World of Ranicke 03

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

It was an odd looking configuration since it was built into a caravan that had a pipe going into it from a spring of some sort. He followed her example and set the clean clothing on a shelf and stripped down. It had been so long since he had a shower that it felt really good. "I miss a good shower. Baths are nice but growing up I took showers to get clean."

She gave him an odd look but only shrugged. Sorrel was getting used to different ways he did things so she didn't comment. They didn't take too long since there were others that wanted to take a shower as well.

Once toweled off Jim dressed in the clothing and felt they looked really good on him. "I need a hair cut darn it." Considering most of the males had long hair he looked rather odd. The boots fit quite well and so did the belt and holster. He changed the weapon over as well as several clips and knife. "I feel really silly but figure I should wear at the very least my knife and pistol."

As they finished getting clean the other two ladies and Thomas joined them and Thomas looked impressed. Once you have your symbol embrodierdered on the shirt you are going to be totally in demand." He gave him a sly look. "The other tribe is going to really be hunting you down and since they are mostly felines they love the hunt."

The three ladies all growled at that idea since they had no urge to share with another tribe. Theirs was okay but another? Not happening while they were around.

Jim was rather startled by their possessive growl and actually looked a bit shocked by it. "Um, I will keep that in mind ladies."

Thomas started laughing. "Oh my, a three way mating. You are going to be kept busy Jim." Twitting him was one of his favorite past times.

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
10 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
About naked children...

I had to laugh when I read your preamble about adults and children being naked. It is difficult to keep clothes on children, most of them HATE wearing clothes and they will strip off their clothes and run outside naked at the drop of a hat unless the clothes are designed so they can't reach the fasteners, which is not easy to do!

I don't know where the "blue-noses" got the idea that nudity is bad; I suspect it is a misinterpretation of their "bible" or whatever their religion uses as a "holy document" or "god's word", but they are wrong. Before Adam and Eve ate the fruit of knowledge, they and god were naked in the garden and there was no shame, the "bible" says so...then they ate the fruit and the "knowledge" contained a trap which made them THINK it was naughty to be naked, so they made "garments" for themselves to cover up (supposedly out of fig leaves. FIG LEAVES? Have you ever felt of fig leaves? Talk about SCRATCHY!), anyway god asked Adam WHY he and Eve had covered up and was angry with them, not for having been naked but for covering up his perfect creation. The "blue-noses" should actually READ their "bible" and not just take the preacher's word for it, then get over themselves...naked is natural, and god does not hate it, contrary to popular opinion. NOWHERE does it say "If god meant for man to run around naked he wouldn't have given us clothes", and he didn't give us clothes, so he obviously did intend for us to run around naked, so there...

maxd01maxd01over 9 years agoAuthor
@Jhyr

Since I don't have a life or job (for the most part) I don't have much else to do than to write and check for comments and to see how my stories are doing. As far as the updates I will have them posted as soon as I can. I think those who have read the originals will find the edited version much improved. Mind you I am not saying there won't be minor mistakes but I was sober this time or not recovering from being drunk so they make better sense.

I will keep writing though any new stories will be on the site in my bio. For the stories I currently have here I will add chapters/books till I complete them.

JhyrJhyrover 9 years ago
Wow @ your quick response

...is this prompt fan service or what?^^

Just came back to this chapter to tell everyone to disregard my previous post, since the very next chapter makes it fairly clear that Nora=Lorna...

Next time I'll just keep my big, fat mouth shut until I've finished reading the story.

Looking forward to the edited chapters & please keep up your engaging story-telling. :-)

maxd01maxd01over 9 years agoAuthor
@ Jhyr

Actually Nora is Lorna. I hadn't realized I had fubar'ed her name till later when I went back and re-read the story. I have reviewed the story and made some major edits to it. I am going to be uploading the edited version probably next week. I have already uploaded edited versions for a different story and don't want to have twenty or more edited chapters from three stories waiting to be posted. I have done something similar and ran into problems with the submissions.

JhyrJhyrover 9 years ago
Where did Nora come from???

Did I "sleep-read" a part of the story?

Sorrel: The Squorrel that found Jim, took care of him and eventually slept with him.

Nasha: The Inu who is some sort of nanny/wet nurse/babysitter to the children.

Nora: ??? Who is she, what is she & where, when or why did she enter the picture?

At first I kept thinking you were talking about Lorna (the mother of the Kitsune kit Jim had saved). Still a possibility, I guess... *shrugs*.

It's not really important, for all I care Jim can have relations with 33 random females, but I just can't place the name Nora.

Show More
Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

The Missing Dragon An elusive fire breathing monster leads him to a new world.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 01 Old style Science Fiction adventure.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Three Square Meals Ch. 001 An unexpected tip changes a man's life completely.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Abandoned with the Enemy Ch. 01 Soldier gets stranded on an island after battle with aliens.in NonHuman
Silver Moon - Were-Bear Fan Fic A werebear encounters pack.in NonHuman
More Stories