Within Amie Ch. 08

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Jayleen88
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I could see our daughter building her first sand-castle with her grandmother -- my beloved mother. I looked up at Edmund as he grasped my hand lovingly and then pulled me to walk along the beach, "Follow me down to watch the sunset, Amie baby." He said to me huskily.

I smiled widely at him, he could take me anywhere and anytime. My world was just within Edmund and his was just within Amie and our daughter completed that circle for eternity...

***THE END***

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roseloveroseloveabout 11 years ago
wow

I think that was the sweetest love story ever. It was fast but in a good way. It was crazy how everything happened just in one week but turned out for the better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
yeah!!!!

it ended just thw way it needed to loved it....keep writing

akchaysakchaysabout 14 years ago
Loved it....

Please write asap. I just need to know as soon as i can... :)

Dragonangel5555Dragonangel5555about 15 years ago
Awesome!

I loved the ending the way you had Amie and Robert meet later was so sweet. very good story.

Jayleen88Jayleen88about 15 years agoAuthor
Away but not for eternity...

Thank you all for VOTING and COMMENTING!! XD To SmartyBluPants and Spearman1: there are more series waiting to be completed hehe. I'm looking forward to finish them once I've done with my exams and yes, without doubt hopefully, my creative juices will keep on flowing. OK, this is my last comment for the time being but if you guys want to stay in touch, feel free to contact me via private feedback, I always check my emails before I go to bed lol. See you all in July or at the earliest mid June! XD

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