of her throat. Rachel gagged again, and again, feeling helpless as Michelle pounded her throat.
"You have such a pretty little face. It looks like it's been blown up by a cock, but it's pretty." Michelle said, not breaking her pace. "I bet I can make it prettier though." Michelle pulled her cock from Rachel's mouth with a pop, and started jerking it aimed towards Rachel's face.
"No no no no!" Rachel whined as she realized what was about to happen, but she could not do anything about it as cum erupted from Michelle's dick onto her face. Thick ropes of it splattering across her cheeks, lips and nose. She felt it glue one eye shut and splash into her hair. Michelle continued jacking off until the last bit of cum had dripped out, dribbling chunks of sperm down Rachel's chin and onto her cleavage.
"Now that's a pretty little whore face." Michelle said with some satisfaction, pushing her cockhead against Rachel's lips. Rachel meekly opened her lips and sucked the last drop of cum out. "Good little whore." Michelle said cheerfully. Pulling out her cock, Michelle straightened her dress.
"Well sweetheart, that was fun. I will see you later." Michelle smiled down at Rachel, and then left the alley.
Rachel waited a moment, then ran out of the alley for home, and wondered why her panties were soaking wet.
- COMMENTS
DianeRedfernover 7 years agoYou caught me by surprise here, not about Michelle having male parts but about her raping Rachel's mouth. Well written, you are a very talented writer - but it just turned too angry for me.
GrrrreatImaginationalmost 9 years agoAs you've already deduced from previous comment, this story should be categorised in NonConsent/Reluctance.
This was a sexual assault story. You told it from the perspective of the victim, and you clearly chose to describe her non-consent and revulsion. While you did a good job of that, and provided good dialogue, there isn't any doubt that it should be in the NC/R category.
I had hoped that you would allow the victim to discover some attraction, or the rapist to discover some compassion. As long as you are in the NC/R category, please consider adding a second chapter where the roles are reversed. I'd love to see the whole gang explain the situation to the rapist.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoNo there is not a country called lesbia but there is a Greek island in the northeastern Aegean called Lesbos and I believe its people were originally called Lesbians. This is neither mockery or homophobism, just thought I'd answer the question.
Heisenhugover 9 years agoI just want to add to Irving's reply, which I completely agree with, a correction that needs to be addressed for anyone that missed it.
Anon, you claim this story was written by a bisexual woman. You are wrong on all accounts, the story's fingerprint gives a fairly high confidence that the author is a straight male, possibly not married, I'd guess at late 20s but more likely mid thirties or older. Likely American, at least a half decent education, not enough data to infer religion or ethnic background. Definite transphobe, almost as certainly homophobe to some degree.
Why do I say that? Let's see...
Setting is a dive bar, fairly low grade but not the worst. The description and terms are pretty classically American (or possibly Canadian, too much overlap). Kind of place you go to pickup chicks or drown your sorrows.
Rachel is written as the stereotypical hard drinking butch/tom boy lesbian. Slight predatory leaning in her pickup routine. Basically she's the kind of "female behaving male" that seems popular in some groups of bigots. She /could/ be a feminists creation except for her behaviour in the alley. No woman or gay person would write a lesbian character getting turned on by that scene. That kind of nonsense is solely the domain of the breed of scum who are convinced lesbians can be cured by a good cock. That solidifies the straight male homophobe to near certainty.
There's also supporting evidence in the form of her not fighting back. In the position described she would have had no problem grabbing Michelle's balls and doing enough damage to incapacitate her attacker. Men tend not to write that sort of move, a woman hasn't the same instinctive reaction. I suspect most women wouldn't write that kind of capitulation to rape either.
Then there's the stereotype near the beginning of "she's rejected our advances and thus must be a lesbian". It's cleverly framed by it being only implied in Rachel's behaviour, but still clearly present. That type of thinking usually points to three kinds of egotistical make who can't conceive a woman might not be interested in him, and also tends to suggest college age or within 20 years over, roughly how long it takes for that conceit to be slapped out. There's no feeling out or clues to indicate sexuality beyond this point, which in itself is terrible writing imo.
The suspicion of not being married is tenuous, but the boozing and pickup portion has enough familiarity to be plausible.
Let's move on to all the things wrong about Michelle, it's quite the list:
- most real transwomen would likely avoid the bar described, and definitely be more hesitant about picking people up there. There's too much risk of violence in the setup given. This isn't a solid generalisation, but it's good enough to reduce plausibility.
- that dress. Red evening dress, low cut, high slit. Heels mixed in. Nice, but totally out of place. In real life you'd be thinking "that's weird, what's she doing in here?". Girls trying to pass don't call attention to themselves like that, they don't raise doubts that would look for a focus.
- lack of purse or handbag. Could just be overlooked, but there's some implications that point at the author not thinking about it at all, suggesting male.
- accepting drinks from strangers... Paranoia over spiked drinks should be on every womans mind when out solo.
- literally almost everything in the alley scene is wrong, some lesser issues include a lack of gaff (essential for that dress type) and being able to pin Rachel's shoulders with her knees while still having her mouth at crotch level (impressive move).
- I find it questionable that the whole pinned by knees thing would work anyway. You're very limited in how much force you can apply in that particular position due to leverage and balance issues. Plus it's murder on the thighs and calves.
- feminising hormones decrease sperm amount and thickness, as well as reducing erectile function in most cases, though not always.
- rapists don't normally encourage their victims to shout.
I could go on, but the pattern is "transwomen according to someone with no experience" ... Though the consistent use of "girl cock" suggests familiarity .
I could continue but I think I made my point. It's all statistical analysis and profiling. It could be wrong, in part or in sum, but there's so little contra indication that I'm happy with my guesses. Sure, a good author can write characters and scenes that don't reflect their experiences, but this guy isn't trying that hard and even good authors tend to write best when they write what they know.
Fiction is very powerful, it can let us see the real world with small and believable changes. Sure you can write a story on the premise "what if humans could fly" but I think there's more enjoyment to be had in "what if there was no hate or violence" and similar.
Besides, I find consent supremely sexy.
IrvingParkeover 9 years agoNon-Consent/Reluctance would have been a good fit for this story. Get over YOUR self. You don't have the right to tell the readers here what their opinions can and cannot be. Most of us who have a love and appreciation for transwomen do NOT find it to be either erotic or even acceptable that vile, untrue and despicable stereotypes are reinforced, even in fiction. Perhaps ESPECIALLY in fiction, since that's where they're most often found and upheld, then taken by the reader an incorrectly applied to the real world. Granted, no one expects any real social change to be affected by an erotic literature web site, but let's not pretend that impressionable minds aren't reading this crap and taking it to be truth. It's attitudes like the ones expressed in and created by this story that spur violence against and even murder of trans individuals. That cannot be allowed to continue without protest, and those of us who know better WILL speak out against it whether you like it or not.
