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Submission Title:  Sorority Submission: Lez Slave Day
Category: Lesbian Sex
Author: silkstockingslover
Comment By: Anonymous
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each story gets better and better your mind must be over flowing with sex problems ... I only wish I could act out just a few of your stories 10/10 for this one

Submission Title:  Exploring Sexuality: Cock Sucking
Category: Gay Male
Author: silkstockingslover
Comment By: coitusraptus
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I dont know when this whole story was written could be any time between '98 and now

But damn! I was looking for a pornless wank once and found this so I read the first one and now, I'm fucking addicted. The Voice is a great addition to everything, the story is good, the characters are likeable, and it's really good overall.

Submission Title:  Just the Six of Us Ch. 23
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: Mentalcase
Comment By: Thisguy5000
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Quit writing til you get an editor or learn to proof read yourself, how can you not see the errors? Its painful to read and not once have you improved since chapter 1, its gone down hill each chapter and I send the last comment, stop using babe/babes for EVERYTHING.

Submission Title:  Real Love Pt. 04
Category: Interracial Love
Author: TinaaT92
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 2  Comment(s)

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Wow, dude. Great to hear from you after so long. Super sorry to hear about how shit things have been going. Glad it seems to be getting better, though. Five stars cuz you deserve it.

Submission Title:  Therapy
Category: Non-Erotic
Author: guitargotmilf
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Amazing

Would be nice if there were more chapters seems like it would be a great story

Submission Title:  Sarge
Category: Gay Male
Author: sr71plt
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 7  Comment(s)

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well done

just long enough to really stir up the peanut gallery. <br /> just short enough to leave much to the imagination. <br /> ambiguous enough to straddle the divide within the panel of critics. <br /> <br /> the sign of a truly successful story? when the comments are longer than the text. <br /> lol

Submission Title:  Best Friends
Category: Loving Wives
Author: javmor79
Comment By: rightbank
Submission Has: 102  Comment(s)

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Gift of language

Man, a gift of language and a sense of humor, what a dangerous combination! I laughed all the way through your story. Good job :D

Submission Title:  Build Your Harem in Ten Easy Steps
Category: Humor & Satire
Author: Rubirosa
Comment By: Anonymous
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Fuck! I thought I'd give you the benefit of doubt after how painful chapter 1 was to read, but this was a lot worse!

Submission Title:  Real Love Pt. 02
Category: Interracial Love
Author: TinaaT92
Comment By: Anonymous
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"So Domi and I decided that tonighr we are all going to find Bice gentleman and not the sleeve bags we always run into. I'm getting older and my body is ready for some real loving and you know what I mean T. That is our mission tonight okay?"<br /> <br /> I stopped there, honestly, did you even proof read it? And use names not letters for people, it gets mighty annoying.

Submission Title:  Real Love
Category: Interracial Love
Author: TinaaT92
Comment By: Anonymous
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Please keep going!

I keep checking back to see if you added to this story or have finished it. Please keep it going!

Submission Title:  Savannah's Day at Work Ch. 02
Category: Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Author: KinkVariety
Comment By: Anonymous
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Grammar Nazi Corps

According to Georgia State University grammar errors is also correct. Just sayin'.<br /> <br /> Of course we won't even mention that the "mission" (as in official site emphasis) of Literotica includes the purposeful encouragement of improving the poster's command of the language. That includes spelling, grammar, correct use of idioms and colloquialisms, et cetera. To that end some of the more erudite authors here also volunteer as proofreaders/editors for the beginning author.<br /> <br /> So I sort of listen to "posters" (as opposed to authors) who state in your face that if we as readers have problems with them posting at a sixth grade writing level that we should fuck off and move on. If I still go ahead and read the poster's story and if the quality of the writing is so poor as to be distracting, I do move on....after scoring their (not THERE, THAIR, or THEY'RE) story(ies) at 1 star for their a-hole attitude to the reader.<br /> <br /> user: Lejeau

Submission Title:  Elaina Becomes Daddy's Girl
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: sexy_mama_09
Comment By: Anonymous
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Needs some editing. . . .

Nice BTB fantasy but in real life, hubby would be charged with the beating. Stupid to attack Bob in the hospital and very cowardly to do it while Bob was helpless. I don't know how this would go down in the UK but in the US, our hero would be arrested straight away, wifey would get a restraining order against him due to the drinking and violence, and she'd get the home while he would get lots of bills. Story was full of cliches and was repetitive. A good editor would really help.

Submission Title:  I Won't Stand For It
Category: Loving Wives
Author: michaellajones
Comment By: Vulcan_in_Ohio
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try to go slowly to the intercourse, not very fast, the charecter should do habituated with some openness with each other, seducing each other, not to hurry to the intercourse, mom should be objecting sexual offence but with some real argument she should be agree to do some stuff, after habituating this, slowly they should cross the boderlines, go ahead.

Submission Title:  Mom Named Barbie Ch. 01
Category: Non-Erotic
Author: PegasusRyder
Comment By: loverboy1983
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More of the same disconnect

she was going to break it off with her girlfriend but Alison beat her to it?<br /> if she has a car and he has a pickup why are they traveling by taxi?<br /> he kept vigil in her room for "several" days during which he didn't eat or sleep. <br /> on the third day mom and dad "again" brought him coffee and sandwiches .<br /> the time in hospital is very strange. she is in a coma, the medical team gives up on her and removes life support, yet after several more days she wakes up on her own, a bit confused but thirsty and able to speak, but no alarms go off, no monitors alert an ICU centre, and he has to track down a nurse to get her a sip of water? eventually a Dr. shows up as if it happens all the time? she stays on for a period that could be several different lengths of time. Is discharged to home and we never hear of a visit to a Dr. again. Not even a follow up appointment. <br /> then it all comes to a crashing conclusion with a hey mom and dad we have something to share with you before we go to the bedroom and make love, there is almost no reaction from the parents. just a that's nice, be gentle with her from mom and full approval from the judgmental and homophobic dad. <br /> ?

Submission Title:  Just a Kiss Ch. 02
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: VictorN55
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