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Click here"That wouldn't work, man," Garza says thoughtfully. "It has to be something he doesn't say in bed." He has his turn at looking smug.
Card stands up straight and folds his arms over his chest. His eyes narrow.
"You're going to make me pay for that, aren't you?" Garza says, but he still looks pretty smug about it.
"Yup." The rest of the room is silent. I guess everyone's waiting for it. I keep scrolling through their pictures. I know it's not my imagination, but I've seen this picture before. "Guess you're walking home again."
"We took my car."
"Oh." Card pulls a set of keys from his pocket. "You're right, these are your keys."
I find what I'm looking for in time to look up and see Garza's cocksure grin falter. "Cory..."
"See you at home, 'Rain," he says with a grin and slings his bag over his shoulder. He walks away, spinning Garza's keys on his finger and whistling tunelessly. "Oh hey, your house key."
Garza's jaw hangs open as the door shuts, the entire football team witness to yet another time Card has gotten the upper hand in their relationship.
"You should probably chase him down before he locks you out," I suggest. "Maybe this time, let him throw your back out."
This seems to knock him out of his stupor. "Oh, so you finally picked up on that."
"You weren't exactly hiding it."
"You all are just really dense." And, he walks off, presumably to get back in his boyfriend's good graces and/or his house.
"What the hell is he talking about?" poor Teague has taken one too many hits to the head. "What just happened?"
So, I show him the picture - the two of them at some party, arms around each other, Card sporting this huge grin, and Garza laying one on him. Teague stares at it until he's cross-eyed.
Ok. My dark secret is that I binge on your story! I read all three sites it is on. Yep. All three. I get sooooo excited when a chapter is posted. For those confused by alternate chapters or flow, this is a seriously delicious story in the making with author edits along the way. If I thought lit would allow, I would clue others into the other sites. But let me just leave it that you are a nifty gay author. Scrumptious!
But you're right, it doesn't seem to fit the current characters. Although at the moment I have to admit the ones whose story I Really want is Indie and Preston.. ;)
The "alt" chapters were scenes that I had written a while ago. I intended to use them in the main story, but they no longer work with the current plot and character development.
What chapter was this cut from? It doesn't seem to be an alternative chapter. The sex scene was A+ hot. I also loved the locker room scenes. Quite witty!
"B...D...S...M..." Please oh please... He's so freaking sweet with his safeword advice. He's now my favorite character after Indie/Preston.