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Click hereTyson exhaled hard and rested his sweaty forehead against Dakota's shoulders.
"Mmmm, that was nice," Dakota said in a quiet voice. Tyson could hear her smile. He lifted his head from her body and let go of his manhood.
"Hold still," he instructed and fetched a shop towel from the roll, which was stashed in a drawer of the tool box. Tyson wiped her backside clean and she stood, turning around. In just a few minutes, they were both fully clothed again and Dakota was standing in front of him, looking up at him with a smile curling up the corners of her mouth. Just as she opened up her mouth to speak, the door to the shop flew open hard.
"Dakota!" a voice called. It was Joe. He quick steps around various obstacles brought him up to the young couple standing by the tool box. "I've been looking for you," he said, casting a inquisitive look Tyson's way. "I need to talk to you about something." Tyson knew what this was about. He felt instantly deflated.
"Well how about later?" Dakota put a hand in her back pocket casually. "I'm talking to Tyson right now, ok?"
"Um...sure," Joe said lowly, and looked back and forth between the two individuals before him. "See ya later, 'Kota." Having said that, he walked out of the barn just as quickly as he'd arrived. Dakota looked back to Tyson and smiled. Big.
"What are you doing after work tonight?"
Your experience shows in this story. I found it drawing me in, the more I read, the more I wanted. Also it was a pleasant change from a lot of the other "slam bam..." stories. I am looking forward to your next story. Thank You!
Welcome back to writing. For you, It seems like riding a bike. You did a nice job of teasing us with some character development, with room for more. This is the type of story that can stand on its own or develop into a series. Keep writing.