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Click hereHe gazed, almost comatose, between her legs, at the thinnest, sheer, white g-string stretched tightly against her most private of areas. The back part of the panties, coming and going into view, from the cool spring breeze lifting and lowering her almost tissue-like skirt, ran tightly between her supple, tanned buttocks. The string was so small he could actually see the pucker of her tight, immaculate anus. He had never seen one so perfect. The exact same color as her skin, no discoloration whatsoever.
He fought for another breath as he witnessed the thin, see-though material covering her vagina. He could see every nuance of his daughters' teenage pussy. It looked as smooth and hairless as the day she was born. He shivered in delight, following the thin, darkened line that ran from between her tight buttocks to the small, pink little button of her clitoris.
He knew, just barely between that fragile line, was something he had never seen before in his life. Something he should probably never see. And, for some reason, that made his excitement even more intense. He noticed a definite, small spot that seemed to shine in the bright morning sun light. Darker then the material surrounding it, Garrett assumed he might be right about the look that she had given him, moments ago.
At that moment he knew his thoughts had taken him to a place he didn't exactly think he should be. And it showed. Makayla turned her head, without rising, and locked on to her fathers' gaze. At first she didn't realize, but immediately knew he wasn't looking into her eyes.
She glanced almost nervously at the embossed erectness between his legs, then immediately back to his face. By that time, Garrett had met her gaze and was earnestly trying to find words to either apologize or make the incident fade as quickly as possible. But he couldn't.
"Wanna go for a little ride, Daddy?" Makayla finally broke the silence as she rose and turned to meet her fathers' straying look. Once again she glanced quickly to notice his erection hadn't subsided.
"Sure, let me run in and tell Mom we're leaving." Garrett sprinted inside, hoping the shock would wear off and his throbbing crotch would settle down. Like a horny teenage boy he thought about the 'ride' meaning more then it was.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI can't wait for it to happen. I love the description of his erection holding up the front of her skirt and when daddy peeks up her skirt while she's looking at her new car.
I checked out "eroticladywriter" and her one submission. Her writing needs a lot more work than yours does. "People in glass houses..."
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI can't wait until you nail that sweet pussy! Hot! I hope she turns into a hot little cock-slut!
nightshadowabout 17 years agoWhile, yes, there ARE a few small typos, the overall story-telling is superb. I loved it. And there's nothing at all wrong with a little build-up in a story. Take as long as you like to get to the "main event" and tell your story the way that feels most natural to you.<br><br>
Writing in the first-person is rarely easy. So far, though, I've got no complaints. I look forward to the next chapter!
eroticladywriterabout 17 years agoJust wanted to let you know that the concept of your story was a good one. But I have to tell you I found it hard to read because you take way too long to get to anything really interesting. Also you may want to watch your spelling and grammer mistakes. I didnt notice any big ones just small ones like you instead of your.
Jessi
