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I know it's been a while since you updated this story but I am absolutely obsessed with Jason and Clara's relationship and desperately want to know how it works out. If you could post the rest of whatever you may have, please! Your writing is enchanting and I cannot get enough. Thank you.

Submission Title:  Born From Silence Ch. 03
Category: Erotic Couplings
Author: LadyCytherea
Comment By: Anonymous
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And so it continues.

I had to finally give 5 stars. Although I am a bit discouraged that in just 2 weeks Jack managed to convince Kelli that it is his right to torture her beyond a little loving kink, I concede that the story was well written and will appeal to a great many twisted minds. In your favor, although I cringed and protested through much of it, I was intrigued enough to read to the end, in the same manner as reading a horror story, not able to put it down. At last, I give you kudos for your talent as a writer.

Submission Title:  14 Days To Redemption Ch. 14
Category: BDSM
Author: bbonz1
Comment By: JudyLee
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Well the previous beta male commentator sure got riled up

I say beta male because he made a threat about vigilantes and implied mayhem. God forbid it goes mano a mano. As for the story ? It was a stroke story that had a few bonus descriptions of the bucolic rural countryside. Not bad . The perpetual state of heat that Lisa exists in gets a little wearisome, but since I'm over 50 maybe the fault was mine. <br /> <br /> The author touched but never really examined a couple of flash topics like small town mentality at odds with beauty of nature, male hierarchies and how a " hot woman " purposefully inflames limited sensabilities by flaunting her " hot stuff ". There is feeling of lurking karma that could be inflicted on those who scorn fitting in with the small fry in small pond.<br /> <br /> The carnal scenes were vivid and main characters were given individual quirks and tics. Some of the passages were porn site trite but at times I felt the author trying to give big picture hints of explorations about larger themes and meanings. Will CorvusTurim111 succeed in rising above sordid and weary cliches ? I don't know but I give him credit for clear if sporadic attempts to do so.

Submission Title:  Small Town Woes
Category: Loving Wives
Author: CorvusTurrim777
Comment By: LordSlamdawgg
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Hi, Matt

Are you back, Mr Moreau? Your writing's certainly...abysmal as ever

Submission Title:  Breadwinner
Category: Loving Wives
Author: DanielQSteele1
Comment By: Anonymous
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WHEN ARE YOU PUBLISHING PART 3

Great so far! More Please! Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 10 stars = 100 %. Bye.

Submission Title:  Boy Sorceress Pt. 02
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: sycksycko
Comment By: Anonymous
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Amazing chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats!

Submission Title:  Robert & Beth Ch. 02
Category: Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Author: sirdix
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Ch 21

Ok guys I've been giving this some thought and I do agree it <br /> is frustrating when a story stops dead in it's tracks. I'd considered<br /> writing an epilogue to show where they end up but that seems <br /> a little too glib. So I'll carry on with the original plot line,<br /> if you don't want to read about other characters then feel free to skip these<br /> and re-read Bobby and Alison's earlier adventures. I'll hopefully have the time to<br /> get some more chapters uploaded a little more regularly now.

Submission Title:  Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 20
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: Dick_Spanker
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Great premise!

I like the idea, but am distracted by the frequency with which you use the words ass, pussy, and cock. I found myself glossing over the rest of the story following the first scene because the repetetive language was all i could focus on. I'd love to read an edit or continuation!

Submission Title:  Jane's Leash Pt. 01
Category: BDSM
Author: KinkySlut2515
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Kindly Update Soon

I was very much in love with the King due to his dominance, power, and masculinity)... Until he went in to his room and laid with that Maid :( <br /> Kinda sad to read that he laid with another woman after having Alais saved him AND got sick from the cold trip with him. I'm suddenly not in love with him anymore. Hopefully there is a good explanation in the next chapter to make Alais (or me) feel better. I know he is the king and he can sleep with whoever he wants, but this is a little sad. Can't wait for chapter 8. I am hoping to fall in love with the king again.

Submission Title:  At His Majesty's Pleasure Ch. 07
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: lady_temily
Comment By: Bingbonglady
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Could Mom become crew member?

Not that you want to take it in that direction but can we assume if his mother is alive she's still young and serving another Progenitor whether it's his father or someone else?

Submission Title:  Three Square Meals Ch. 39
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: Tefler
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This story seriously just keeps getting better, you're a very talented writer, I love how you can mix in such a good plot with such great erotica as well. Please keep the story going!!

Submission Title:  Cockatoo Pt. 27
Category: Transsexuals & Crossdressers
Author: nikkiesilk
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More responses to comments

First, thank you all for the comments and votes. It is humbling. In the first two days of this story it has received over 250 votes, and it is holding steady at a 4.84 rating. For my first story. Ever. Wow... [taking a moment to collect myself]<br /> <br /> ...and now to reply to my favorite comments.<br /> <br /> To Mojomaggie:<br /> <br /> Yes, his response was not a 'logical' one. Ask yourself why a character who is VERY logical would make such an obvious error. Did the author just not realize the mistake. I don't know if you re-read stories multiple times, or if you are a 'one and done' reader, but if you ever go back over this story again see if you can find any other instances where I had character act in less than logical ways.<br /> <br /> My Bachelors degree is in Psychology, and every named character I write actually has a psychological profile for them. As the character develops, I update the profile. Experience is the greatest predictor of personality, and if you remember back in Chapter 1, David broke up with his ex because she cheated on him while he was deployed. Now this would not matter at all if David had absolutely no regard for Laurena. So why bother to mention it? The most powerful lies we tell are the ones we tell to ourselves...<br /> <br /> To Anonymous:<br /> <br /> You wrote:<br /> Veteran = veterans (duh)<br /> Erosius = hippie civilians <br /> Amenemhet = Militant zealots of Foreign countries<br /> <br /> I gotcha brother (or am I way off?)<br /> <br /> My response:<br /> <br /> You are not off. Congratulations for being the first to point out the primary message of this work. <br /> <br /> They say write what you know. Well I know that my return to the civilian world was a massive culture shock when I saw how sheltered our society had become. Every time someone would say 'thank you for your service' I wanted to say 'fuck you for not having the balls to defend yourself' (like I said, this story was a kind of therapy for me...I have anger issues). Our 'everyone gets a trophy/participation award' society seems to think that if the terrorists just knew how awesome we were, then they would want to join us in our awesomeness (Erosian religious doctrine ring a bell?). This belief ignores the reality that they don't care what we think. They don't want our way of life, or our culture. They want to kill us and take our stuff so they can have it, all the while publicly claiming that our presence in their countries is the only reason they are fighting us. Uh huh. <br /> <br /> I'm working on a Masters of the Arts in Intelligence Studies (focusing on Terrorism), and for the last 100 years all terrorist acts have simply been the 'have nots' fighting to take from the 'haves'. The moral and ethical justifications for terrorist groups has changed over the last century, but the basics remain the same. And for those who think I am an evil, prejudiced simpleton. Books 4-6 will be my rebuttal. A hint, what happens when a military soldier who was trained to fight a counter-insurgency war has to start an insurgency of his own to succeed?<br /> <br /> To sithon:<br /> <br /> Read my above response to Anonymous again. Okay, now that you're back...yeah there is A LOT of anger in this story. I have a lot of anger in me. It is happens. This is my therapy.<br /> <br /> To Anonymous:<br /> You wrote: The only thing that I am concerned about is your thought of writing eight more novels of this length to complete the story line. What you have here is half of a very good tale. If you really plan on writing eight more installments of this story, you should have a shit load of new ideas and plot twists.<br /> <br /> My response:<br /> I actually originally envisioned the story as a trilogy, with each book broken into three acts. After 140k words, I finally finished act one book one. Then I edited it and pulled some useless, overly wordy crap out. 130 k words. Then I researched the average length of a commercially published fantasy novel. 120 k words. Looks like I just finished book one, and I have eight more to go. Shit...<br /> <br /> But seriously, I have a story in my head that I have to tell. I refuse to short change the story or the characters just so I can finish this project. So it looks like more is on the way.<br /> <br /> On the plus side, the first 2/3 of this book was written in a month. The rest took me about five more months because for that first month I was unemployed and looking. Then I was working full time. Then I was working full time and going to school full time. I tried to work on this a little bit at a time when I could, but did not get much done during that time. Then I got burnt out and took this month off of school, and told my boss to cut my hours back. After I slept for 12 hours a day, every day, for the first week, I decided to sit down and finish this. I wrapped up the last 25% of this book in two weeks, while still putting in about 30 hours a week at work. I have already started Book 2, and I have decided to publish this on Amazon so I when I do I will put the best bit of what I have written in the back of it as a taste / tease.<br /> <br /> Finally, I want to reiterate my promise to post an update my profit at least once a week to keep my dedicated fans abreast my evolving timeline. Any success I may some day have with this story I will owe to you all. Without your kind words and encouragement I would have finished this story over the next few years, and kept the completed works to myself. Thank you to everyone that commented for their kind words and helpful advice. I have found someone I actually trust (my best friend for the last 15 years) to help me edit this so the final published product should have fewer errors.

Submission Title:  Champions
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: ScreamingEagle101
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Fucking brilliant!!!!<br /> Rightly deserve the 5 Stars!

Submission Title:  Birthday Girl Ch. 07
Category: Romance
Author: Agera_R
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A bit dark

You write well as usuall, some of your stories have a 'dark streak' this is one of them. The story is well told but is to dark to land on my favorites

Submission Title:  Eco-"Friendly" Cleaning
Category: Loving Wives
Author: Tx Tall Tales
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yes it is 2016

readers should be able to recognize your primary character as a woman<br /> but<br /> there are many readers who get upset when they find LW not to their liking<br /> and others who struggle with the concept of Romance stories between couples of the same sex.<br /> It was not the storyline, or the caring relationship between Maggie and Evie<br /> rather, it was the element of surprise. <br /> categories give the reader an expectation and surprises are not always received well. <br /> perhaps a brief opening statement? some authors do it to let readers know to not expect graphic sex scenes, others do it to warn off the BTB crowd in a LW saga, and others do it to set up a unique writing style. <br /> keep writing, just give us a hint when there is going to be something unexpected.

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Most Comments:  7 days

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