Latest 15 Reader Comments

good

Comment By: blue66

I love this story. Pity it only has 21 chapters

Submission Title:  Sandy and Frank Ch. 12 - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Novels and Novellas
Author:  SteveLee1146

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Comment By: Anonymous

Is there to be more? In this, I see no reason for her to trust.

Submission Title:  Trust - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  BDSM
Author:  sappharia

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Damn

Comment By: betrayedbylove

Cheating skank cunt doesn't deserve a happy ending.

Submission Title:  We Had It All - Aftermath - 59  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  fawguy88

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No Wonder She Cheated On Him

Comment By: zed0

He's a fucking wimp-assed moron!

Submission Title:  Journey's End in Lovers Parting - 5  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  potsherd

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More Please

Comment By: Anonymous

Perhaps in the second part, the guys are forced to masturbate with cold cream while their mothers finger their naughty bottoms?

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Good Story, But...

Comment By: Anonymous

This was a hot story - and it certainly did the job! However, I didn't really buy the tonal shift in the middle between the "asshole son blackmails mother" to "son comforts betrayed mother". For me the hotness comes from the relationship between the characters, and if there's no consistency, then that gets in the way for me. But this was awesome -- please keep writing!

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Comment By: Anonymous

Margaret is 6"1 tall white bitch who loves monster Size
10+bbcs

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Lovely

Comment By: Anonymous

Well done!

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Why...???

Comment By: silverstar88

... Are your stories always so short on their explanations? As with, "Patrick," you skip from moment to moment, mention a conversation taking place without ever writing out the actual dialogue, just the cliff notes, and if it does take place it's very brief. Also, the love scenes are too rushed. There's no real build up or description that's detailed enough to draw the reader in and make them feel like they've actually entered into the world you've created. The characters and their storylines need to be developed. The way you jump from one moment to the next makes it difficult to get a feel for the story you're trying to tell. I like your ideas, but you can really use a good editor and maybe take more time to research the kind story you want to write and what characters are needed to complete them. You have major potential as a writer, but the lack of editing, construction, organization and details are hindering your work.

Submission Title:  Kane Ch. 01 - 33  Comment(s)
Category:  Interracial Love
Author:  kalamazoo707

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brilliant

Comment By: Anonymous

such a building suspense

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Comment By: Anonymous

Fantastic work as always! I really love your wwe stories

Submission Title:  Maryse's Love Of Fat Ass Ch. 05 - 2  Comment(s)
Category:  Celebrities
Author:  MTL17

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Comment By: Anonymous

Obvious ending, and there were a few grammar issues. All in all a pretty good story. But "daddy" is usually a child's word, so most 18 year olds wouldn't use it... Added a bit of semi-pedofelia.

Submission Title:  Dad's Loan Is Due - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  NonConsent/Reluctance
Author:  Bakers_dozen

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Damn

Comment By: betrayedbylove

Oh well, shit happens.

Yeah yeah I know

Submission Title:  Again... - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  ashamedwife

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Hmmm...

Comment By: betrayedbylove

Oh well, shit happens.

Submission Title:  Journey's End in Lovers Parting - 5  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  potsherd

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Well done

Comment By: G88smith

Great first attempt. Enjoyed it a lot. Keep them coming

Submission Title:  Meeting My Crush Again - 3  Comment(s)
Category:  Erotic Couplings
Author:  azngurl

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