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Tru bucked and yelled "Oh god...Oh god...im gonna cum...Im gonna cum before you fuck me."
Kelly continued to lick her and Tru came in Kelly's mouth for the first time as her lover. Kelly got up and slid the cock inside of Tru and began to fuck her fast. "ooooohhhahahooohh...Fuck my pussy..fuck it hard." Tru screamed.
Kelly began to thrust in and out harder and harder. She looked down and saw Tru's cum covering the cock. "God, baby you covered the cock in cum." Kelly told her.
The two girls collapsed in a heap, kissing and hugging one another as only true lovers would.
Today is exactly 10 years after their first sexual tryst. Tru still looks back every now and then with fondness towards Cindy and her lesson in pleasing a woman. Tru and Kelly are still together and their love for each is just as strong as it was the first time they admitted their love for one another.
- COMMENTS
obiwan45over 15 years agoHellboy, I enjoyed your first submission. Wonder how you decided on the characters names. Did you choose them from among women you have known or possibly hope to get to know?
Since I'm a bit OCD about punctuation and grammar I had to knock off one star. I do realize the erotic content is the most important aspect though so I did enjoy it.
The length was just about right too. Longer stories tend to get me bogged down, so I appreciate how other writers break their stories up into serialized chapters.
Keep writing.
Vikingboyover 15 years agoThere are about six chapters crammed into one here. The character of Tru shows some promise, but you need to work hard to develop her. Try taking the first episode (moving in & meeting kelly) and expand it into a stand-alone. Explore the young women & let them come to life. Let them lead you.....
Anonymousover 15 years agoThe story is a bit all over the place...and who the heck is Angie? she pops up a few times....
