Wolf's Pet Ch. 23

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"I'll have twenty here by tomorrow." Campbell was the last to speak.

"It sounds to me like we'll have a formidable force." Carr was beaming. They had come a long way. Earlier in the week none of them were willing to bring more. "We'll start assigning positions and training immediately. I'd like each Alpha to meet with Cole and Brett and let them know any special skills their Betas have that we can use to our best advantage."

"I think Gary will be caught unaware and we will prevail." Alistair sounded far more sure than he actually felt. But he had to continue to think positively. He felt his mate's presence with him now. She needed him to find her.

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Jack2303Jack2303over 11 years ago
Omg

Okay, I've just caught on to this series and love the characters. In general, it is well written, though I'm sort of glad that I'm catching it now that the series is finished since the characters are sort of flat in the short pieces (just an observation)...I had to finally comment and put out in the universe that I hope that Gary isn't able to turn their plans around on them...SMH cuz I'm acting like the next scene hasn't been written already. Lmbo.

booknerdbooknerdabout 12 years ago
I LOVE THE STORIES BUT......

The word dissension has been used so many times that it seemed repetitious to me. That's quite a bit considering I'm dyslexic and I have ADHD. Repetition is something I have masterd, like Yoda and his backward speech.

Here are a list of synonyms that can be used to convey the same meaning:

altercation, argument, bad vibes, bickering, clinker, contention, controversy, difference, disaccord, disagreement, discord, discordance, dispute, disunity, faction, factionalism, flak, friction, fuss, quarrel, scene, sour note, static, strife, trouble, variance, wrangle

I mean no offense at all. Thank you again for giving us your story. It is one of my top 3 favorites on here.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago

The plan seems to be coming together. Maybe they could set some aerosol bombs in the caves set to go off just after Gary and his followers return. They could fill the air in the caves with the antidote spray and return later to clean up.

catman71catman71about 12 years ago
the battle

looks to be very bloody, as i think the dire wolves will fight like furies, but i wonder about the girls and what surprise they are going to show

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Love It

More please,love this story

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