Whisper Of The Wind

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I laughed out loud when I read the part where Charlie rousted the 5 women out of bed early and marched them up the mountain. It reminded me of a Drill Instructor I had in Dago back in '68. He was an asshole too. Pretty good story. Kind of short, would have been nice to have had a little more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
ooh rah

Loved it, one of the best one's I've read here.

Thank you...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Crazy ass marine

Semper Fi!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fun

Entertaining story. School bus was a hoot. Thought maybe one of the five would have stayed with him. Ex-wife was a twist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Jar Heads

I really liked this story. I was Army, but was at a Marine R&R station in the Med. A Group of Marines are the biggist bunch of ASSHOLES anywhere. Bar None. A Marine alone is like a Boy Scout Eagle. I have known many Jar Head and they are the best people around. They will help when trouble is at hand. Do most anything to help a friend. Good sense of humor. Just don't get them in a group. This story shows that you have been around them too. I still like to pick on them though. I am also happy that I didn't become one.

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