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Say "no". No I won't touch another man's cock. No I won't kiss you after another man cums in your mouth. Yes I will give you a divorce after I hide most of our assets. No way he does anything for her other than divorce her. Really stupid ending.

Submission Title:  Payback
Category: Group Sex
Author: elia_cdl
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 24  Comment(s)

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NOT IMPRESSED

SORRY not what I come to this site for. This dose not even belong in this section.

Submission Title:  Liam Ch. 03
Category: Gay Male
Author: Lucas96
Comment By: 63lsmith
Submission Has: 4  Comment(s)

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Good stuff.

G'day! Love yr work. Always fives from me. My only comment is yr a bit light on body description. Keep up the good work, Dan

Submission Title:  Astarte Ch. 02
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: julybear7
Comment By: wicked62
Submission Has: 14  Comment(s)

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When they got home?

Tom applied for a transfer to another city. Telling Pam he got a promotion, they sold their house, sold their share of the cabin and moved away. He never spoke to Rita or Dave after their last weekend at the cabin. What? You think he was stupid? Rita has his balls in a vice. Best to be long gone. When he moved, he started hiding assets, made sure they didn't buy a house but rented all in preparation for the day Rita might call Pam and tell her what happened and Pam would want a divorce. This was a train wreck looking for a place to happen. He should have lied to Rita in the first place. She had no proof.

Submission Title:  Lovely Rita
Category: Loving Wives
Author: Harddaysknight
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 49  Comment(s)

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Yep

All women are lying, cheating conniving bitchs at heart.

Submission Title:  Yellowstone Discovery
Category: Loving Wives
Author: itmgr2010
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 127  Comment(s)

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Here is the main problem with your story.

Your narrator is repugnant. I hate him. I don't want him to win. I want him to lose. He goes from extreme passivity, which makes me not like him, to extreme crazy evil, which makes me hate him. If the change was interesting, that would be one thing, but it isn't. I think what you have done is to come up with a concept for a story. Actually it's more of a fetish niche. That isn't the basis for a good story, because there is nothing human about it. Nothing real.

Submission Title:  The Exact Moment...
Category: Loving Wives
Author: Firsttimeguy
Comment By: MaFrepler
Submission Has: 117  Comment(s)

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When she got up?

He was gone. She went to the golf course but he was not there. By the time she got back to the house, all his things were gone. When she tried to call him she found his cell phone had been disconnected. She tried her cell phone only to find it to, had been disconnected. The next day she discovered her credit card wouldn't work. Then she was served with divorce papers. She never saw or heard from him again. He had quit his job and no one knew where he had gone. The end.

Submission Title:  Appearances
Category: Non-Erotic
Author: FreshPeach
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 14  Comment(s)

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Delightfully unique!

Well! This a pleasent change from the average werewolf, (wererabbit?), romance. Your story has many new and potentially interesting avenues that could be explored. I hope that you won't become lost on the sloppy sex trail. It's like salt on fine cuisine. A pinch may enhance the taste, but too much will quickly ruin the meal. So far, though, a fun tale and good reading!

Submission Title:  Work The Problem Ch. 02
Category: NonHuman
Author: Mr_Shoggoth
Comment By: PerryNormal
Submission Has: 3  Comment(s)

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Review, suggestions, praise

I really liked this story in the SIL category because it does carry a heavy verisimilitude that pulls you into the story beyond just reading to get off. Been wanting an SIL story like this. The SIL not wanting it was best; love to see more of those<br /> I do agree about the occupations being distracting. Do they have to be in competitive successful fields?<br /> As for repercussions, perhaps brad obsesses over the moment to the point that he swears it wasn't him and becomes suspicious. This makes the next attempt at roofie sex with Amy a greater challenge leading perhaps to another delivery method and/or approach

Submission Title:  Roofie Coladas
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: Cagonzon
Comment By: WileyDomNoob
Submission Has: 27  Comment(s)

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Only 4 stars

Because she humiliated him! I love women's feet as you can see from my site name. I'll worship the lady's feet, but I'll control the action. If she tried to treat me as she did him, I'd be out of there in a flash! I'm willing to worship her feet, but any attempt at making me her foot slave will result in disappointment for her! She can masturbate, but I'll be gone! I won't put up with her abuse. I don't abuse and will not be abused! Feet and toes are to be enjoyed, and there is no need for how she treated him.

Submission Title:  Ankles, Arches, Heels and Toes
Category: Fetish
Author: TF2123
Comment By: legsfeettoes
Submission Has: 4  Comment(s)

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A delight.

Though still somewhat taboo, so many of us natural born cuckolds are finding our place. I look forward to more of this series.

Submission Title:  Elizabeth Finally Blacked Ch. 02
Category: Interracial Love
Author: everyonesavoyeur
Comment By: CumSlurpingCuckold
Submission Has: 8  Comment(s)

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Decent Start

not a bad first story. You wanted constructive criticism, so here's my two cents worth. In my opinion, the most important thing in an erotic story, is not the sex, but the story. Your sex scenes aren't bad. They're well described, although the language is a bit unrealistic. My issue is that there isn't much reason for the sex scenes. You basically wrote your characters as an excuse for a sex scene. Stories are much more erotic when the reader can relate to, or at least really understand the characters. You don't give us enough information to feel invested in them.

Submission Title:  Martin Men
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: folwer
Comment By: mcfbridge
Submission Has: 8  Comment(s)

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Thank you it was well worth the wait

This was well worth the wait and I can not wait to read more of your writing along with RecHiker's The Morrisons. Thanks

Submission Title:  A New Life for Dr. Mitchel Ch. 10
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: Fat_Dad
Comment By: Zephyr68269
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Delightfully unique!

Well! This a pleasent change from the average werewolf, (wererabbit?), romance. Your story has many new and potentially interesting avenues that could be explored. I hope that you won't become lost on the sloppy sex trail. It's like salt on fine cuisine. A pinch may enhance the taste, but too much will quickly ruin the meal. So far, though, a fun tale and good reading!

Submission Title:  Accidental Summoning Ch. 01
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: Mr_Shoggoth
Comment By: PerryNormal
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His promise lasted until he went to work

Then he realized what a dumbass he was, called his lawyer and started divorce proceedings. He never went home except when she left to go shopping and he snuck in and took all his clothes and anything else he wanted. She never saw him again as his lawyer handled everything.

Submission Title:  J*Kohle Punishes Her Man
Category: BDSM
Author: LiliesLaughing
Comment By: Anonymous
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