Peter Rusk gently covered his sleeping charge delighting in the fine body before his eyes. He knew that Elena would still give him trouble but, he felt that this first day would be the hardest for both of them. Tomorrow would be hard at first. Peter knew that Elena would hate herself in the morning for having allowed herself to be massaged off to sleep. She would no doubt turn that anger outward and scream invective at him but Peter had made impressive inroads this day. Smiling at himself, and positive that the woman's full capitulation was not too far off in the future, Peter Rusk quietly let himself out of his slave's room and doused the lights and television. He still had much work to do before he could even think of turning in. When he did sleep he knew that his mind would be visited by visions of this intoxicating slave.
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This is wonderful so far,
I'm glad brutal force isn't used too readily. Keep up the great writing.
And the people if this story is not for u don't bitch just read a diff one. lit has thousands to choose from
Who the f*#k cares if you use his full name???? What the f*^k is he doing to her?
what follows is
disturbing
disgusting
degrading
and
demeaning
to anyone who follows this path
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I hope she does change so the story goes on but I really hope she holds out on him with anything to do with sex for most of the year just to show him as well that he cant control everything that would make thing interesting lol and no punishment in regards to it cause it would make him go back on his word about being a rapistmore...
regarding some of the comments
I like to see her conform at some point only to at the end of her yr spit in the face of peter and shank her uncle. I think he is up to no good and there is some trust or other moneys that she does not know of and with peter having POA the uncle is robbing her blind. Ha!more...
Interesting
I again agree with dropping Peter Rusk and simply using Peter. Although your story is good you spoil it with inconsistent spelling errors. For example Peter was going to bring her some salve but later it comes along as some slave. You need to proof your writing before finally submitting. Read it through mark the changes needing to be made and then read through again until you have the story that satisfies you.more...
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