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Barry collapsed on the bed next to her, and for once she felt relaxed, unburdened. And then they heard the garage door open. Next to her, Barry groaned. There had not been time fore Audrey and Ben to make it into the village at all, which meant something had forced them back to the house.
It was, it turned out, a tree that had fallen, blocking the only road back to civilization.
- COMMENTS
luv_romanceabout 12 years agowhere is the next chapter? do not wait years again. thanks. :)
Epixrysonabout 12 years agoThe story is amazing, describing the consequenses of her past insecurities .
Very well written ,can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymousabout 12 years agois a dirty douche-bag.
The sooner Barry dumps her the better off he will be.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoSo.. i saw how you wait several years before you update.. and i hope that is not the case again!! otherwise it will be 2014 or 2015.. Which would totally suck! I really like this story.. and i feell soooo bad for Esme.. and I am sooo worried what will happen when Barry finds out.. UGHHHH... i was sooo hoping she would tell him to stop.. I hope Barry doesn't leave her.. That incident what her fault and it wasn't.. But.. i do feel sorry for her.. I hope you UPDATE ! sooon!! i need to know what happens!! and i dont want her with Ben or end up alone.. I want her with Barry.. sooo please please PLEASE! do Damage Control.. lol.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI have missed your awesome writing!
And I really hate Ben. He deserves every punch thrown his way.
Of course Esme isn't exactly innocent and as much as I love Esme and Barry I hope Barry stops seeing her with rose tinted glasses.
