Nothing was said about what had happened. It was obvious to both of us that this was not going to be a one off. We continue to enjoy each other and have done for some time. We have a "code" of shall we get a couple of bottles of wine for the weekend knowing what this meant. We experiment with different methods with the intention of pleasing each other as much as possible. We never know what the other is going to surprise us with but that just adds to the enjoyment.
As mentioned we never talk to each other about this relationship, we go about our normal daily routines and still enjoy our chats over the evening meal, just like we did before. I do not consider that I am having sex with my Mother just two adults giving each other pleasure, unless I am in denial? Although I still have a little thought that this is not right but can it be wrong if between consenting adults?
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A very good story!
Thank you for sharing this with us! It's very good!
Ignore the trolls
This is a very good story from a 1st time writer. For me, I need to feel the story is realistic to enjoy it. Please allow me to explain why I could only give you 4 stars. It was not realistic or logical for Mom to get out of bed, take a shower and get dressed before going back to fuck her son. I also missed the part where he became naked. The story itself is very believable but putting events in sequence would be helpful. Just consider if she had come into the living room, where he was waiting to watch the show, dressed like that. That would be a nice erotic scene to read as they undressed each other as they explored the other's bodies. As for the grammar; the writings of Mark Twain are a fine example of how well bad grammar can work for a story. I did not notice enough grammar goofs to be distracted.
Keep writing and ignore the trolls. My wife proofreads all my stories and as a final check , I read it out loud to her. Little things still get past her, but we catch most of them.more...
Good clear writing
Foldart, I am an English teacher, and I read your story with pleasure. It was well written, in my opinion, and I was enjoying it as the description of a personal experience, not a work of art. I was amazed to see all the harping about your poor grammar and spelling. Any mistakes are minimal and do not detract at all from the very clear, straightforward, easily understandable narrative. I agree with the person who commented about how realistic it seemed, not the overworked exaggerations of so many sex stories.
You described 2 very nice ordinary people who love each other simply as mother and son until they begin to experiment with sex. They didn't then just plunge into it in a fierce orgiastic scene, but they took their time, considered the morality and the consequences and decided that just making the other person happy was all that was important. Love is the major element, the true love that only a mother and son can quite experience, and the physical lovemaking adds so tremendously to their pleasure in life. Yes, mother/son incest between 2 good, truly loving people is the best sex (and love) that there can possibly be. So be proud of your work, Foldart--you deserve to be proud.more...
Spelling and grammar needs improvement.
You can improve your story by going back and proof reading for errors. There's too many spelling errors, grammar problems and run on sentences. The distraction of these multiple errors took so much away from your story. In short, it pissed me off trying to understand your writing.more...
P. S.
If I do not reply to e-mails is does not mean that I have not read them. I appreciate the time and effort and learn from all that is suggested, both positive and negative. Foldart.
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