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Eddie gestured to the suitcase. "You know what I expect you to wear. Leave your overcoat in the van and wear the white coat I brought for you."
She nodded her assent.
Eddie climbed out of the back of the van and walked around the van, opening the locks with the remote. Climbing into the drivers seat he threw Joan's clothes into the passenger seat. Opening the small panel that allowed him to use the rear view mirror to see into the back of the van he saw Joan moving quickly, apparently getting dressed.
He smiled to himself and put the van in gear. It was going to take about 30 minutes to get where they were going. Eddie looked at the clock on the dashboard. 'Shit' he thought. They were running later and later.
End of chapter 4
- COMMENTS
MasterBlogmanover 3 years agoArrghhh. This was posted in 2012. It's now 2021 and you haven't posted any more of the story? No fair!
sexkitten11011over 11 years agoThis story is amazing! I loved the mixture of humorous undertones with the erotic plot. You actually made me laugh when he accidently got anti-freeze on his balls. And the complex character development throughout the stories is really impressive. I'm so jealous of Joan though, why can't Eddie pay me a visit like that? :P
5/5 stars, awesome read!
graymangazerover 11 years agoI really liked this story, the basic plot is not new (but what is these days) but there are a couple of nice twists: not least Eddie being a nerd and a bit of a beginner to the experience himself. most stories of this ilk have a strong confident master so this makes a pleasant change. Joan sounds like a sexy submissive woman but I would love to know more about her, what she hopes to get from this? and her thoughts and emotions when she submits.
I can`t wait to find out what Eddie has planned after the twelve hours.
good stuff, thanks.
Anonymousover 11 years agogotta have more NOW !!!!!!!! no more waiting !! that was a twist, no wait that was a double twist, eddie being a blk man, thats good one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PERFECTO !!!!!!!!
