Thanks to everyone who voted and commented on my first attempt.
I'm trying very hard not to be one of those writers who start something really good and never post again. That just irritates me to know end. But I also do not want to be one of the more prolific authors on this site who publish work of a lower standard. I'm not saying my writng is good, just that I want to write something I would be willing to read if I came across it.
Grey 2 is up, 3 is awaiting approval and I continue to work on four. Its going to be one of the more longer pieces compared to my previous entries.
Thanks for the support, criticism and advice.
CS
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South Africa