"You did leave a path of destruction, didn't you," Lisa whistled.
"The most remarkable of all -- now that I've gotten my revenge, I've also forgiven them, and will have few conscious thoughts of any of the four of them ever again," I gushed.
"I'm going to write an article for Psychology Today about you," Lisa laughed, "now give me your last check for $400 and get the hell out of here. I have patients who actually need my help."
My all day grin got even bigger when I hugged Jennifer that night and kissed her belly. I swore to myself that MY family was not going to be dysfunctional; MY branch of the Compton family was going to be ultra-functional!
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Different twist
I did read it all the way through. Though I would say it is not your best work, it was very interesting.
Imhapless
I agree, while incest isn't my preferred subject, the author was right in not saying anything. The shock value was worth the three paragraphs of discomfort......
very twisted, but......
This is a very twisted tale, but you are still not the King of Twisted.
Crown Prince may well be within your reach though.
Well done!
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I really loved the story, due to me feeling his pain, but I don't believe the revenge is complete, in my opinion Brett needs get all of the family together, with DNA proof that the girl they paid off didn't have his kid, then tell them all face to face he was the one that ruined their lives, an after telling his new wife about what he did, then showing them his family, an they get it rubbed in their faces on a daily basis, how he is a better person at being in a family, then they ever were to him, that to me is how the revenge should be concluded, with the bad family having to eat shit humble pie for the rest of their miserable lives, revenge is best when it is on-going.more...
I need to respond to the last comment -- the author
I rarely respond to comments, but feel compelled to. The last commentator complained that I didn't warn about incest. I did -- look at the tags for a story before reading it! Secondly, if I put information about the incest at the beginning it would have taken away from the story.more...
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