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Thank you!

Thanks MajorRewrite...much appreciated!

Submission Title:  Extenuating Circumstances Ch. 01C
Category: Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Author: DocCIS
Comment By: DocCIS
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Welcome to my life

Emptiness: That is how I feel whenever God steps on me and kicks me aside and decapitates me and then finally Microwaves me. I so much so I call it BFJ (Big Fuck Jobs). I even thought of killing myself on those times, I'm still alive because I know that is what he wants, is for me to go home early. But still I couldn't help but have thoughts of killing myself. You see to me God is simply a spoiled child and a spoiled brat. That is why I question him.

Submission Title:  Emptiness
Category: Non-Erotic Poetry
Author: Shyguy1369
Comment By: Anonymous
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Love it

Loved the story, keep writing!

Submission Title:  Playing with Fire
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: travelor7579
Comment By: smyther1
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Works well as long as its not taken too seriously

Submission Title:  Gesus Louise
Category: Loving Wives
Author: Mainefiddleheads
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 18  Comment(s)

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A gresat story...

I think this is a great story by a gifted author....I can not for the life of me understand why people will vote this chapter a 2 and a 3... keep up the good work RCG...there are those of us who appreciate your talent and efforts!

Submission Title:  Tom & Sue & John & Debbie Ch. 13
Category: Novels and Novellas
Author: Reversecowgirl2014
Comment By: sexyjenny1995
Submission Has: 10  Comment(s)

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Wow

I just read this whole story so far in one go and all I can say is wow. So hot. Been waiting to find a story like this and I hope another chapter is on the way.

Submission Title:  Yours Ch. 06
Category: BDSM
Author: BackyardBottomslash
Comment By: sexymeginda
Submission Has: 77  Comment(s)

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Great Story

Such a great story and really well written.<br /> <br /> Loved the ending!

Submission Title:  My Birthday Treat
Category: Interracial Love
Author: rjd69
Comment By: Anonymous
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:)

Reviewing this on a phone keyboard, so pardon the inevitable mistakes.<br /> <br /> While it might be your least 'popular,' I always considered this story to be the most relatable in terms of actual visualization. You have such a deft hand for writing, and I remember reading this on fictionpress a while back in a whole sitting in one night. Rather amazing - I especially love the characters, but if I think I know what couple you're going to have Charlotte end up in, I'm not sure if you should have it so...happy ending type-ish. <br /> <br /> In a way, I most realistically see Charlotte as a hard-soul, yet ultimately sweet and loving person who has been tempered by her formative years as a gangster who has seen the underbelly of the gang life. But because of this, I can't see her ending up with Matthew because the man, thought probably her dream man, doesn't quite fit the person I thought she would end up with.<br /> <br /> In all honesty, I actually see her with Tommy! Shocking, I know! - but the thing is, i feel that she would end up with a fellow gangster realistically (even though this is all fiction), instead of Matthew. :/ Yeah, it's...strange, but with a few flashbacks of sorts where we see Charlotte's actual dealings and scuttling as a gangster - working with Beau and Tommy - and those sorts...yeah, I could definitely see her ending up with Tommy.<br /> <br /> And it doesn't help that I've always held a soft spot for the bad-boys ;)<br /> <br /> Also, if you're in need of a beta reader, I could have a stab at it. It's be a pleasure to beta read your writing. My email's: emilysascham@gmail.com if you still need one! <br /> <br /> Keep up the fab work :)

Submission Title:  A Trick of the Light Ch. 05
Category: Romance
Author: Itzy_Strange
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 18  Comment(s)

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Second time through this one.

Still one of my very favorites. So well written. This time I pictured Howard as Ben Carson. Don't think immediate divorce was the best alternative. Couples counselling first?

Submission Title:  An Absence of Trust
Category: Loving Wives
Author: coaster2
Comment By: Tim413413
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Liked it

You write well and fluidly. The little girl about to become a woman and yet scared of it is conveyed well, and it didn't just dcscend to a good rooting just for the sake of the story. I'll watch out for more, this story could build into something well worth reading. Unlike anonymous above I'm not bothered if this is factual or not, we are asked to comment on the story, so I have.

Submission Title:  I'm Katrina, This is My Story Ch. 01
Category: BDSM
Author: Midnight_Sleeper
Comment By: Anonymous
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Yeah, I know

I don't usually proof read my works, and I often miss things as I'm typing. As far as I'm aware I only messed up once... or maybe twice, still it wasn't too often as far as I know.

Submission Title:  Futa Note
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: sexgundam666
Comment By: sexgundam666
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Absolutely love this story. I read the first chapter when it came out and it was instantly one of my favorites, but then I forgot to check for updates after a few weeks when another chapter never came out and even forgot the name of the story, only that it had something to do with a polish name. So I googled my way and found the story again, and re-read the chapters in 3 "sittings" ...<br /> <br /> Would love more chapters, and maybe something where things get really serious between them. If he married one of them officially it would have to be Monica IMHO, but he could still unofficially marry both of them in private or something. Maybe a storyline that ends up as them "saving up" for two weeks or something before the wedding night where the three of them go all-out until morning, and have a fun honeymoon.<br /> <br /> Would also be really nice to see an epilogue to clearly end the story (it can still be somewhat open-ended for the readers imagination), set maybe 2 or 3 years after~.<br /> <br /> P.S. - Oh, and I almost forgot, please, PLEASE, do not write in another male character to join them in ANY way. If you really really feel you have to, MAYBE in the epilogue just in passing saying something like "Karly finally found someone who could keep up with her and married him", but I'd really much prefer if you just stayed clear of it completely :)

Submission Title:  She Hates Me? Not! Pt. 03: Together
Category: Group Sex
Author: ilikeithot6308
Comment By: Ladd_Russo
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More please

I loved it. I can't wait for the next installment.

Submission Title:  Do You Have Any Regrets?
Category: BDSM
Author: unpublaauthor
Comment By: Kristofe
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Anonymous is this what YOU'RE doing to stop the abuse of the meek and vulnerable? Harsh comments on message boards? Hurling insults? I mean, surely you can do something more meaningful. Maybe you should stop reading porn if all you have to offer are personal attacks on hard working writers offering the rest of us a fine story such as this?<br /> <br /> Also: fuck you.

Submission Title:  The Mentor
Category: Mature
Author: HuckPilgrim
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Great Story!!

This is an excellent story, well written and very erotic. More excellent stories like this please!

Submission Title:  Letting the Genie Out of the Bottle
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: DesignationWolf
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