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Intriguing re-telling.

However, one must be allowed a moment of pedantry. The age in which you have set your re-telling that land was called Prydain NOT Albion, a name that came into being several centuries later when a different tribe came here. The people of whom you wrote were the Brython (Brythoniaid) whose language was a variant of the modern Welsh (Celtic people). The man was Myrddin Wyllt. He only became 'Merlin' courtesy of Geoffrey of Monmouth who wasn't born until 1095 AD. Just a thought. Good tale nevertheless.

Submission Title:  The Dark Chronicles Ch. 01
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: electricblue66
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Rushed

It feels very rushed. And she adjusts so quickly it's freaky.<br /> Naming songs relates it to our world, but unless there's substantial differences, that you didn't tell us about, the vast majority of people would not react to the werewolf heritage and vampire mate thing that way.<br /> She's less moved about not being human than I've seen some people react to finding out their great grand father was from country C instead of country A before they came to america.

Submission Title:  Tammy's Wolf and Mate
Category: NonHuman
Author: sexy_bosoxgirl
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Good review for your story (5). A life well lived is better than BTB. Also I found good reviews for Monkey Shoulder. Now I have to find a bottle.

Submission Title:  A Sincere Thank You to My Ex-Wife
Category: Loving Wives
Author: Hooked1957
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Brilliant

Absolutely brilliant I loved the whole story.

Submission Title:  Women's Studies Ch. 12
Category: Transsexuals & Crossdressers
Author: Son_of_Battles
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More

Please don’t end this story.

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Well, if it's a girl

They should definitely name her Aurora. I mean, that's just a no-brainer.

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Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: DoctorHook
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Epic!

Great story Sadkins! I will say I was slightly disappointed she didn’t get further into her transformation. A branding scene could have been ‘hot’... Great art by Rebecca as well! Even though she was rescued it was an epic series! 5 stars!

Submission Title:  Lost in Argentina Ch. 02
Category: Illustrated
Author: sadkins116
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Pure crap

1*

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Part 2222

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Why did she get so sunburned when she had only been "sunbathing for a few minutes" and then frigging herself presumably for a few minutes more before she was spotted and then been taken care of??

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Fun storyline!

This series has some great potential for future storylines and character development. However, the spelling errors and grammar issues are a distraction. Please edit and allow someone to check your work.

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Category: Anal
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Sneaky!

I liked your linked haiku very much. There's a clearly defined beginning, middle, and end, and the middle one is possibly the best thing I will read today. It could absolutely stand on its own.<br /> <br /> As long as it is "play" i'm not sure the heart is fooled. Especially if when we hit close we go back to tending the respective gardens of our lives. I suppose it depends on what we sow here, and what it is we'd like to harvest.<br /> <br /> Thank you for writing this one.

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How enigmatic!

I was looking for a sting in the tail but alas. 4* only

Submission Title:  Frank and the J Girls
Category: Loving Wives
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what? no mustangs?

StangStar would be proud! :)

Submission Title:  A Sincere Thank You to My Ex-Wife
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AN INSIGHT INTO POLICE REGIMENS

while the work and protection still goes forward, TK U MLJ LV NV

Submission Title:  Swamp Frogs Ch. 02
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