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Submission Title:  Office Politics Pt. 01
Category: Transsexuals & Crossdressers
Author: JJennings
Comment By: hornygirl01
Submission Has: 11  Comment(s)

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not totally obvious

Very well written when compared to the majority of submissions to this site. A few errors but nothing that detracted from the flow of reading. I did foresee the ending you used but it could have gone other ways, so it was not obvious. I would imagine with this ending, there could be a second chapter. After all, Denise and Carol didn't just gather up their things and exit the home, leaving Paul to his own obvious problems.<br /> 4 stars

Submission Title:  Dad's Loan Is Due
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: Bakers_dozen
Comment By: Nitro70652
Submission Has: 3  Comment(s)

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Good/Bad

The story was excellent; I gave it a five! The writing was so bad I almost decided to quit reading it. There were too many problems to list. If a good editor rewrote this, every voter would give it 5 stars!

Submission Title:  Fall Cross Country...
Category: Loving Wives
Author: StangStar06
Comment By: derek33
Submission Has: 61  Comment(s)

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Incredible story

I never want this to end! My favourite part of this story is the first few chapters where you really took your time to give us some background information. I love all the little details. This story feels so real!

Submission Title:  Rory and Sebastian Ch. 21
Category: Gay Male
Author: sebastiando
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 16  Comment(s)

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Fantastic!!!

Absolutely loved this story,please continue soon.Can't wait to see what happens next.

Submission Title:  The Titles of Angra Ba'ahram Ch. 01
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: AdmiralSquish
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 1  Comment(s)

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PLEASE IGNORE PPL THAT SAY THAT THIS STORY IS BORING

Your story is so much more than shallow porn. It is a work of art! You are an incredible writer! Please elaborate on this story as much as possible. The way you portray the characters is lovely and I want to have as much background info as possible. I never want this story to end!

Submission Title:  Rory and Sebastian Ch. 21
Category: Gay Male
Author: sebastiando
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 16  Comment(s)

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You must love getting low scores.

Submission Title:  My Moroccan Goddess
Category: Interracial Love
Author: Samuelx
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 2  Comment(s)

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Rules

Good start<br /> <br /> To the Anonymous commenters: obviously, you missed Rule 3. He can tell some people about the genie, but he can not tell all people, i.e. he can not tell the public about her. Did you miss that paragraph on page one?

Submission Title:  A Boy and His Genie Ch. 01
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: DragoTime
Comment By: OneNemesis
Submission Has: 8  Comment(s)

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O My Goddddd !!!

I loved it.

Submission Title:  Cuffed and Stuffed
Category: Erotic Couplings
Author: 911Chicka
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 5  Comment(s)

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And then?

You have left us hanging here, with no promise of a further chapter. Surely it must be more than this, well-written as is is. More, please -- four stars.

Submission Title:  Trust
Category: BDSM
Author: sappharia
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 2  Comment(s)

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More please

I hope you will continue Jackie's story. It looks like she can give David a run for his money.

Submission Title:  Broken Ch. 04: Jackie's Story
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: DarkFantasy56
Comment By: Plegamans
Submission Has: 1  Comment(s)

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Great story, thank you!!<br /> Looking forward to your next!!

Submission Title:  Red Light Risks
Category: Loving Wives
Author: steelring
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 14  Comment(s)

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Congratulations on your first submission!

The first story is always the hardest. I'll give you a B minus, as the grammar is fairly good, as is the construction. Barepusslover is correct about the character development. We need to know more about these people and why the do the things they do if we're to care about them. If you can do that, then your stories will become erotica and not just porn. Waiting for your next offering...

Submission Title:  First Time Anal
Category: Anal
Author: bigtasty101
Comment By: ham_sandwich
Submission Has: 3  Comment(s)

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I like the fatalistic quality of this piece....

...How the outraged, cuckolded husband confronts the prick in the early hours.<br /> What leaves me cold here, is that he did not also plunge a 14" carving knife into the cause of his grief....his wife. It was her actions that constituted her betrayal the dandy was just tempting candy. Deserving of some form of punishment, but wifey was the traitor.<br /> Why do people transfer their hurt, anger and frustration to the paramour? Apparently, in a smaller portion of the cases, they put blame squarely on the offender, only blow back on the co-conspirator.<br /> I was especially fond of a Midwestern woman that upon discovering her husband's affair, quickly learned the identity of his interest, but ran him over (11 times, I note here) on the sidewalk of their medium-sized town. The girl....also enjoyed extensive damage from a related incident.....but was left alive to experience the suffering of her extensive injuries for her knowing participation. Hubby lived about a week before failing from the extensive injuries. Wifey's punishment? Aggravated vehicular manslaughter and vehicular assault with intent to do great bodily harm. The defense was masterful, but she did do hard time. Over she slept better nights, knowing the cause of her distress and a cooperating criminal were dully punished for their crimes.<br /> Sadly, in this world, the criminal behavior that brings about vengefulness is usually ignored for the sake of prosecuting the wronged vengeance-taker for their vengeance. If recompense for betrayal is non-lethal, it should be devastating, permanent, and allowed as justice for the wrong done. Used to be, a duel at dawn and a wife put away were honored. Ahhhh, we've sunk so low.<br /> I wonder, if in society, proving infidelity included the right to exact terrible revenge might not prevent some of the most hurtful and damaging betrayal.....hmmm.<br /> That might be an interesting basis for an alternate reality story....hmmmmmm.<br /> Anyway, thanks......it was a near miss for me. He should have burned down the house, with her in it knife sticking out of her dead heart, as he left to take care of the curly-haired randy dandy.

Submission Title:  Journey's End in Lovers Parting
Category: Loving Wives
Author: potsherd
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 7  Comment(s)

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My recommendation Val

is to remove the panties and save on laundry.

Submission Title:  The Landlord's Daughter Ch. 02
Category: BDSM
Author: AlphaBeatHer
Comment By: AlphaBeatHer
Submission Has: 3  Comment(s)

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