"Okay," she said. "Just remember you promised."
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TheLoneStranger, arrowglass and 49 other people favorited this story!
Writers are artists just like musicians. No one cares how they dress.
Also, since when is a Tapas restaurant so upscale that anyone would care about some Goth/Hipster chick's clothes.
comments and attempts to - I dunno what and I don't care, I like the story and don't need to understand why or what it could have been if it was a different story .. Scotty
It is getting tolong. Still well written. Still interesting but not so much. Too long and not enough plot the story is runing out of juice. But what really thrills me is your really superfial approach to the main charcters feelings.
Let me give you and example: Why did Kristin changed her heart--- just because Randy left her... Her remorse - if real- is not believable. And he is willing considering taking her back based on what... past memories... and then while he is playing back and forth with her ex bitch wife he keeps smeeping with another women...
Sorry man, your charcters has no consistency. they look like horny teenagers, not grown ups.more...
Still five stars. Still love it. Him going with the editor is simply an unrealistic turn of events. He hooks up with Susan, and is ready to marry her after one weekend. But he moves on without shedding a tear. He has an incredible experience with Allie and builds her up to be this phenomenal woman, but then drops her over the baby secret (which was only a suspicion on the part of the ex wife). Then there is his ex . . . There is no chemistry between him and the editor, no hints of an attraction, and yet in one chapter he is totally committed. A little hard to swallow.more...
better with every chapter...can hardly wait to see what she wears to the party,,,,george
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