I enjoy reading a well written story. However, there is nothing quite so irritating as a good story badly written, especially when a half-decent editor could have saved it. All authors have to start somewhere and I can understand the difficulties - I've written a few stories with mixed success, the later ones have scored better so I'm probably improving. Jimmy is my alter ego, my Mr Hyde, the one who is not afraid to criticise poor writing, poor grammar, poor punctuation and all manner of pretentious nonsense. I have no time for the anonymous wimps who dole out abusive criticism but are not brave enough to allow any reply. To all you cowards may I just say, I do not even bother to read most of your nonsense. Although to be fair, given the illiterate standard of your comments, you probably would not understand a reply. | 
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