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Click hereShe smoothed the wrinkles out of her blouse as she looked at a smiling, innately satisfied woman she almost didn't recognize. Switching off the main lights, Julia left the room, excited to see the amazing man she called her husband, best friend and lover yet again, and very anxious find out what he had retrieved from his suitcase.
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Constructively....there are some rough patches, transitions and under developed points in your story. But it is also a very sultry look into your story telling style. Cheers!!
This needs a score higher than 5. The best story I have read on Literotiva. Wonderful buildup, fantastic descriptions, and the perfect ending with them being husband and wife. Loved it. MORE!
...wonderful, erotic, well written engaging story.
Thanks for sharing.
So well written and luscious. Why have there been no more? You paint so well and beautifully......