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Click here"Oh my goodness..."
"If you want to go back to Fulzore, that can be arranged."
"I don't want to."
Eleode's hand stopped, and she crushed my body against hers.
"I thought you'd say that," she whispered.
"I've only known you for a day, Eleode. And you've already treated me better than anyone else I know. No prince in his right mind would give up the chance to be yours."
Without warning, a pair of tightly pursed lips pressed up against my cheek.
"Thank you, Emilio," she whispered. "I won't take this honor lightly."
Taking her hand, I closed my eyes and purred. The clip of my leash rattled, and Eleode brought me in front of her, then squeezed me.
I closed my eyes and smiled softly. This was the right choice.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI quite liked the fast pacing. I got here for femdom, and stayed for a great romantic adventure, which was not even drawn out unnecessarily like most fantasy stories are.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoYou really need to slow down. Take the time for descriptions and don't rush from one setting to the next. Prince is at home. Now Prince is in another kingdom! Holy shit Prince is kidnapped! Now Prince is free fighting to free his woman. Now they're all free.
You had the good foundation, but it was like you sat down and wrote it all in about 20 minutes. This was too many different directions of the story for the reader in one short go. Either take more time to make it a longer story, even if it needs several parts, or make it a simple story.
PulpWyattover 9 years agoAuthorTo Spawn_of_Sade:
Sorry, but I won't be doing a follow-up to this story. I prefer to come up with new settings for every story I write, and I always have a hard time coming up with a second set of believable character arcs for a cast that has already been through one self-contained story.
But I'm glad to hear that you like the setting. I think I've been discounting lately how important it is to paint a convincing background, so, from now on, I'll pay special attention to letting the characters, the plot, and the changing world inform one another.
Thanks for sounding off!
Spawn_of_Sadeover 9 years agoThis setting is one of the best I have encountered in a long time. Will you write another story about his life with the Princess?
