Writing for fun. Hope you don't hate it! Any comments on my work that appear to be ads or dating profiles will be deleted. I have left the anonymous comments open but they are subject to be removed, I will leave the amusing ones for spice.

anon-"This is the literary equivalent of burning down your house to get rid of flies."

anon-"Fantastic - had the opportunity to score a "1" on everyone of this pathetic authors renderings. As usual and expected this putrid submission sucks dog-piss as expected."

anon-"A plot twist .. that might have led to a better than average story is incompetently and lazily executed."

anon-"Not one single interesting, clever or entertaining thing in this whole mess. A complete waste of space."

anon-"Only would happen in an alternate universe, johnthechaosman. Or in your wimp pussy boy faggot brain."

anon-"This was simply awful. Way too little information. There was nothing clever or entertaining in this entire mess. If zero was possible, I'd give it to you. I can't believe I wasted my time reading this drivel."

anon-"What is expected from this sorry excuse of an author. Author..go far, far away."

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