"Oh my! He really is big. It's got to be at least eight inches, maybe even nine."
The blonde began to rub up and down the shaft, slowly at first, then picking up the pace. I winced at the uncomfortable position.
"Wait. I need to, uh -"
They both froze. Carefully, I peeled back the blonde's hand from my painfully bent cock. I reached between my thighs to adjust my position, embarrassed in having to do it as they watched, but driven by the increased discomfort. I exhaled as I finished straightening my now almost fully erect cock, leaving it to point up toward my waist. Given more room and a better angle, it continued to lengthen and expand. Wide-eyed, both girls watched it grow to its full size.
"Oh my."
Blushing furiously, I stood there with my hands clasped behind my back while they studied my swollen crotch. The blonde licked her lips as the pretty brunette spoke. Her voice was hoarse.
"We're in a photography class together. If you're available, we'll talk to our instructor about having you pose for us. That is, if you're interested."
Smiling, she looked up at me, an eager gleam in her blue eyes.
"Sure, I'd be interested. I guess you can reach me through Ms. Reynolds in the Art Department."
Suddenly, they both smiled, almost as if they knew a secret that I didn't. Glancing at each other, they gathered up their books and stood up.
"Great! I hope we can work it out."
The smiles had become smirks as they turned to leave. The blonde turned back, her brown eyes focusing back down at my bulging crotch.
"What did you say your name was?'
"Bill."
"Pleased to meet you, Bill. I'm Ashley, and this is Madison. We look forward to seeing you again, all of you."
They both dropped their eyes back below my waist, leaving no doubt exactly what she meant. They smiled broadly, and then they left, giggling.
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Love the pacing
Really nicely done. I like the way you're drawing this out (no pun intended). Can't wait to see where you take it from here.
5 Stars again!
I've read your notes after recently discovering this great tale. Your best quote in my opinion is along the lines "don't let my fantasy spoil your reality". It's just a story people. Stop trying to find flaws. It's an excellent and original story. As to the "what's in it for thr guy?" comment, what submissive lover of beautiful women with a tease mdenial fetish wouldn't dream to be in this very spot?!! Well written, truly artwork in my mind. Thanks, hope to see more!more...
what happened?
Story seems to have come to a halt.
BTW, I agree with the anonymous poster who asked "What's in it for the guy?"
Will something happen soon?
We are 7 chapters in yet every 1 has been a copy of the first chapter. Wouldn't now be a good time to move the story along into some more interesting areas as things have got alittle tedious.
Also why has our small brained hero never asked what's in it for him? It's obvious that these freaky women want him bad for whatever reasons and yet this young, good looking, athletically built, well hung guy hasn't once asked any meaningful questions as to what he will get out of participating in the club. If it's the occasional handjob then what's the point in taking part?
He is 1 of only 20 men in an otherwise all female school and with his looks and big dick could easily bang a different girl each week and yet he is wasting time searching for scraps.
I hope you don't take my comments as me being some kind of troll taking cheap shots at you because I do like your style of writing and plot is an interesting 1 I just fear that as you say in your profile that you've been writing this for a couple of years I don't want to be reading this for another 20 or 30 chapters hoping that something will happen soon.more...
WVC Notes
If you've not read them on my Profile page, you might want to take a look
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