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Click hereHis cock ached with need at the thought of having his way with her. Afterwards, he'd take great pleasure in draining her life force, the way he should have done centuries ago. She would die while he survived, and he would finally reap the reward of revenge for the broken heart she caused him then. Enraged, Alain threw his head back and released an eerie tormented shriek into the deserted night.
To Be Continued....
- COMMENTS
CharismaKover 13 years agoAuthorHello! Thank you all for your feedback on this story. I just submitted part 2 of this story this evening, and I do hope you will enjoy.
PennLadyover 13 years agoI like this vampire, he's different from many. There were a couple of awkward things though -- like going from Melissa to Marlena. Deb handled Stephen pretty well, though. :)
canndover 13 years agoohhh i like this! what a cool plot. Is she supposed to be this woman reincarnated? Hopefully you'll clarify that. I can't wait to see what happens. I have a feeling he won't be prepared for his reaction to her. Will he fall in love with her again? Looking forward to more.
Abdulbenthereover 13 years agoI like the way you set the tone in chapter one.
My vampires are more monster than seducer, more animal-like, but they do enjoy torturing the victim's mind. More please
