"You ready kiddo?"
"Yep, she replied." She grabbed an oversized shoulder bag and tossed it over one shoulder as she came out of her room. Jim relieved her of the bag. Jim told Ashley to go on to the truck. He would be down in a sec. She smiled brightly and winked at him as she went downstairs.
Jim walked into him and Rachel's room. She was still in bed. He came over to her side and leaned down and kissed her on her cheek. She woke up just enough. "Are you about to leave?"
"Yeah," Jim said. "Ashley's already waiting in the truck."
"Okay, enjoy your trip and keeping my fingers crossed for this deal with Marshall for you. I'll see you when you get back." She sat up just enough to kiss Jim good bye.
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It took Jim and Ashley about 30 minutes to get to the airport. By the time they got through security they had about a twenty minute wait before they were permitted to board. Once on board and in flight Jim noticed how happy Ashley was. Her face was beaming. She couldn't stop smiling. It made him happy to think that she was excited for this trip. The flight to Atlanta was uneventful.
They had a short layover and before they knew it they were back in the air headed to Aruba. The leg of the trip to Aruba from Atlanta was longer than the flight from Hartford to Atlanta. Four hours later, Ashley grabbed Jim's hand and squeezed tightly as she looked out the window as the pilot said,
"Ladies and gentleman, this is your Captain. We are beginning to make our descent into Aruba. We will be landing shortly. Once the plane landed and passengers began to disembark, Ashley held Jim's hand as they made their way off of the plane. Both of them eager for what this week ahead held.
... To be continued.
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How much longer?!!
I check back every day for part 3, dying to read it!!!
Great!
Looking forward to the next chapters... Thanks.
Excited!!
Omg. I'm soooooooo excited for part 3!!! Please hurry, the suspense is killing me. Xoxox
loved it
Love how yourr building it...love the cheating aspect of it. It would be hot for them to pretend theyre hubby and wife.
No side action for mom
Please no side action for Rachel. Pull a bait and switch. If she is carrying on an affair as well, it makes Ashley and her dad's less hot. It makes him look less desirable since she decided to cheat on him. It makes less sense when both spouses end up cheating on each other. Does it make sense that they desire each other less in their marriage and somehow are found more desirable by those not with them, both of them? It doesn't. This isn't the more the merrier, its the more there is then the more convoluted the story becomes and the more it distracts from dad and daughter which is written extremely well. It doesn't make sense to paint Ashley with this "awesome" body and then for some reason her mother, who seemed less attractive, is already in an affair herself. And it makes the previous chapter, not just this one, less about the main relationship. Its just a stupid distraction. When there is an affair, there is a wronged party, she doesn't have to be getting some elsewhere or find out about their incest either. Just stay focused only on Ashley and her daddy, please. I liked this story so much and now I don't know if I'll read the first one again. There's a reason why most film plots involving an affair do not have both spouses cheating, and in porn too, too much going on and it makes the original cheating less hot.more...
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