I sputtered up blood when the person yanked the shard out of my chest. I'm pretty sure I thanked the person, maybe heard a chuckle and then fell into a horrifying sleep.
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finish what you started
Come on.. It's been a month almost.. It was a great start but it's time to take it further.. I am dying to know what happens next... Waiting for your next chapter eagerly..
When is it to go on?
next week is over ....
Hmmmmm, showing them murdering some poor guy probably wasn't the best way to elicit sympathy, also just calling people food makes me want to sharpen the 'ol stakes.
Patience is a virtue
Please give me some time. Chapter 2 is underway and will be submitted by next week.
Thank you for understanding!
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your like so Meany others , you can not finish what you start.
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