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cool story

Captured the English way of speech and language.

Submission Title:  The Reluctant Model Pt. 01
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: Victoriajohn
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Interesting twist

on how the cheating starts - quite original.

Submission Title:  Anita's Affair
Category: Loving Wives
Author: SteveLee1146
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I totally agree with anon 06/02/16 "☆☆☆☆☆..."

... a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.<br /> <br /> I have been bi curious since i turned 18. <br /> A few times i needed the job very very badly.<br /> A few times i was infatuated with one of the senior managers.<br /> Had anybody asked me to suck his dick, i would no longer be "curious"!

Submission Title:  Sucking Up to the Boss
Category: Gay Male
Author: REINER BENT
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You are just the worst

Do you ever feel like reaching through the screen and punching someone in the face? Well, I rarely feel that way. But having gone through Matt Moreau's stories, it's apparent that he's in dire need of such treatment. I'm disgusted by the way he's always portraying his characters. This isn't writing, it's dribble. Literal diarrhoea

Submission Title:  David and Jennifer Hart
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Chapter 65 status

I wasn't able to write much over the weekend unfortunately, but I've written 12k so far, and I'm about half way through the chapter. <br /> <br /> Tefler

Submission Title:  Three Square Meals Ch. 64
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: Tefler
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Re:anon

"Alyssa's telekinesis going from just specific substances to Sakura's glass"<br /> <br /> That's been happening for quite a while now. The first time was when she smashed the lamp on Oceanus, but she moved a chair in their bedroom, and threw around mikaboshi's soldiers. <br /> <br /> Regarding Medical training time: It seems an odd thing to be so contentious, and when I started writing the series, discussing "space school" wasn't really the point of the story. <br /> <br /> There are all sorts of futuristic ways that training could be speeded up: memory enhancers, synaptic stimulants, or they might have perfected sleep-learning to avoid having to waste time memorising information. Pick one (or all) of them, and there you go... Learning 28th century style!<br /> <br /> Their training didn't include residency, as newly qualified medics would be heavily supervised after they were sent to their first post. <br /> <br /> Tefler

Submission Title:  Three Square Meals Ch. 64
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: Tefler
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Untitled Comment

Author, Good first effort. Story line was predictable but well written. Enjoyed your first effort and look forward to the continuation of the story. Thank you for the read. jntiques

Submission Title:  Family Matters 01
Category: Mature
Author: naughtyconfession
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Great

Keep it up, I hope the next part comes soon.

Submission Title:  High School Harem Pt. 04
Category: Erotic Couplings
Author: Cheat105
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sbrooks103x

'“She'd made hers and in such a public way. Something she'd refused me for the past ten years” – Technically, SHE didn’t, and it’s STILL possible that she didn’t know what Nigel had planned.'<br /> <br /> The last thing her husband saw before rushing out of the place was her reaction of smiling. This woman knows her husband is already incredibly upset and her marriage is hanging by a thread, and in response to a man either publicly revealing or at the very least making it appear as though they've been having a romantic relationship, she's all smiles?<br /> <br /> I imagine this story is going to end up with it being some sort of misunderstanding because of the scheming "D," but I have I also feel there are going to be some serious plot holes, in that case. Hopefully I'm wrong.

Submission Title:  Trials of Love Pt. 01
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Wine and Dine?

Two bottles of wine? And then she opens two more for her visitor? She must own a brewery. And then she sleeps with him on the same day she met him? Following the theme of most of the stories on LW. He has an eight incher, Why does it always have to be a monster cock in all this similar storys? Made me think it was written by a juvenile male. I am seventy years old and i have been a player all my life and i´ll tell you I have yet to meet someone as you describe her. There has always been some sort of flirting first and we don´t go to bed on the same day we meet. But oh well. It was a nice story though I think it was very well written and overall I liked it. Except for the amount of wine and the first day with no preliminarys deal. Keep on writing and keep up the good work.

Submission Title:  Lonely Wife and a New Neighbor
Category: Loving Wives
Author: drunkwife
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Answers :)

Ok so lots of questions! I will answer what I can without giving too much away. <br /> <br /> Although, first things first - whatever you want to say about my writing, i rarely delete negative comments. However, any comments that are abusive or name-calling to other commenters will be deleted IMMEDIATELY. There is no reason for that. Period. If I need to, I'll stop letting people comment anonymously although I prefer not to do that as I understand a lot of readers don't have profiles and I still want to hear from you!<br /> <br /> 1. Longer chapters - unfortunately, writing the free stories for Lit (while something I super enjoy) is done in between my day job, my real life, and working on the books I put out to publish (see my website or blog for details), which sometimes doesn't leave much time. I occasionally choose to do shorter chapters in order to get them out faster, rather than making everyone wait another week or two. It's a trade off. <br /> <br /> 2. Trish's health - some things, like bathroom needs, I tend to leave up to the reader to make up for themselves, because I'm not super interested in describing it :P some things get glossed over. She also stops crying as much after this, but don't worry, Jordan still keeps a sharp eye on her health. <br /> <br /> 3. Their relationship - if you've read TbtW, you know how this ends. The ending is not going to change. If you're looking for a diff kind of ending from me, just stop. There are plenty of other authors who write those kinds of endings. I prefer indulging in the real fantasy of it (which I hope would never happen in real life, because wtf, but as a fantasy it's what I enjoy). IRL, I'm huge on women's rights and issues, I don't even like rape-play, but it's one of my favorite categories to read. As long as it's pure fantasy, that's what I like. <br /> <br /> And yes, I would like to explore past where TbtW ended :) <br /> <br /> 4. People in the compound - one of the big draws for writing Trish's story was why she's treated diff. I hinted at it a lot in TbtW, but never really got into it. Unlike Alex and Bella, she spends a lot of time seeing the other side of the compound residents and the Earth community, and that's what I wanted to explore with this side of the story. Now that we're getting past the initial part of the story, I'm going to hand a lot more freedom from the original story line to get into the community, and I really can't wait!

Submission Title:  Taken by the Viking Ch. 05
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Thanks for reading!

Thanks for reading, both the story and this comment in particular! Just so you know, if you like what you see here, there's more for you to enjoy! I don't upload everything here because, honestly, literotica's submissions process is kinda a pain to deal with. But you can check out my patreon page if you want to to see some cool bonus chapters, get access to my new stories up to a month early, and even vote on what chapters I do next! <br /> https://www.patreon.com/AdmiralSquish<br /> [/shameless plug]

Submission Title:  By the Horns Ch. 04
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
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Another good chapter.

The relationship between Jen, Mike, Frank and Allie is what's important, not the sex. The fact is Jen should divorce Mike because he is a little boy, always needing reassurance. You even said it when Allie confronted Mike about his issues, Jen does what Mike wants but when she does, Mike blames her for it, who wants to be married to a baby?<br /> <br /> Not only that, but Frank is better for her. Yes he shares her body but he doesn't share her heart. Mike shares her body AND her heart and you can't date and break up with so many people without becoming jaded, calloused. Jen needs a man who wants her and Mike needs to find a man who accepts him for the boy he is...or finds bullet in his brain.

Submission Title:  Cheating and Rivals Pt. 51-52
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little feed back

I think it may have been better if Kevin and Beth witnessed their parents doing something and with the hand job already happening Beth loosens up and things escalate from there such as both kids planning to seduce their parents when they have "alone time" with them

Submission Title:  Nudist Family Holiday Ch. 03
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