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With that, Cullen stood up, and bid Glynis a goodnight. Glynis then followed Cullen to the door, ready to shut it behind him. If they just turned around, they both would have seen the tear that streaked down Angel's cheek slowly.
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Authors Note:
I am sorry for making this chapter shorter than the others, but I felt this was the perfect spot to stop for the time being. I will currently try to start the next chapter later this evening!
I hope you have enjoyed this chapter. What do you think is going to become of Cullen and Angel? I know that Cullen will have to go through Hell to get back to Angel's good graces. But could you really blame her?
- COMMENTS
spearishabout 11 years agoThis just getting ridiculous.She's fallen down the stairs and has a head bump but he doesn't think to call a doctor to get her checked out ?.Then he blames her when he knows they both have enemies .It's turning in to a complete farce .He isn't protecting her one but as far as I can see and if I was her I'd be on the first plane home!
Anonymousabout 11 years agochapter 10 ends with them returning from a picnic (which apparently never happened)
because of the darkness. later, after the stairs incident, she goes out and rides off into the NIGHT on a giant horse she has never ridden? her being an "expert" shows YOUR lack of knowledge of riding a horse: you stated that she rode horses ONLY when on vacations (her family barely makes ends meet! ) , and that makes her an "expert" ?
i guess in wolfworld night becomes day with the wave of an arm, and wishing for something (a horse to ride) makes her an expert. forget the "eerie music" : you need an editor, quickly!!
Anonymousabout 11 years agothe absolute absurdity that Cullen would accuse her of "slipping" is so unrealistic! . he should be aware that angel is in danger-actually, he tends to put her in it more than not. he seems to have all the characterisitics of a low-ranking follower--and this is the alpha? when does he plan to show leadership, insight, or any constructive behavior? "eerie music" : that is about the only cliche this "story" lacks : its characters, their development, the plot's events and pacing, and especially the awful grammar just washes out what could be a good story. every writer has to start somewhere; every GOOD writer has a GOOD editor.
goodwillmagicover 11 years agoIt was his witch (with a capital B) stepmother who planted the idea that she slipped. Just another example of how his stepmother truely is.
EuphoriaSlam69over 11 years agoWorst Alpha EVER!!!!!!!! Still can't stop reading this series though :) !
