The Azra-El Series Ch. 15

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Anonymous (to all of them): Thank you for your comments. I hope you guys can make a profile so I can respond to your comments 😊.

HornyMythicCreature: Unicorn or Minotaur? PS: Check Q&A for the answer to your question. If it doesn't satisfy you, feel free to send me a message or think of it as creative license I took to make that scene more enticing.

Wankr65: Yeah, it's a good thing you've accepted Blaze and Elyssa as being friends. There isn't going to be anything sexual between them for a while, if ever.

Finbar9800: Glad you liked the Clio bit. As for Blaze and the tournament – The end of the tournament and a chapter bit after will that will be the angel arc of the story. There is a whole demon arc after that. So, there is quite a bit of the story left, and I hope it will be as or more engaging than the story so far. Thank you for reading and constant support.

ReaderReaderfic: That's what I love about a good story – connections that make you think but ultimately come together logically. The satisfaction of anticipating events and seeing them come true is gratifying. Don't know how well I am doing it, but I try.

Otters: I've been watching more videos of them. They are so damn cool, intelligent and brave. Did you know that they gang up on crocodiles and put their heart out fighting them and defending their own? Splash will be the same :P. I am glad you took your gf to see otters. I really hope you get an otter at some point.

Jpz007ahren: I haven't read Cole or Card, so I can't comment. But yes, Astrid does seem that way. She is very introspective and calculative, but her outward appearance is only partially artificial. When you pretend to be something for long enough you sometimes become it.

Avians learn to fly really quickly. I had a parrot for a little while. It took a while for him to fledge but once he grew his feathers, he was flying around in a few days.

Pegasus scene: For Blaze to become a better knight, he has to reconcile with his actions during that scene I believe. It will come up soon.

P.S: Half-Huldra – Is Blaze one or will he make one ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).

P.P.S: How DARE you compare this magnificent dragon to a mere cat. **Ooh. Is that a sparkly star? Gets distracted and chases after it**

James7954: Thank you! Your comments always give me the extra energy to write more. To know that my readers are paying attention to the details and the ebbs and flows of the chapter. You are right, almost everything is connected one way or the other, thus far (except the scenes which were added for fun). I can only hope it turns out to be as awesome as it is in my head.

Are you by any chance Xosmos? If not, then never mind. If yes, what can I say - this dragon is omniscient. :P

Is this the real life or is this just fantasy?

Who knows? I am not gonna tell you either way, am I? :P. But here is a crazy shower thought. There are some well thought out hypotheses that we live in a simulation. But if that is the case, what is the line between a simulation and reality? I don't think there is one. What makes a simulation feel 'real' is the way it is structured within constraints of logic but leaves a smidgeon of chance to varying outcomes (or at least gives the illusion of varying outcomes).

Considering this, even if the story is just a figment of imagination. It exists in my consciousness and is 'real' to its inhabitants, because it follows the logic of the universe and also gives its inhabitants a choice in their actions, even though it is headed towards a predetermined end. Even our universe is headed towards a predetermined end —the Big Freeze or the heat death, depending on which theory is correct. But a lot can vary in between.

Did that make any sense? I am prone to going off on random tangents at times.

Rance: Rance! I missed you. Er... I mean, Momo missed you. Yes, it was definitely Momo. Damn transmission typo! Quantum entanglement is not as reliable as it seems.

Anyway, where have you been? I see you've been cheating on Azra-El for this new manga. I must investigate for science and inspiration. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Aurelion Sol - They say that sarcasm is the lowest form of humor. This Aurelion must be a lower form of dragon than me. Muhahahahahahaha haha. *ahem* But I must agree, he does seem like my kin.

Jokes aside, he seems like a pretty cool character. Though I don't like his design. Looks like a tadpole. That video was pretty great, but I enjoyed his quotes a lot more. I made the stars... but you inspire me to make more – I wanna use this with someone :P. And this - Were you born this flat, or did you work at it? I played league of legends in its first few seasons (was platinum something). They've added a lot of champs since then. Aurelion is new to me. Did you not notice the spin to win reference with the Blazing pirouette?

Anyway, this CapDragon has quotes of his own. "Gravity is the curvature of my cosmic dancing." Can Aurelion top that?

I was pretty happy with how that dance scene in chap 13 turned out. My only dancing experience in public is clubbing during Uni :P. No pertinent Shakespeare reference here.

Clio - Trust me, she was buzzing a lot more in my imagination. Just didn't want to make it too anime-like. It's not for everyone.

I remember tearing up at that Lord Hood speech. RIP – Momo. Don't worry though, she is watching from carnike heaven.

What is Blaze? That is the question, isn't it? It maybe simpler or more complex than you imagine :P. I am not giving away anything.

Easter Carnikes and sexy angels in bunny costumes – that's definitely something that needs to be explored.

Oh yes, the otter is definitely as smart as a dolphin. And there is a Hela Empire conspiracy somewhere- doesn't have anything to do with the otter though. There is also a Hela spy amongst all the angels I've introduced so far – I am only revealing this to you and anyone else who had the patience to read till this bit. It's our secret :P.

How can I kill off Sky before he grows into a magnificent Quetzal that has the Malakim for breakfast, Xenodons for lunch and demons for dinner? Wait, shouldn't breakfast be the best meal of the day? The Malakim shouldn't be tasty. Unless, Blaze's tastes are rubbing off on the poor quetzal. He'd definitely have the Malakim for breakfast :P.

Jie Er – What made you think she is the leader of HU? The scene where she consoles Blaze? As I said, the reality maybe more or less complex than you imagine. The leader of the HU is technically Michelle Lucian, who holds the banner of light. Jie Er is not her.

Angles – No no, not a typo. They are a type of angels that were born to be mob characters. Jk. It's a typo.

Oi. I aiin't Aurelion. I am Lord Capricious Dragon. The greatest dragon ever. This silly Aurelion let himself be controlled by mortal. Besides, Aurelion makes stars - I eat stars. Logic indicates I can eat Aurelion (no homo). Muhahaha. Though I must say his story is very interesting. **Hovering between Phil and Betty and pretending to be Aurelion** Wait a minute. Does that make me a void dragon? Noooooo...

Azra-El does have its version of google. It's called a library :P.

So, is Momo your alter ego or is she the sexy imaginary friend you do umm... stuff with? Perhaps she is both. **Oi, Momo! Stop biting my dragon arse. I get it. You aiin't Rance's imaginary friend. He just named her after you alright!** Between you and me, Rance – whispers – You can have Momo. But I must warn you. She has sharp teeth and a fiery temper.

Thanks for going off on another tangent. Don't worry, I understand your spiels perfectly well.

Das Vedanya – until your next comment 😊.

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xhristianjxhristianjover 1 year ago

I really love this story one of my other favourites is Life as a new Hire by Finalstand and it's for the same reason. Great narrative, interesting plot and really funny dialogue.

RanceSamaRanceSamaabout 4 years ago

Yo! 'Sup! Thanks for response to my review. Was highly euphoric and strangely humorous to read... Oh I meant page 4 of this Chapter was aha 😅

Moviiing ooon! As for my long hiatus? Uni, work, life and life being life and shiz. Bit now I am back!

On the bright side? Now I get to binge all the chapters that I missed out on for this story. Oh the euphoric mind breaking, ahegao face making ecstasy of it all! Oh one hand, I can't wait to read it all, bit on the other hand, I doubt I will be a coherent sane mess completely catching up to the current chapter.

May Momo have mercy on me tonight aha 😅

I hope to see more of these sex education sessions with or without Fiora and Alice. Also, it will be more interesting if Blaze lost cause control more or mad a business based completely on his cock and cum. I.e., the ad would hypothetically go like this, "hear, hear! Come and a taste of this therapeutic sticky notes Hite stuff that will *"current"* all your physical and mental troubles away!" But what the heck, just another of my weird ideas hehe.

On that note (and since my hiatus has somehow (inexplicably l) made me "sane" and "sober" than I expected (to my complete and utter disappoinment and dismay might I add,) I shall bid you "Dasvidaniya!"

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great as always.

Sorry for reading a bit late. I was stuck in some study. Anyways it was a great piece man. I don't know why people rated it low, I haven't read other comments but in my opinion it was a good one and important for story. As always I really enjoyed it.

Thank you

Sam

😉 ENJOY

CapDragon121CapDragon121almost 5 years agoAuthor
Response to Anonymous

Yes, I am the one posting on RoyalRoad. "Blazing Fury" btw, Furry will mean something entirely different haha. The RR version is a teensy bit different than this one.

Thank you for taking the time to notify me. I really appreciate it (its nice to know people are looking out for plagiarism). I haven't been posting anywhere else yet, but I think a good way to ensure whether the author is the right person is to see where their Patreon account is linked.

Thanks for the comment, and I hope you continue reading my work. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
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Hi, I enjoy your novel is great, funny and erotic. I read many webnovels from different sites and found a similar novel with different name. The Azrael Series - Blazing Furry by Timetraveler121 at royalroad.com, Are you the one posted it? Or are being plagiarized without knowing?

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