Then the two men appeared together again, they both spoke, telling Ray that he would have to start a new life and change his ways! He was told that there was still hope for him if he resolved to lead a decent life. If not, they assured him that his ruin would be certain. He was told that the choice was his; to fly like an eagle or squirm like a worm!
The tape ended but Ray just stared at the blank screen. He had lost every thing that mattered to him; even his once trusted cock would not perform. He figured that it would get better when the ache in his heart subsided. Ray felt so empty and useless, gone was his self-confidence. Tears flowed down his face as he pondered his future.
THE END
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In this very short story you repeated 'big black cock' 7, count them, seven times. We know he has a big black cock, there are several ways to describe it, thick, member, rod, pulsing, throbbing, monster etc. The sex scenes were not detailed and not hot. Character development, instead of 'he fucked her, and she orgasmed', more description; 'the fat tip of his cock split open her thick lips and slipped into...'
Bring the person there.
Definitely an immature state if mind.more...
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This was a waste of my fucking time. I don't know how or why I ended up reading this story but I wish it t didn't exist. Seriously, this is a fucking pathetic exscuse for a story. You come off as a twelve year old with serious small cock issues and a lack of imagination. Not to memtion your seriously lacking story writing skills and attention to detail. Next time go fuck a blow up doll and keep this shit in your head.more...
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