Unqualifiedly Datable Ch. 01

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"I'm Jay, I'm Danny's brother, you so much as hurt a hair on his pretty little head I will make you wish you were never born," I said it as I stood to my full height, quite a bit taller than him and way bigger.

Cameron's eyes widen and he nodded mutely, "Yes, Sir," He said watching me curl back in the booth. "Um, would you like to dance some more?" He asked Danny looking out the corner of his eye at me. Danny nodded and they headed back to the dance floor.

Awhile later I snorted loudly when I heard the DJ play Stephen by Kesha. That was just the cherry on the tip of the ice berg that was starting to chill my heart. I realized just how much I liked Chris then. I wouldn't be able to ever forget him, I wouldn't say I loved him but oh how I wanted him.

Shit, I needed something stronger. I walked up to the bar and ordered a whiskey neat. I tossed it back and smiled as it burned down my throat. I ordered another, and then turned towards the dance floor to check on Danny. What I saw made the glass slip from my hand and shatter when it hit the floor.

Chris!

to be continued...

hope you liked this story I will continue on with it but if you really like it keep bugging me about it and i will surely get more chapters posted fast... the more comments i get back about a story the more im interested in finishing it.

Thanks!

ARI

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great start

I love college stories.

geseendgeseendover 13 years ago

can't leave this hanging here. there has to be more to it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More please

Omg great start I really can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

hope that you continue this story line because it has alot of character. i want to know how it ends

WickedWendyDruWickedWendyDrualmost 14 years ago
Unqualifiedly Realistic

Very nicely characterized. You've breathed life and depth into your characters and I'm definitely interested in seeing where they go from here and what happens. The whole "I'm begging to bust out of my closet" thing is a little shopworn, but that's because it's so terribly, unfortunately true. You'd think in the 21st century we'd be beyond it, but alas... So, kudos. I really enjoyed reading it and will keep an eye out for more. Good luck with the story, or series as it may become. I, for one, would like to see some real adventure take hold in the life of our blood-bounces-on-ice-boy.

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