I'd rather be controversial than boring.
The chapters for His Surrender will continue in both Jessie's and Carol's voices. Thanks to those who shared their opinion.
The consensus seems to be, readers want both but if forced to choose would choose Jessie. Funny thing is if forced to choose the author would keep Carol.
Keeping both is a win for us all!
If you think I made a factual error please contact me, just don't insult me until you know how how the error occurred. I do take research seriously.
Comments are encouraged and will be left up even when critical as long as you are not insulting.