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Love the story

Thanks

More please, so hot n sexy

I just re-read this story but it was like I was reading it for the first time. When I got to the end I saw that I had given it a 5 star rating, so that's how I knew that I had read it before. You write well. I like the transformation from the young wife who is repulsed by Mr. Duke...

Suddenly I find myself binging on 4rced2Njoy stories… and they are scary good!! As a part time woodworker I am suddenly also interested in creating a “sex rack”…

Hopefully there’s more to “cum” on this story, they have to go all the way …

Abby could also introduce Shane to her sophomore nipple piercing friends

But well written so far and a nice steady pace.

This chapter was tough for me -- I knew people would be unhappy no matter which direction this went. My apologies to those who were rooting for Michael. Personally, I feel that I wrote things very unfairly for him. But, at the same time, life is not fair and this felt like the...

I can’t wait to read more to this story.

My only complaint is that the story ended far too soon. I had no problem with Jimmy spending money on his wife’s funeral. As JB said, he loved her. That happens. Yes, even adulterous shitheads like Candy can still manage to have people love them. Even after all the crap they’ve pulled....

They didn't even try to collect his sperm for insemination ?

Now that he knows what a slut she is, is he going to divorce her ?

LW as a category is devolving into a collection of cuckolding stories... maybe it's time for that to be its own category.

Outstanding

I too find women's 1950s fashions attractive: The full flowing skirts; the big, cone-shaped breasts that the brassieres made you appear to have; real stockings. (The girdle and high heels I can live without, but I know other guys like them.) After several hundred words, I was beginning...

Doing great - 5.0*!

Too bad John didn't meet Martin at the door that Friday and smash Martin's face and nuts to a pulp. It would have been very satisfying. She was a very stupid woman. By the way, what is a men's jumper?

What a beautiful story. Ben is so lucky as is Allison.

Pretty entertaining. D

Wow, got chucked by the pool and everybody watching what a dumb ass. Should’ve gone with them and made Eric understand who is in charge, but unfortunately he let Eric know that his wife was in charge. Now he’s asking permission of her and her new husband for the night permission to...

Great story, again!

Brilliant and still more to come, we want it and you're spoiling us. Thanks for an incredible story, insightful writing and some exceptional moments, eg. Andi's Dream about Melony and Paul's seeing her at the cemetery. Look forward to your next contribution.

Very nice. Watch out for tense changes, though. You flipped to past tense briefly. Still deserving of five stars.

Still very good, still uneasy for his future. Hoping some context is coming.

This is uncomfortably good!!! His seeming to be non-aggressive, and/or her compliance/willingness, I’m not sure, but the concept and story are terrific!!

I’m curious though, is the fantasy of a woman enjoying her own rape a real thing, or just the perverted musings of an under-sexed...

Nicely done. Very good for a first story, please continue.

I am loving the build up to this. I have no idea how this is going to end but as you mention at the beginning of Chapter one that it will be a four part story I am assuming that this will extend beyond the berthing in Miami. You tell a good story but for realism I would appreciate...

@ Anonymous the first & Anonymous the second; thanks for commenting, it's appreciated, and it's good to hear you like the chapter. 🙂

The support of the Nigawan people for their former Kangess will become important...

And considering the twist at the end; remember that not everything...

Wow… Well written and deliciously erotic with orgasmic meatballs:). 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Great story!! Loved it!!

Whew! A tearjerker, Thanks

Still can't wrap my head around the fact this guy was still talking about how Linda could have saved her marriage by coming home in a taxi. News flash, Jimmy-boy, the marriage was seriously damaged when she dropped your hand to go dance with asshole and ENDED the moment she agreed...

Sort of of works sometimes, scare 'em straight I mean! Nice loving story!

Nice! A different slant on a familiar story line. Keep going. . .

What a tease. A good tease knows you can only pull this off so many times before a building falls on you.

Non -con. Is not usually my thing… but a caring and benevolent tormentor puts a healthy spin on this genre. I enjoyed this way more than I am comfortable admitting!! Onto night two…

I would rather wait a week to get a longer chapter.

Classy and unique. Thanks for a lovely cum.

This one was extremely hard to follow.