You Can’t Stop Me Ch. 08

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Carmen looks conflicted.

"I'll work on it," she offers. Ashe accepts that. I think she still believes Carmen's crazy, but a manageable crazy. I'm praying she's right.

(Two Years Later)

I'm walking onto the porch when Carmen opens the door. Even when I'm early she always seems to know when I'm coming up to the house. She has little Steven on her hip and a broad grin on her face.

"Was he any trouble today?" I ask before kissing my wife and tussle my son's head. He bats at my hand and giggles. Carmen hungrily kisses me back telling me with her body that today's been a good day.

"He's been an angel, like his father," she smiles. "I can tell by your face that you have good news." She knows what it is but allows me my moment.

"I got the fellowship grant. I'm going to get my doctorate," I crow. Carmen hugs me. She knows that getting my doctorate will most likely lead to a teaching position at the college, which will mean staying in the house and home forever.

"I have good news too," Carmen responds. I let her have her moment's hesitation before she continues. "Ashe is going to do her residency at the County General Hospital. She'll need a place to stay until she gets enough for her own place."

"And?"

"I told her I'd have to check with you, but I sort of promised her a room. That way she'll get to spend time with her godson," she grinned.

"Which means we'll have a few nights to ourselves," I tease.

"Only if you want to," she acts demurely.

"I want to ..." I smile.

"I love you Rob," she says.

"I love you too," I respond.

FIN

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pjpbpjpb2 months ago

5/5

Original, crazy story

Many grammar errors and missing words, though

cutedaddy69cutedaddy693 months ago

So now he's complicit to the actual murder of his best friend?

You know how to tell a story, gotta hand it to you. But Rob and Carmen have issues. They're murderers, for one.

Kind of kinky. Too kinky for the suspension of my disbelief.

Yet, 4* and the sloppy writing full of errors forgiven.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Ok. Just read the entire series. The story is disjointed. The writing and grammar are poor.

WargamerWargamerabout 1 year ago

Wow!!!! What a good story. I really enjoyed it.

Scores a well deserved 5/5

Please keep writing.

heartlesslycan120heartlesslycan120over 2 years ago

Wow, among all your stories that I've read, this is the first you've finished. All in all amazing story.

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