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Oh wow I loved this. Beautifully written account - so realistic and honestly put. Delicious - can't wait to work my way through this series. Thank you.
All Comments/Replywhat's with the fucking domination kink? Why can't lovers be lovers?
All Comments/ReplyAnother hot chapter and now I can't wait to find out what happens with Felipe after that morning run.
All Comments/ReplyI stopped reading when Dan complained about his wife playing with the other woman so much. Totally unrealistic ! No heterosexual guy would ever act that way. Two unrealistic stories in a row. I’m done. Only a 2. No smiles.
All Comments/ReplyLiked this stream of consciousness; intriguing but not as erotic as you might expect given what is seen/smelled until his closing climax. Not as tumescent as could be. Minor observation: verb “filled” used three times in first two sentences. Hope you share more of your vivid imagination.
All Comments/ReplyI enjoyed your story very much. No sex but in the mind it was but a moment away. To me, the slow build-up is the most erotic regardless how far it goes, the promise of more to come or cum.
All Comments/ReplyGood well-written story. Couple quibbles: (1) the husband seemed too clueless particularly for an engineer; and (2) getting the whole story from a guy talking at a bar is just too unbelievable and too easy a way out for an author.
All Comments/ReplyWell written but overly predictable plot.
All Comments/Replylove where this is going
All Comments/ReplyWow, what a great series. I love it. My mom had big tits, not as big as in the story though, I have fantasized about fucking her, my Aunt, my Dad's sister, and my sister for many many years. Both my Aunt and my sister have big tits, bigger than what my mom had.
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All Comments/ReplyLittle take on John Wayne however Maureen OHara wasn’t a whore but a struck up bitch. Fun read
All Comments/ReplySeriously!! You put this in romance? I don’t think I’ve ever read a romance story that didn’t have a happy ending. I think the only ones happy with this ending would be guys who hate women. Otherwise it’s just a very well written sad story.
All Comments/ReplyIt's like the Toby Keith song (RIP). 'Wish I didn't know now what I didn't know then.' He knew and ignored it, fooled himself. The way it's left in the story calls for something more. D
All Comments/ReplyThanks, everyone, for the comments and ... suggestions? Particularly MongoliaJoe from a couple of days ago. I do want to remind people that I am writing this story as part of what I believe to be a three-way collaboration with a couple who has intrigued me with their willingness...
All Comments/ReplyMaybe pay more attention to the details? She’s a bit gangly, but a D cup bra seemed a bit too small?
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For first time sex for both of them, they sure seemed to know a lot about sex. The first head she had ever given, and she swallowed like it was nothing?
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The premise wasn’t bad...
All Comments/ReplyA little smile and a chuckle. What more could a writer want for his stories to be enjoyed
All Comments/ReplyThis one’s a sweet romance story. I appreciate your calling attention to the ongoing struggles that too many of our veterans suffer. The Rambo action-adventure scene didn’t resonate with me and it seemed over the top. The characters are interesting and likable, but I think they might...
All Comments/ReplyPardon my profanity, but FUCKING WOW! I've read many stories here on Lit that were a lot longer but didn't say nearly as much or were half as well written. And this resonated, a wound that has long since headed but definitely left its scar. This was one of the easiest 5⭐s I've ever...
All Comments/ReplyI’m a sucker for somewhat plausible time travel stories, and this is a good one. However, it will probably be another twenty years from now until we will be able to summon a car like a dog, I spite of what Musk says.
All Comments/ReplyKnow where this is going
All Comments/Reply10 Big Blazing stars. Hubby refused to see the truth early on, he could have "confronted" here and got it out a year sooner. Turns out that his "childhood" love was just a cheating, lying, slut with absolutely NO LOVE in here heart. People don't realize the hurt and harm that they...
All Comments/ReplyGood story about the dumbest engineer ever
All Comments/ReplyNice one! I learnt to drive on a Triumph Herald, according to my instructor they had a smaller turning circle than comparable vehicles of the time. My complete lessons and driving test cost less than £25!
All Comments/ReplyAnother good one, I would have loved giving this one the Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating that it earned from me. But when I click on the 5 stars to give it the rating I just get the circular clock going round and round for some reason. It happens every now and then.
When this happens...
All Comments/ReplyShe cheats and then has him served with divorce papers. What a bitch. I know that its just a story.
All Comments/ReplyI was surprised that he ignored the red flags for as long as he did. There were entire battalions of them marching over the horizon like an army. At a minimum he should’ve done some investigating of his own once she became cold/detached.
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As for the why? first, she became arrogant...
All Comments/ReplyThanks for allowing me to witness the therapy and the surrounds. And thanks for making it all inclusive.
Well written and thought through.
All Comments/ReplyShort and sexy, the story could have been really erotic if written more smoothly. For a first story, it's very good, but we're did this talented author disappear to. Sadly we lose to many like this but I have it 5*
All Comments/ReplyDamn, that was a fucking fabulous scene at the end. You always leave me wanting more. Thanks for sharing!!!
All Comments/ReplyRead this a second time after I read Ch. 6. Great plot. Ch. 6 inspired me to read Ch. 4 as well.
All Comments/ReplyWould like to see her burned a bit but good story. BTW not a big deal but, "mums the word," not "moms the word."
All Comments/ReplyGreat read.
All Comments/ReplyJust finding your stories. Few and far between, but quantity begets quality, very enjoyable , I would like you to write a bit more about JJ and Mike's lifestyle you could probably make that quite interesting.
But this has still earned you 5 stars.
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