Ok, so here we are. I have written a story and am begging for feedback. If you don't like the story, please say why, don't just leave "Yuck yuck yuck." That doesn't help, and quite frankly it's rude. I have been a consistent reader of Literotica for many years, and have read thousands of stories. I have left feedback and have even emailed writers to make comments.
If you don't like how I write, make suggestions, if you don't like the content, read someone else's story.
For the rest, please enjoy, and let me know if you enjoyed the story as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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