Where the Lines Overlap Ch. 01

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"With all due respect sir, you're anything but normal. You are the only natal to become an elite. You're the husband of the president's son and you helped exposed Dart's corrupted ways. Normal isn't what I would call you sir."

"Please, call me Will. Quite frankly, I'm surprise you know that much about me?" he spoke.

It was only then did I realize how stalker-ish I sounded. I basically made it sound like I researched him night and day, which only made me blush deeper. "Sorry sir," I apologized.

"Will," he corrected.

"Sorry, I mean Will. It's just, you changed my life in ways you don't even know."

For a moment, a look of confusion washed over his features, before being replaced by one of understanding. "Oh, you're gay too."

"Yeah, and if not for you, I'll probably still be in the closet."

"Well, I'm glad I could have made an impact on your life. I was, after all, in the same position you were in. I can't take all the credit though. President Hopper had a huge role to play in that," he smiled.

I couldn't get over how casual he was, just another proof that he was once natal too. He didn't have that unapproachable elite aura that some elites possessed.

"Okay, I think I'm done gushing," I said, taking a deep breath to bring my excitement back down to normal levels.

"Shall we begin then?" he asked, to which I nodded. I still didn't know what the interview was about, but I really couldn't care. I had just met my hero, and the interview could have been the most uncomfortable thing in the world but I would not have cared...I think.

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lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 7 years ago

I am with the populace here a great introduction to this story. I can't wait to read the rest

sm1982sm1982almost 8 years ago
Amazing Intro!

You are a great storyteller and I'm glad to see another romance story has emerged on Lunaris! So happy that you have also included Will and Thane and what they have been doing in-between their ending and the start of Kevin and Taron's!

*I have already read this story til the end but am now getting around to commenting (:

DonRDonRalmost 8 years ago

Great start. I can't wait to read more - please sir! Thank you!

musicfreakmusicfreakalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thanks so much guys. I really appreciate the nice comments, especially the praise of my English. Haha. I do take pride in that but I have writing to thank for that. People always say that the best way to improve your English is to read, but they never tell you that writing does the same too. If you compare between 'The New Kid' and this story, there is quite the marked difference. Haha

Anyway, still no news on a date for the second chapter. C'mon Lit, approve it already. My guess is it'll be up by 6/25 but don't quote me on that.

StillnessIsTheTruthStillnessIsTheTruthalmost 8 years ago
Floored....

I'm giving you 5 stars because I support all you do! This story, is soooooo good and I'm waiting for more! You're one talented writer with one of the best commands for English language I've seen on this website!

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