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They took a quick bath before Seshat offered to drop him off at his dorm. She did not want him to get into any trouble with his matron. So, giving her the pretext of feeling tired, Blaze made her fly him back. He wanted to hug and fondle her a little more.
Seshat gave a quick excuse to Ilona to get Blaze out of questioning before she took her leave. But not before promising him that if Fiora gave them permission, she would give him extra lessons whenever he wanted.
***
Blaze was lounging in the common room and thinking about meeting the headmistress, when a group of angels approached him. Unsurprisingly, Aahna and Bi were at the front.
"umm Blaze... can we ask you some questions?" Aahna asked hesitantly.
"Ask away" Blaze replied indolently. He was lying sideways on the couch, with his legs and head over its cushioned arms. He felt too lazy to get off his comfortable position.
"Why are you so smart and strong?" Aahna asked on behalf of all his classmates.
"Cause I'm 'mazing!" Blaze replied curtly. But knowing Aahna, he knew that her questions wouldn't end there.
For the next half hour, Blaze answered their questions about how he became so powerful, how he studied, which techniques he practiced, who his mother was, whether he thought he was going to become a deity and so on. He answered them casually, but he tried to be nice.
"ummm... Blaze Er?" Aahna asked after Blaze satisfied their curiosity. "Do you want to be the official class representative?"
Blaze was about to say no but a wayward thought made him pause. During their conversation, he realized that his classmates had started looking up to him. As a saying on earth went, jealousy is only evoked if your accomplishments are attainable. If they aren't, then you're admired.
He didn't really care about the responsibilities that came with being the class rep, but he did not mind the power that came with being a pseudo leader of Class 1A. Start out with an entourage of dedicated and brainwashed followers. Take over Azra-El. Muhahahahahaha. Ahem.
"Alright, listen up, you brats!" Blaze said, finally getting off his couch. "You will all, henceforth, call me Big Bro" he made his proclamation.
"What does that even mean?" Rachel asked from the side. She and the rest of the class had at some point joined the initial inquisitorial group.
"It has a similar meaning to an Elder Sister. Since I am a little different from normal angels, you will use this term" Blaze explained.
The angels nodded in acceptance. It was customary to add a prefix to someone significantly older or stronger than you. They didn't mind using a term like elder sister for Blaze.
"Aahna?" Blaze said softly, after their acknowledgement.
"Yes, Big Bro?"
"Just keep doing what you've been doing with the class. You make a good class rep. I won't interfere unless its necessary" Blaze hastily added before Aahna could even think of handing over her responsibilities.
***
Author's Note: What do you guys think of the massage scene? I have some experience in massages, so I was initially planning on writing a fully descriptive scene. I toned it down after I realized that it would become longer than the rest of the chapter.
And guys, feel free to make comments that you think can improve my writing and your experience of the story.
PS: Seshat is Egyptian
- COMMENTS
Anonymous12 months agoI am enjoying the world building, and the internal dialogues if Blaze. The sex scenes are also hot. I have two criticisms though regarding their timing and frequency.
First, there are so many sex scenes that I have started to skip them. It may be because I am binge reading the story, but it feels like there is relatively little pause between the sex scenes. Longer pauses between them would allow more coverage of the plot, and make the sex scenes more appealing when they happen.
Second, Blaze seems to "massage" everyone almost immediately after meeting them. Most times that we meet a character whose appearance is described as attractive to Blaze, we can reliably count on having a sex scene with within 1 chapter max. While there is a certain appeal to the idea of having sex with every attractive woman you meet, it starts to feel shallow. There is little buildup and we hardly know the character before sex occurs, so there is no emotional connection. As of now, the only characters I am attached to are Elyssa, Jie Er, and Rebecca.
colddieselover 1 year agoWhat makes the sex scenes work especially well is the sheer innocence of the Angels. They don't have to overcome centuries of guilt and a conscience as humans do.
Anonymousover 2 years agoYou should bring an Elementals into your story they are very powerful beings
Anonymousover 2 years agoI jerk off like horse to this potent stuff ...what you do mister with your words to make it so sensous? You must be the legendary zperm pen, the person who could make anyone cum with his ink blots
