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ARGHHHHH!

Comment By: Anonymous

One of the worst RACC!! Simply unbelievable!

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New author to me

Comment By: enjayem

And I'm enjoying what I read so far. Promising start.

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from David teamhumanity@live.com

Comment By: cudsnuggleat

1968
You have some outstanding writing skills like character development.
For just one small example: "All had been warned off of course, but Joel had been more subtle, succeeding in arranging a hot date without Mickey knowing."

Submission Title:  24 Hours to Live Ch. 02 - 9  Comment(s)
Category:  NonConsent/Reluctance
Author:  mpqm1968

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Need an editor

Comment By: Anonymous

quite some spelling & grammar errors

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@MightyHorny

Comment By: DominantYetServile22

I love "The War of the Roses", but other than being dark and over the top, this isn't that much like it. In "Roses" we see the good side to both of the characters, we see reasons for them to do some of the initial things they do, the movie gives us reasons to kinda root for each character as well as root for them to reconcile, and as the movie goes on we might agree less and less with the increasingly scorched earth tactics they take with each other, but I didn't HATE either of those characters. Hell, there are even teases throughout the movie (even right at the end before they die) that make you think they might just reconcile. In this story we only see them at their worst, think if Roses started during the final murderous standoff in the house (the final act) instead of first showing us the humanity of these people and how their mental states progressed to this final stage for most of the movie, the feel of the struggle would have been different, like seeing random pot smoking, pre-marital sex having "cool teens" get killed in some 80's slasher flick. Nobody would give a shit how it ends. That's how this felt to me, just horrible people being horrible, characters whose lives concern me less than that of a random digital pedestrian in a GTA game.

Submission Title:  I am a Patient Man - 42  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  Skippy47

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the psycology of control

Comment By: chrissy2

I really enjoyed this and of course Shawn was very powerful .The way in which he picked up on the need so both was great I want sorry for them at all because they wanted it

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Good story.

Comment By: Zakfar

Overall it was a very good story. The scenes were good and the scenario was well formed. However, it lacked the tension and proper climax, which kind of made it monotonous. You many characters were actually forced into the story and had no play in the main story arc. You should have brought more drama into the main story, rather then just going from one scene to another. The end was pretty much clear from beginning, and it happened exactly how it was expected. You surely have a style of writing that you can build up a good scenario. I am sure once you will write something truly great in future.

Submission Title:  Finn Ch. 13: Chaos - 19  Comment(s)
Category:  BDSM
Author:  SyptemberSmyth

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This was not written by the same author

Comment By: Anonymous

I used to read. The story was not only substandard, in premise and in dialogues, it also was heinous in grammar, flow, and every other possible parameter.

I won't mind if it was a well written comedy. This was just piss poor on so many levels, again, it's hard to think it's written by "qhml1"

Submission Title:  Let Go - 164  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  qhml1

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I’m a bit disappointed

Comment By: Anonymous

The story was good, but I expected more from the conclusion of this story. This seemed to randomly jumble all over the place. Not the ending the story deserved. I hope to see a continuation of shudder in the college years, I found it much easier to get attacked to those characters, and would love to see more of them.

Submission Title:  Mind_Hack.exe Ch. 07 - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Mind Control
Author:  Kripto

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Skipping

Comment By: Anonymous

Seems like you skipped a chapter.

Submission Title:  The Deacon Ch. 03 - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  NonConsent/Reluctance
Author:  chunkyd1

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Next chapter?

Comment By: Anonymous

Its been so so so long. When will it be out? I have been checking daily... gm

Submission Title:  Lost in Argentina Ch. 01 - 15  Comment(s)
Category:  Illustrated
Author:  sadkins116

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Really dark

Comment By: Anonymous

Awfully dark humor. To point of dark awfulness absent humor.

Submission Title:  I am a Patient Man - 42  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  Skippy47

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Comment By: cudsnuggleat

MPQM
Who doesn't like highly entertaining erotic stories with a pretty woman.
I wish to imagine two beautiful twin sisters with each of us male readers. The nakeeeeeeeeeeeeeee sisters taking turns reading us the story aloud and making young free wild sex with each other and us . . .

Submission Title:  24 Hours to Live - 9  Comment(s)
Category:  NonConsent/Reluctance
Author:  mpqm1968

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Wow

Comment By: Darthboba

A simple I don’t like it would have been enough or you could have stoppped reading at anytime.

As for me I’m still waiting for part 3.

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@Luke "what do you catch with baited breath"

Comment By: FirstwithU

FLIES, Lue. Flies...
@Blackrandi....oh yes grits, lots and lots of grits. Thought you'd have more to say being a Professor of English and editor extordinair. Lol I'm just teasing you.
Not about the grits though, gotta have grits
@PKenny, still liking the story even if it reads like a high school English assignment, good marks from me.

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