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Comment By: Rebyal35

Loved it !!! We both (Chelle and Alan) listened to this together. Now we are going back and listening to the series from the beginning.

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Soo Hott MMMMM.....

Comment By: stacejo

Wet my panties.....

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Comment By: Deviant6767

Love this 2nd chapter. Just as powerful as the first. Definately recommend this authoress to anyone.

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Why would anyone consider reconciliation?

Comment By: Anonymous

Seriously? She carried on a long deception, impugning Ryan to her lover, admitting that Ryan wasn't able to provide what she needed, lied, manipulated, gave away sentimental keepsakes and disrespected him. How can you trust someone like that? She was demeaning to Ryan and the family in the video. Just ridiculous if you want to try to reconcile.

More thoughts...

Going to a therapist to find out why she did it? That is more rationalization. The only answer is that she doesn't love him like a spouse should. If she did, there is absolutely no way she could do something this hurtful.

Deanna claims she loves Ryan. Ryan accepts in this last chapter that she loves him. Sorry, but no. See the point above.

Why does he easily accept that he will pay child support? He should be fighting to keep his children away from her custody as hard as possible. Why would anyone think it was acceptable to allow the kids to live with someone with no morals?

Submission Title:  Live from the Game Ch. 04 - 175  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  jezzaz

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Excellent chapter!

Comment By: Apple_of_Eden

Another great chapter to your story poeticlicense. I'm enjoying this story greatly. I don't find myself hating Lace. I might miss him. I hope he comes back into the story somehow.

I'm not sure it's a good thing that I like him, but it is what it is. Of course, a lot of people disliked my "Jamie," and I love him too. I tend to like a little of the bad boy type in my Dom, not cruel, but bad boyish. Hmmm...I may need to think on that a little.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Apple 🍎

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Great Story. Definite room for one more, but a decent end as is.

Comment By: GranthamEK

This was a great story. Everything fit with the characters you developed over the course of the story. I don't mind the D/s concept in stories, but mainly prefer it in forms such as this with a more gentle caring feeling.

Given the disposition of Erin along with the love she obviously holds for Kim, I don't believe that it was as one comment mentioned "A bit odd that a new-to-lesbianism would so quickly accept a Domm role."

After going on her own to mull things over for a few days, she decided her love for Kim made it worth at least trying it out. Being a natural leader can translate into dominance. With the inspiration gained from reading about D/s online, along with the interest and enjoyment she found in some of it, she gave it a shot with the same determination and commitment she has in other aspects of her life(this exception being further fueled by her feeling for Kim).

I know there are always people who want a bit more of stories they enjoy. I often feel that way too, but certain points are also a good end. In this story's case, I wish one more chapter had been done. This new D/s aspect was introduced and they had their first time trying it out, but there was definite concern Erin felt with her overall understanding and comfort with the concept. The story only ended with trying out the sexual aspect. D/s, particularly in the way Kim wanted it, is a lifestyle, and not just a sexual fetish. One final chapter could have shown how Erin was coming to terms with this new aspect of their relationship, both the sexual aspect and everything else. The dinner with the parents and fully "coming out" would be a welcome topic, but that pales in importance beside the concept of Erin's acceptance of this lifestyle. For Erin the idea of D/s is far more complicated than the idea of her being in a lesbian relationship. At least that's my take on it.

Nonetheless, thank you for this wonderful story. Even if this is all there will ever be, it was well done and enjoyable.

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Another classic by SpamuelX

Comment By: Anonymous

More of the exact same garbage we've seen 2000 times before. How do you write so much and never get any better? Are you even trying? If you aren't trying to get better, why are you dumping this garbage here?

Submission Title:  Fatima Sayyid of Vanier - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Interracial Love
Author:  Samuelx

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Ever notice how the most critical people are anonymous?

Comment By: Lee2012

Loved the story with one draw back mentioned by another poster...got lost between mom yelling about the bf - flash back - then dad putting mom in her place but all in all, excellent story with vivid blowjob description.

Adding you to my short fav list

Lee

Submission Title:  Daddy Teaches - 12  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  DaddysHellion

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grammar

Comment By: Anonymous

1. OVERTED
2. WOULD/COULD/SHOULD'VE OR HAVE, not OF

Submission Title:  Sea, Sand, and Sex - 4  Comment(s)
Category:  Erotic Couplings
Author:  Timkitten

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Vaiting

Comment By: dejandejan79

3 month we waiting for next chapter

Submission Title:  My Mom is a Hot Mom Ch. 05 - 37  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  SimonDoom

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so...

Comment By: Anonymous

...she can only say honey and this rips off another story with a whore.

Submission Title:  Sun, Sea, and...Sally - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Erotic Couplings
Author:  Ghostbear58

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Great CFNM Story but...

Comment By: L O Reins

WoW a comment from Jane Marwood. Now that is an endorsement.

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Should have had the son's friends join in the fun

Comment By: Anonymous

It would have been great if the friends had taken on the two ladies and had a fun experience with them

Submission Title:  Awakenings Pt. 03 - 6  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  TxAuthor

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great again

Comment By: Anonymous

Enjoyed it as much the second time as I did the first. Thank you

Submission Title:  Fool Me Once - 328  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  Longhorn__07

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To Anon comment

Comment By: Inkysquid718

English IS my first language. I am NOT a writer by any means. This is just a hobby. I trimmed back a lot of mistakes compared to when i first started posting. But THANKS for the constructive criticism and i would love to see some of your work to aide in cutting back on errors. I write in between flights and projects, if this was a full time PAID thing for me, then yes, the errors should not be there, but it is not.

Submission Title:  A Fated Pair - One Shot - 21  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  Inkysquid718

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