I am in the process of writing my first book and would like some feed back as well as puctuation help! cuz I really suck at that part!

For reasons of not having my work ripped off I will not post the whole book but sections that I think are ready. I welcome sugestions, but please don't abuse my works. I have been working on the story line for three years, and have spent another year on research.

Thanks,

~Cicca~

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