The Azra-El Series Ch. 10

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A jolt of electricity shot down her spine as Claudis felt Blaze's hot breath down her cheek and neck.

He caressed her breasts and planted a soft kiss on her cheek. Brushing her hair aside with his chin, he gave her small ear a lick. Claudis eyes widened in surprise and her spine arched upright, as another jolt of electricity shot into her brain.

Blaze took her soft squishy earlobe between his lips and started wetly sucking on it. A tiny uncontrollable moan escaped Claudis' lips. Blaze was delighted by her reaction and his excitement surged. His idea of doing her while riding a Pegasus seemed to be giving him appropriate results.

He massaged, groped and fondled her breasts without inhibition and Claudis was putty under his ministrations. He circled her areolae with his fingers and lightly pinched them.

"Mmmm"

Claudis intuitively turned her head towards him and opened her lips. Blaze engulfed them with his own and pushed his tongue between her teeth to taste her. She wasn't sweet but tasted and smelled like lavender.

Claudis took his tongue between her lips and started sucking on him, while Blaze snogged on her thick crimson lips.

Slowly, he sneaked a hand from her breasts to her stomach. He caressed it for a moment before going lower. He flicked her nub and she moaned into his mouth, pushing her tongue into his in response.

As their lips and tongues intertwined, Blaze played around with her clitoris, flicking and lightly pinching it. He felt a warm dampness from below and he slid his finger down her slit. He cupped her groin and caressed it along its length before penetrating her.

"Aaaagh" Claudis groaned loudly, pulling away from their kiss. Her hoarse voice contrasted her expression, but Blaze loved it.

Blaze immediately attacked her neck; kissing, licking and sucking all along its length and giving her multiple hickeys. Suddenly, without any warning, Blaze spread his mouth at the intersection of her neck and shoulder and bit her.

Claudis shuddered. Instead of feeling pain, waves of electricity spread from her neck and throughout her body and converged into the pit of her stomach. She splashed Blaze's fingers with her warmth.

"Can you get into the position used when dashing?" Blaze asked a panting Claudis. She turned to look into his lustful eyes and nodded. Her eyes reflected his feelings.

Blaze moved back a little and sat on his knees. Claudis pulled up her legs, straddled her saddle with her shins and leaned forward. She grabbed the saddle horn with both hands and raised her butt almost as high as Blaze's face; giving him an unhindered view.

Her slit was long and narrow, while her puckered hole was small and deep. Blaze caught a glimpse of her sagging breasts from between her legs.

Unable to control himself, Blaze pasted his hands on her butt cheeks and rubbed his face all over her rump. He planted his face between her butt crack and licked along her slit, perineum and her hole.

He kissed her vagina and cupped it with his mouth. He pushed his tongue in and lapped at her fluids, poking and flicking at her walls with the tip of his tongue. He had a dexterous tongue and he used it with maximum efficiency.

Claudis gripped the saddle horn tightly as she felt herself losing control of her body amidst the waves of pleasure. He whole body felt as if it was burning from within, but it was a burn of ecstasy.

Feeling his own mounting desire, Blaze moved his lips from her lips to her other hole. He engulfed it with his mouth and circled her folds with his tongue. He slowly wiggled his way in.

She was tight, but Blaze had become adept at opening reticent holes. He finagled his way in and started coating her walls with his saliva, until he felt satisfied with the lubrication.

He pulled his head back and stared at the sight in front of him, firmly planting the image in his mind. He pulled a couple of pillows from his spatial ring and arranged them on the saddle, to make it more comfortable.

He once again stood on his knees and pushed Claudis down at the small of her back, lowering her butt and making the arch of her back more prominent. He was surprised by how flexible she was, despite being large for an angel.

Claudis looked back to see what Blaze was doing. He held her by her wide bony hips and shuffled towards her butt. He pushed his member along her slit and slid it to and fro to lubricate himself with her fluids.

He spread her fluids around his cock with his hand and moved his member up. He placed it against her rectal hole and looked into her eyes. It was obvious what he was planning to do. She looked back into his eyes without questioning.

He turned his attention back to her hole and using his thumb he pushed in.

"Ahh" Claudis groaned as she clamped around him with a vice like grip. Despite her large butt, her butthole was quite narrow. She was still looking at him, so Blaze could see her reaction.

Wanting to see more, Blaze pulled out and penetrated her again.

"Aah" Her back arched in a wave and her mouth opened wide, letting out a small groan that didn't match with the extent her mouth was open.

Blaze leaned forward and slowly started making his way in. Her rectal walls were no match for his mighty spear. They slowly gave in and started spasming to make for a smoother penetration.

Finally, Blaze's thighs collided against hers and his member was balls deep inside her. He waited for a few moments, to let her insides get used to his hot rod, before he slowly pulled out all the way to the tip.

He looked into Claudis' grey eyes and slowly pushed in with one fluid motion. Claudis eyes widened and she let out a silent gasp, without breaking eye contact. Blaze repeated.

Slowly, Blaze built up the speed of his thrusts and his arousal magnified with each entry. He felt himself peak, but he resisted. He needed to feel what he had felt when he had first done it with Jie Er.

"Aah Aah Mmm Mmmh Aah" Claudis' moans gained rhythm as her clitoral nerve endings were titillated with each penetration. She saw the passion in his eyes and it brought heat to her whole body, especially in the pit of her stomach. The heat and pleasure grew exponentially filling a dam inside herself.

Finally, her dam couldn't hold anymore and burst; flooding her vagina and spraying Blaze with hot fluids. She fell onto her Pegasus' neck and her body shivered uncontrollably, releasing everything that had been built up.

When he felt the warmth, Blaze went over his peak, yet he resisted. Not finding any release, his overwhelming arousal somehow burst inside his body. It spread throughout his existence, in a wave of heat; drying his mouth. It hit against the walls of his mind, broke through and filled his consciousness; clouding his thoughts.

He pulled out of Claudis, leaving a gaping hole, but he wasn't conscious enough to admire his work.

"I am going to put it in your vagina. It may hurt" Blaze panted, grasping at the final throes of his sanity. He instinctively lined his tip against the hole of her slit.

Claudis herself was in no position to think clearly. She wrapped her arms around Gyrill's neck and nodded into her neck.

Blaze clutched her hips and speared her in a single thrust. He fell on top of her and let go of his mind.

"Aaaaargh" Claudis screamed in pain as his member forcefully tore through her barrier. However, her pain instantly turned into pleasure as she felt a foreign heat invading her from the point of their union.

She gripped her Pegasus, almost too tightly, and Gyrill began to wonder about her master's actions. However, she patiently glided along as she did not receive any meaningful instruction.

Blaze started gyrating on top of her springy massive butt and his hands sneaked underneath her chest. He grabbed her breasts and squeezed them tightly, eliciting a loud hiss of pleasure.

As he grinded into her vagina, Claudis felt her pleasure and the foreign heat combine as it spread to every inch of her body, stimulating every place it touched.

Finally, the heat spread to her receptacles. Though it was insignificant, she felt something drain from them. However, before she could rejoice at the fact that Blaze's energy was truly affecting hers, the energy reached her mind. It swept through her consciousness like a raging river, making her lose all her mental faculties.

Thump! Blaze raised his hips and slammed into her thighs.

"Aaaaaahhh" Claudis let out a hoarse scream, startling her Pegasus. The Pegasus kept herself steady and slowly started descending towards Claudis' cottage.

Blaze gripped her breasts and bit into her back, eliciting a hiss of pleasure from her.

Thwack Thwack Thwack Thwack. He rammed into her, bouncing against her spring soft butt cheeks and rubbing his chest against the skin of her back. Claudis moaned in sync with his thrusts.

They mindlessly experienced the world of pure sensual pleasure as the heat inside them slowly built up in resonance. Her hot wetness soaked his groin and her butt cheeks as he ravaged her insides. Her walls spasmed and massaged his member as they tried to swallow him deeper and deeper.

Finally, their pleasures reached another peak and the two angels burst, climaxing simultaneously.

Electrifying waves of pleasure coursed through their bodies as they released themselves.

Claudis shivered and spasmed over the pillowed saddle as she drenched Blaze's member and groin with floods of cum.

Blaze pasted himself into her body and crudely jutted his member into her as he sprayed her cervix with strong streams of his essence; his orgasm lasting almost as long as hers.

He rested on her heavily and their bodies pulsed in sync, as their orgasms slowly abated. Blaze held her tightly and kept pushing his hips into her and she pushed her butt into his in return.

Their mental faculties returned only in the aftermath. They suddenly noticed that Gyrill was on the ground and in front of Claudis' house, patiently waiting for them to return to their senses.

"How do you feel?" Blaze panted, noticing the bite mark on her back. It would bruise.

"Really good! Even if it doesn't heal me, I think it was worth it" Claudis replied, caressing Gyrill's mane in apology. The flying horse neighed and accepted.

"I am sorry about this" Blaze said, lightly prodding around the bite mark.

"It's alright. I guess you were in as much control of your senses as I was" Claudis replied.

"It isn't always like this. I can usually control it, but losing control seems to have more effect on healing" Blaze explained, still on top of her. His member was drowning in a mixture of their orgasms and its warmth felt oddly good.

Claudis nodded and let him stay on her. She felt too satiated to move and she liked his weight on her.

Blaze waited for a few moments, gently licking her bite mark. However, when he saw no signs of the glow that appeared around Jie Er, he decided to get off Claudis.

He slowly retreated his member out, drawing her skin and little bit of white fluid out with it. He caressed her butt one last time before jumping off the Gyrill.

Claudis cupped her vagina with a hand and plugged her entrance before she sat upright and got off the Pegasus.

"You can let it out" Blaze muttered sheepishly. Claudis stood in front of him, awkwardly holding her hand against her slit.

"Oh!" she exclaimed before crouching on to her feet and removing her hand. She spread her lips apart and let the fluid trickle down onto the grass. She felt it was wasteful but decided to listen to Blaze.

"You should try manifesting your wings" Blaze commented, handing her a napkin.

She wiped herself and stood up and turned her back to him. She once again started focusing her energy into her receptacles.

Just as before, pale silvery colored energy started gathering around her scapula. However, this time, the plates of energy that came out of her back, seemed more like premature bird wings rather than deformed masses.

Claudis clearly felt the difference and she renewed her focus. Multiple tiny silver feathers started sprouting from the energy plates. However, her wing growth stopped after that. It felt like something was still blocking her from completely manifesting her wings.

But, Claudis was jubilant. It was the most improvement she had seen in years.

"It worked! Thank you, little Blaze" she exclaimed in gratitude.

"It doesn't seem like it did too much, though" Blaze sighed.

Jie Er's problem was probably simpler. Though they were diseased, she still had her wings. Moreover, she was an archangel and only her second pair were corrupted. It also seemed like Claudis' problem lay within her receptacles themselves.

"It doesn't matter. We have all year. Even if that is not enough, I can wait for the next. I am in no hurry" Claudis replied happily.

"Oh! I am sorry. I assumed you would like to continue treating me" she added sheepishly, realizing her assumption.

"Of course. I wouldn't have offered it otherwise. I can treat you after every Pegasi class. I will also come by whenever I can find some spare time" Blaze replied with a smile.

"Thank you!" Claudis replied, stepping forward and smothering him with a warm bearlike hug. He smiled into her breasts and hugged her back.

Author's Comments: So how was the fight scene? Too violent? Don't worry though -- I am the kinda guy who dislikes the existence of UFC because I think its excessively violent -- so you won't come across any incorrigible violence (I apologize if I offended any UFC fans).

Did you guys like the style? I have a black belt in karate and I box a little, so I kinda used that knowledge to make it seem real (not sure if I was successful). Future fights may be more fantastical but for now this seems right.

I hope to see your thoughts about the chapter in the comments.

Q&A (I suggest you read em')

Q1. Whoa! Who sent you all these questions?

A1. Me (but some of them are based on the feedback I received)

Q2. Can you explain the power levels of the angels/demons, again?

A2. Angels:

Angel: 2 wings (most angels)

Archangel: 4 wings (Jie Er, Fiora, Mayor Arban Lina of Varan etc.)

Deity: 6 wings (Ely's mothers, Aranya has 5 Deities)

Deva: 8 wings (Currently, there no Devas in the Heavenly Union)

Demons:

Demon: 2 wings (most demons)

Archdemon: 4 wings

Devil: 6 wings

Asura: 8 wings (Empress Hela)

These categories are only superficial and are not strict differentiators of the strength of an angel. For example, Archangels can be of varying strengths and a really strong angel can sometimes be stronger than a weak archangel. Think of it this way -- you'd usually think that a six foot five well built giant can beat up a five-foot five person. But what if its Bruce Lee?

Q3. What's the technological level of Azra-El?

A3. Azra-El is a steampunk level world. Think of 19th century technology. They understand steam engines, blimps and other industrial machines. They just don't have the necessity to use them in the same manner. They have energy stones, so why use a steam engine? They have Pegasi, so why would they try to improve on a blimp and build an airplane? The Pegasi carriage actually has a blimp like top filled with a buoyant gas.

Q4. What about the Science? (Yes, science and technology are two different things)

A4. They are quite advanced in science. However, you can't compare them with earth. Their advances in science are different from ours. They have more knowledge in some fields while less in others. They don't have Quantum Mechanics, but they understand dark enrgy/dark matter (the earthen physics terms) etc.

The reason why their technology hasn't kept up with their science is because they haven't had a true industrial revolution. You could blame it on the lack of capitalism or on the very nature of the angels. On average, they are far less materialistic. Are they happier because of it? That's up for you to decide.

Q5. Why doesn't Blaze introduce new weapons and new technology from Earth?

A5. Firstly, can he even do that? Think of the smartest friends you have (maybe its you). How many devices can they introduce in Azra-El if they are sent there by themselves? No too many, I presume.

Secondly, Blaze is only twenty. Even if knows the basic concepts of building a computer, how is he going to build all its necessary components? It's not that easy. I personally understand QM, and re prove Einstein's general theory of relativity (not bragging :P), but I probably can't even make a simple coffee maker (first thing I saw now) or fix my broken drain, let alone build an ICBM. Complex machines require multiple people with different specializations.

Yeah, I could wing it, wave my hands, and simply say that Blaze is a super genius who can do anything and everything, but that doesn't do it for me. I am trying to build a world that doesn't seem implausible to most people.

I will confine wish fulfilment to Blaze's sexual escapades :P.

Regardless, he may have the chance to talk about some of Earthen technologies with someone appropriate.

Q5. Is Azra-El in our Universe?

A5. Blaze feels that the world energy is a form of dark matter/dark energy that the creatures of the world have access to. More physics, and whether the world is in a different universe (with different laws) or just a different dimension, will be explored later (hopefully).

Q6. Will there be stuff like enchanting?

A6. Honestly, I haven't thought of it, so it is possible. I don't intend the world to be wishy washy. So, I must create a probable system for it. If I do create it, I don't want Blaze to have the skill. Maybe a friend of his.

I think he is already overpowered. He is smart, strong, he can fly really well, can easily manipulate large amounts of world energy, has immense potential and is probably going to be an amazing Quetzal rider.

I love OP characters, but you can't build an intelligent story around them (Problem with Superman, my favorite superhero). But hey, I will still probably find some random excuse to give Blaze another talent at some point.

Q7. Will you consider ideas for the sex scenes?

A7. As long as they are benign and fit in the story.

Q8. Are you done with the damn Q&A?

A8. Nope. But I am sure you're done for now, so I will let you go. Double entendre intended. lol

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Love the fight scene, was on the edge of my seat with the rightous glow!! Yelling at the teacher ! OMG

xhristianjxhristianjover 1 year ago

It's really hard to write comedy it's really hard to write drama and action let's be honest it's just really hard to write fullstop. I think people have this misconception that if writing words onto a page is writing then how hard can it be because everyone can do it?

But writing compelling characters, creating a world and exciting dialogue is just so hard to do and this author is genuinely talented 😎

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Loved the fight scene and righteous fury!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Why

What's with all the suuppeer long comments on this series? And the series is great! See, done! XD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fight scene was the best part

The fight scene and it's consequences were great. More please!

It managed to:

Show us Blaze's fighting style

Give more character to Blaze (feelings wrt bullying)

Better define an antagonist angel/group

Introduce Righteous Fury

Give character to Siofra

I am enjoying Siofra's character. She feels more flushed out than anyone except Ely and Jie Er. Slightly disappointed she is ruled out as a love interest despite being well above legal age, physically being the size of an adult human female, and seemingly being more emotionally experienced (less naive) than most of the adult angels. It also seems like Blaze is attempting to make an emotional connection (friendship) with her instead of just being fuck buddies.

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