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"You look wonderful, Sammi," I breathed standing up to take her in my arms. As I cuddled her and after we kissed, I mumbled. "So wonderful, I think you should stay like that for dinner."
Beaming me that beguiling smile, which was part a cheeky schoolgirl and part that of a seducer she replied. "Gladly, Missus Williams, but of course that is on one condition."
I guessed what she meant and smiling I said, "Shall I change now?"
She laughed. "We are getting to know each other well aren't we?"
"Wow, I just love teddies," she said when I came downstairs in the whit lacy, one piece garment. It was low at the front, showing most of my, unfettered boobs, and was cut acutely at the thighs showing the edge of my mound.
With most of a bottle of white wine drunk before the pasta and salad and the best part of a bottle of red consumed with it, we were nicely mellow during what was an amazingly erotic dinner.
"Shall we clear up now?" She asked, standing up.
"No let's leave it," I said as we both stood up. I held my hand out to her, she took it and I pulled her to me. Our bodies merged together. We kissed pressing our breasts and mounds together. Then I broke the kiss and whispered.
"Tell me Sammi, where exactly were we?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoDear Mandy,
I so enjoyed reading your tale "Where Exactly Were We?" My favorite part of the story was the beginning where the reader hears your inner battle between duty and desire, and between playing it safe and pursuing Sammi. You captured the allure of a woman's breasts very well! You did a great job of building the tension of arousal!
The way you wrote the piece followed the normal pattern of a woman's orgasm: longer arousal time, plateau with continued stimulation, climax, and resolution. It takes skill to be able write your piece in such a way that it follows these stages. I saw how you guided the reader in masturbation, if they so desired it (I felt like it!). I thought the beginning of the story, or the arousal phase, contained your strongest writing. I was very turned on by the pinnacle of the arousal scene/ phase. The way you and Sammi interact just before diving into the depths of making love, was steamy! I could feel the erotic tension, as you stood closely behind Sammi, and as you guided her eyes to the Eye and to Big Bend. That was my favorite scene! The two of you were pregnant with sexual need ! This was a great story, and I hope you write more!
Sincerely, Bisouthernbelle ;)
*Forgive me if I am overstepping here. From one writer to another, you are extremely talented! However, many of the sentences seemed to run on, and there were several spelling and grammatical errors. Those were the only things that somewhat detracted from your very beautiful, erotic story. I am not trying to be hurtful or disrespectful to you as an author. I see a great deal of talent in your writing! If I did not see innate beauty in your writing, I would not say a word. I have to work on these things, too! Please, keep writing! I look forward to reading more of your works!! :)
baronearthalmost 14 years agowonderful story with well formed characters - i felt that id actually met them - keep the stories coming
kind regards and kisses
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI hope you will write more chapters to this story. It is a great story & deserves to be continued. I really enjoy reading it & look forward to reading more.
manyquestionsalmost 15 years agoBeautiful and highly charged. I really got the feeling that "I was there." So realistic - well done!
