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Amazing story.

Comment By: Anonymous

This is one of, if not the best story I've read to date on this site.
You are an amazing story teller and I applaud your work.

5*

Submission Title:  Uncertain Justice - 137  Comment(s)
Category:  Non-Erotic
Author:  Longhorn__07

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Sorry this story gets nothing

Comment By: Anonymous

It's beyond stupid to ask for the biggest dick in the world. That is NOT funny. Most guys are average 5-6 inches as are most females 5-7 inch vaginas. You can stretch a 7 inch vagina to an 8, but it doesn't particularity feel good. Thicker may be better, but longer NOT SO MUCH. Guys want an 8-9 inch dick, but on average those DO NOT feel good to an average female. A guy with a 10inch dick will get as many females to beds as a 3 incher, NONE. Love life OVER! So this dumb ass ask for a 12 inch dick which will ONLY get him whores and they will grip his dick with two hands at the base to keep all but about 7-7.5 inches out of their pussy. WELL the truth be told most females that have experienced an 8 inch dick would rather NOT do it again. IT FUCKING HURTS!

Submission Title:  Finding Rachel - 5  Comment(s)
Category:  Romance
Author:  Hot_Sister

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Where is this town you can't leave?

Comment By: Vapspegeo

He was damn if he did and damned if didn't. He was caught cheating with the souse in a catch 22 or catch 74. When he went to work she'd say "I need you at home with me money can't buy everything." If he was home all the time she would say "we need money you need a good jobbbba." No matter what you do I'm going to screw the guy with the big money.
While he was talking to her after his plan worked he was having second thoughts about starving her out and cutting her off but, the writer wiped those thoughts away by again making her threatening to go back to her friend with benefits and to take the kids and leaving her husband penniless DID THAT MAKE SENSE!
When he's working giving her a good life she takes him for granted and cheats, where is that that never happens.Her Sister aided her to in cheating (what are sisters for and Brothers don't tell either unless they are cheating with the spouse)
I don't like cheaters but, you can't just make up shit so out of line and try to think we will accept it.
In the real world she would have had to try and kill the kids and be in jail before the court would not give her coustody and make him pay to take care of the kids he made no matter how little he made.
"Over the lips and threw the nose lookout pockets here it comes"
Small apartment, little house or living with her parents in a little house PAY.
I don't see the guy with the insurance money killing himself with the loot he got for his wife's death. They would have just taken the kids and ran Like thieves in the night.
What was in that town that made them not able or want to leave. They would have left even if the water made you not age.
Your story was too long and not on track for the real world, for that matter any world outside of your head. In fact a lot of the folks in your story opened the door for some serious ass kicking physically and legally. (remember he is a lawyer) The old woman spitting in her face young punk saying crap about getting in her pants for a three some. The writer made them weak of a fault to accept treatment like that you'd have to be brain dead. They would own the grayridge and either raise the rates so high they would have to find a place to live in town, remember no one could leave that town. Well not in your Bazaro world that plan with the graybridge worked so well, a bunch of senior citizens all with perfect mental facilities drove a lawyer to kill himself wow talk about a stretch. Also nearly everyone knew the plan even her mother yet no one talked. Then she whine to her mother about wanting her family back. Be real she'd have a better chance of getting ice water in hell in that world but, maybe not.
At that senior living home they have better security than the government. Good grammar, story needs work.

Submission Title:  Shattered Ch. 03 - 141  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  Azpiri

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Depressing, but interesting

Comment By: Anonymous

Pretty good period piece from a painful time in American history that the writer uses as an allegory for what his narrator is going through. Not every couple that loses a young child splits up, but they must be of strong character to get through it and stay together. With this couple, and their obvious lack of communication with each other, that would have been impossible. As for Anonymous of 7/27/16, I think the implication at the end was that she committed suicide because she couldn't live with the pain of her breast cancer. All in all, a bit of a downer, but well-written and thought-provoking.

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Sexy

Comment By: Anonymous

Great build-up. Loved this new take and wish there was more action between Purva and Sajid, and a couple of threesomes to notch up the erotica. Think about it! And keep writing!

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More

Comment By: Anonymous

More like this please

Submission Title:  My Cheating Boyfriend - 2  Comment(s)
Category:  Gay Male
Author:  SmellyFeetRsweet

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Well I enjoyed it

Comment By: Medicalpete

Read all three in one go. Really good. How lucky can a guy get and how can the ladies have so much fun. Really tickled my fancy!

Submission Title:  We Need To Talk Ch. 03 (Conclusion) - 14  Comment(s)
Category:  Romance
Author:  julybear7

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Part two

Comment By: sonic78

Needs a follow up with the son and his mates fucking all 3 sluts

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Great story

Comment By: Gwanji16

Wonderful detail, exciting build up. Of course, I have a thing for Brit girls, so I love your characters. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Submission Title:  Heather Falls in Love Pt. 02 - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Lesbian Sex
Author:  LimeyLady

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REALLY????

Comment By: Anonymous

you're a fucking dip shit ass hole! Any gut that would catch his wife fucking someone else wouldn't be getting turned on! You're a fucking wimp who should have his cock cut off and stuffed own his throat!

Submission Title:  Katie My Love, Why??? - 101  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  ThePastBehindMe

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A bit too fast

Comment By: Anonymous

Seemed a bit too rushed into the whole mom/dad thing. Was no slow build up to the parents joining in, needed some static associated with the new knowledge of what was going on and slow consideration of the aspects associated with the parent's becoming part of the activity.

Submission Title:  A Strange Encounter Ch. 04 - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Fetish
Author:  HunterShambles

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great story

Comment By: boaman007

I hope we have a sequel? I would love for you to have the two girls get together in various scenes. The mini van parked with the boys watching would be awesome. I am not so fond of the priest story line as others, I would prefer to see that just slip away. Anyway I am a fan thanks for sharing.

Submission Title:  A Different Kind of Love Story - 18  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  ronnie11

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I enjoyed it

Comment By: Anonymous

I know you had mistakes BUT I still enjoyed story.
Let's see MORE

Submission Title:  Wait, What? - 2  Comment(s)
Category:  Group Sex
Author:  nostranger2luv

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A bunch of Women Hating IDIOTS have filled up the Comments

Comment By: Anonymous

Do the research, jackasses!! When a young child dies, the psychologists and psychiatrists tell us, the husband and wife are going to break up! Why?? None of the docs know for sure! Remember "Physician" as a profession is about 4000 years old. But it wasn't until the middle of the 19th century that statistically, the doc was going to actually HELP the patient. Psychiatry as a profesion is only about 150 years old. (Sigmund Freud). They're still not much better than witch doctors; so they can tell you husband and wife are very likely to split after the death of a young child, but they can't explain exactly why.
Do you understand how your computer takes an on/off signal, (actually several quintillion of on/off signals in a fraction of a second) and turns that into what you see on your computer monitor? No? But you accept it, right? And believe what you see on the screen? Well, accept the fact that the mental health professionals tell us when husband and wife have a young child who dies, the couple are most likely going to break up, even if they can't fully explain why.

Nothing in the story said the wife was cheating. The dates of split and new child's birth are not spelled out clearly. Four year old child could be four years and fifty-one weeks old. Wife's gestation could have been 37 weeks or 42 weeks, which are the usual minimum and maximum gestation periods. Husband clearly could have fathered Katy.

Don't jump to conclusions, you misogynistic, knuckle dragging sixth-cenury A.D. bums.

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UGH

Comment By: Anonymous

Youre a good writer and the story is well written, but god damn Samantha is such a weak little bitch. Even if she did attempt to kill Patch, she felt guilty. Which she shouldn't have. Hopefully she develops into a truly strong noble woman. Not some petty excuse bitch like this.

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