Waking Up in Vegas

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JukeboxEMCSA
JukeboxEMCSA
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"Thank you, Mistress," Keiko whimpered as Jennie sagged down onto the sheets. "Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you--"

Jennie rolled over and put a finger to Keiko's lips, ending the mindless chant. "It's okay," she said. "It's okay. I'll keep you." She looked around. "But I can't tell mom and dad. I don't even know what I'm going to tell my cheerleading coach."

"Mistress has a certain amount of freedom, now," Keiko said. "Five million dollars will buy that. This unworthy slut has a certain amount of financial expertise she can put at your disposal, Mistress, and she believes that you can live quite comfortably without needing to worry about your parents' opinions. Or those of your school. You are of majority age, and as such can do what you like with your money."

Jennie furrowed her brow in disbelief. "So what, you think I should just drop out of school and spend all day hanging out with my live-in sex slave?"

Keiko shivered in pleasure. "Yes, Mistress. This unworthy slut adores the thought."

Jennie looked over at the briefcases. She looked at Keiko, naked and almost purring with pleasure. She looked at the opulent hotel room. She looked back at Keiko, kneeling between her thighs. "Um...I'm still not sure," she said, a smile growing on her face. "Maybe you need to convince me. You know, for my own good."

"Yes, Mistress," Keiko said, leaning down to lick at Jennie's pussy once more.

THE END

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This little yarn puts The Hangover to shame. You so accurately paint the picture of Jennie’s confusion at waking up in a strange hotel room, sharing a bed with an equally strange but beautiful woman.

You artfully unpack her memory of how she came to be there, accompanied by the transition of her emotions from confusion to disbelief. “Things like this don’t happen to people like me.”

Then you explore the final evolution: from disbelief to acceptance. As Jennie finally connects the dots with Keiko’s help, along with an orgasm to ease the transition, she becomes open to a future outside of the constraints of her previous life with Keiko as a bonus. You give us access to her thoughts and can feel Jennie’s post-orgasm contentment as her new life comes into focus.

I know you rarely do follow ups but seeing Jennie attend her tenth high school reunion accompanied by Keiko and her success would be so cool 😎 just to read your description of the reaction of her former cheerleading teammates.

Last note: you are the best short form writer on this website—full stop 🛑 and this one is in my personal top five of all the stories that you have written. Your economy of language is without peer.

MagicMouseMagicMousealmost 4 years ago

I've read this story countless times over the last eight years, and it still makes my giggle every time.

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Oh come on😢😢

This story is ripe with avenues you could take. She could decide too finish her education. So then she and kieko would need to come up with a plausible story about kieko tagging along. But with all that money she and her cohort can expand their imaginations. Think about it. 😘

farmer1000farmer1000over 8 years ago
Potential

I believe this story has a lot of potential. I would like to see if Jennie remembers any more of her night of gambling or if the Yakuza tries to get revenge.

Please continue the story.

magpie45magpie45over 8 years ago

i know it has been a long time but id love to know how Jennie and Jennie (unworthy slut ) have gotten on

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