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- COMMENTS
LingeringAfterthought7 months agoAuthorThanks for the feedback JMchar - 7 is going well, but it's challenging figuring out how to get a sex scene into it. You know, all: thing were hard, and then they got better, but there are still problems, and then appropos of nothing, random hot sex. It's hard to make it not feel forced. I'll figure it out. It's coming!!!
jmcharl17 months agoIt’s the character development. . .
We all start these chapter stories for the sex but we stay and return for more when the writing holds us. Your characters are becoming real.
I have gone from 4* to 5* per chapter but unfortunately the chapters have run out and I find myself wishing for more. 🥺
LingeringAfterthought8 months agoAuthorThanks, Anonymous! So, can you say what made this better for you? The short blurb format, the development of the relationship, the sexual appetizer buffet?
Anonymous8 months agoThis was the best chapter so far in my estimation. Others may have a different opinion, obviously. I eagerly await the next installment. Great writing!
