What You Wish For Pt. 05

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"Okay," she said. "Just remember you promised."

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by ImHappynBP09/01/16

They all have deliscious flaws

Damn, another interesting woman. The Goth chic is hard for me to understand because she lives in a world so different than mine. Still, I'm looking forward to seeing what makers her tick. Her sistermore...

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by ScorpioJJ08/05/16

Shouldn't matter how she dresses

Writers are artists just like musicians. No one cares how they dress.
Also, since when is a Tapas restaurant so upscale that anyone would care about some Goth/Hipster chick's clothes.

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by Anonymous08/03/16

I've read some of the other

comments and attempts to - I dunno what and I don't care, I like the story and don't need to understand why or what it could have been if it was a different story .. Scotty

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by Carnillia07/28/16

Good but.

It is getting tolong. Still well written. Still interesting but not so much. Too long and not enough plot the story is runing out of juice. But what really thrills me is your really superfial approachmore...

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by Drbeamer333307/06/16

Second time through...

Still five stars. Still love it. Him going with the editor is simply an unrealistic turn of events. He hooks up with Susan, and is ready to marry her after one weekend. But he moves on without sheddingmore...

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