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10 Big Blazing Stars for the ultimate BTB including the house! LOL What a burn! Perfect! I loved this story, it was well written, it included the PI report, and burning the cheaters at the airport upon their return! Perfect! Thanks, Buster2U

Kind of threw me, I kept waiting for the Loving Wife to show up but that never happened. still a good story, a lot of fluff but good. I guess if there were a LW it would have been Consuela for putting up with Bruce's depraved whoring her out. What a sorry bastard, but at least he...

Thank you for a beautiful story. There aren't enough of them these days.

GR8 chapter .

My kind of story! ... Brings back memories from those long ago days: College girls, hot sex!

... and, the writing is Really Good! ... You know how to tell a tale!

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take care, stay safe Levi Coldwater

To all the naysayers and to almost quote Taylor Tomlison as she gave her little jump, I just liked it dude."

I personally think the '1' rating should be removed (I don't think anyone truly HATES a story) but it is often used as revenge or the reader is just in a pissy mood. Maybe Poor would be a better description, reserved for the few stories that have no redeeming qualities whatsoever....

Can’t wait for more!!! Great start

Fabulous short romp with a slut wife and her happy and fully supportive hubby. Total fantasy, and almost silly, but the writing and the dialogue kept it reasonably serious. Definitely not to be taken as anything approaching reality. The author must have had fun with this little erotic...

It started last chapter, but the plot lines are too knotted together at this point. The detailed depth of character of Madison and Daniel reveal two incompatible people at their core. The great interaction with Michael and the writing on the floor gave the reader insight into Daniel...

I liked the early bit with the breakup and starting off in different directions, but the lighthouse horror lost me. Sorry.

Such a beautiful start!!

Subtly but obviously not written by a native English speaker. Kudos for how well it is done given that.

The "assisting the police with their inquiries" thing is purely British. The phrase is never used in US police work or prosecution, except as an ironic nod to British practice....

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Sweet und Romantique!

11/10 Ligonberries!!!!!

Well written, exciting and believable. Thanks for sharing

Did not do justice to the originals Thanks for trying.

Wow, managed to make him worse than Linda. That's an incredible achievement. Abandoning your kids for years is truly unacceptable. If you accept that he was emotionally unstable so it makes it ok, you should accept that his tramp wife had similar issues and isn't responsible for...

Good story. Cliffhanger at end. Cool. Thanks

Can I get my money back on this?

I thought it was a well written story I'm not sure on the ending though

Excellent. Having binged on all 16 parts so far, I can’t wait for more. Great work!

I agree with a lot of the comments and most were well thought out for a change. I didn't like the "cliff hanger" ending with the phone call. I think that could have been deleted, unless you are contemplating another story. A very strong 4 for me. Thank you.

Good, but I liked it better when I thought he was hypnotizing her during the interview.

Great little erotic romp!

Not sure what's up with V? I mean the easiest thing would be for her to fall in love after-all. But I'm hoping something else happens. In any case, I hope Harrison can somehow hurt her feelings a little as well. Maybe he can have her unlinked without telling her or something....

A really good wholesome sex story. Well developed.

You have again created a wonderful story that allows the reader to so easily visualize your creation. I can relate to the complexity of integral calculus and quantum mechanics. It is so well written it makes me wish I was a woman. 5 big 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Enjoyed it this time as much as the first time I read it. (Although you still have a few typos - such as "feel" instead of "feet"). Thanks. Doug (Lobosolo51)

Smart and short high 4⭐️

Good sexy adult story. Anonymous, go somewhere else to read, lots of good children's books at the library.

I love where this storey could go, please continue. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

BTB + RomCom and Debbi Macomber = a winning approach. I liked this one, short and sweet, with thoroughly likable characters (except the burnt ex of course).

Good read. Needs a part two.

5 Stars! Looks like Brad's the one who got screwed. Well done!

Excellent!