Latest 15 Reader Comments

Great Story - Pity about the Writing

Comment By: OzBushranger

This was a great story ruined by a total lack of understanding of how to write. I fail to see how you can write a story of this length and not read it through before pressing the 'publish' button, The typos are glaringly obvious but, more than that, it the total absence of separation of character vocalisation from the story's narrative that makes it so hard to read. A read-through would also enable you to pick up those mix-ups between Ron and Tom.
Please take advantage of one of the editorial services on offer through this site. It would be a pity to waste such creativity just for the sake of avoiding embarrassment.

Submission Title:  A Traveling Salesman - 3  Comment(s)
Category:  Anal
Author:  JustaShot

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Good

Comment By: nominad

Great story! Cant wait the next chapter. Did he gonna scape someday? I hope so :D

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Comment By: MJMsPussycat

Boring Hell!!! This is Hot as Hell and I love every bit if it. Keep it coming. Looking forward to the next part.

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Thank you

Comment By: Turbidus

Thank you for the kind words. I'm happy to write for myself but it is certainly more rewarding when others enjoy the story.

Submission Title:  Shooting Matt Ch. 18 - 6  Comment(s)
Category:  Gay Male
Author:  Turbidus

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Oh yeah, this is good stuff!

Comment By: Anonymous

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you!

Submission Title:  The Next Door Wolf Ch. 05 - 5  Comment(s)
Category:  Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author:  destodes777

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Very fine work

Comment By: Anonymous

You are not only skilled in writing erotica but a damned good writer too. Comes from being educated outside of America, I assume. We must hope that you will return one day.

Submission Title:  Granny - 21  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  Many Feathers

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Control Your Language

Comment By: Anonymous

This is turning into an interesting story. Playing Zander as both savior and devil works well. It's interesting to see how Zander manipulates the situation. Every once in a while the language gets away from you and yanks me out of the story. The one that comes to mind is the navy sheets reflecting the quilt. Silly but navy doesn't reflect. Try match or complement, but reflect, no. This happens too often. Don't hit the thesaurus unless you are comfortable with the words.
I'm still trying to figure our what brought Zander out to the construction site. It's too easy. It's too convenient. Maybe I missed it, but why don't you have Zander stalking Rei early in the story and just have the others get there first.
I'm going to keep reading. The story hold promise.

Submission Title:  His Dark Knight Ch. 02 - 8  Comment(s)
Category:  Gay Male
Author:  YukiDorcha

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People Write This

Comment By: Sigint

for WHAT reason?

Submission Title:  Dear Random Soul Ch. 01 - 121  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  Nick_Nice

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UGH!!!

Comment By: Anonymous

Your character, Rob, is a real dickhead! Nothing mature about him! A 50 year old teenager who thinks with his cock instead of his brain!

Submission Title:  Brisket Ch. 02 - 107  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  ohio

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Thank you 5-Stars

Comment By: Anonymous

Coaster2,

You are an excellent author. I typically search the new listings for “Romance” stories followed by “Loving Wives” stories. Until your Legends Day “Trust Me” release I hadn’t discovered your enormous talent. Since that time I’ve read “Accidental Hero”, “Once Upon a Fantasy” and now “Act of Necessity”. I plan to start at the top of your list and read through all of your other posts. I like the longer stories a lot more than the one and two page “Wham-Bam-Thank You-Mam” variety. I hope you’ll keep contributing to our reading pleasure for many years to come. I just ordered a new Surface Pro tablet so I can continue reading away from home. I rated all “Act of Necessity” chapters 5-Stars.

I also got hooked on Harddaysknight, Lady in Red series. I think you and he are the only two Novels and Novellas authors I’ve discovered.

Submission Title:  Act of Necessity Ch. 09-10 - 3  Comment(s)
Category:  Novels and Novellas
Author:  coaster2

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Read this before but I'm desperate for a good read

Comment By: Anonymous

If you tell her about Carla.... turn in your man card!

Submission Title:  Guilt - 46  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  magmaman

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Just how 'adventurous' was Sweetie?

Comment By: Lickideesplit

Not exactly sure how this is LW! Accusations that even Hubby feels are probably spurious do not a cheater make!

Not many characters to like in this tale!

Submission Title:  Enough was More than Enough - 46  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  Slirpuff

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Made me hard.

Comment By: Anonymous

I got a rampant hard on and would have made a mess if the story had gone on much longer.

Submission Title:  Must Be My Lucky Day - 2  Comment(s)
Category:  Gay Male
Author:  LoveIsUniversal

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wow! 5 stars+

Comment By: Anonymous

Best definition of true human soul mate! Powerful! Bravo! Bloody well done! Human – Were fans a must read. Mho. Non-fans this story is 5• for true love...this ain't even close to yadda yadda were story!

Submission Title:  Soul Mates - 196  Comment(s)
Category:  NonHuman
Author:  payenbrant

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Comment By: Anonymous

Is there a part2 coming soon, like super soon?

Submission Title:  Dream Come True - 3  Comment(s)
Category:  Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Author:  CopyCat13

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