I am relatively new to the world of erotica. I joined because of a desire to explore the darker, more lustful aspects of my mind without judgment. My stories are told from a young, quiet, and somewhat shy African-American male named Marcus Moore's point-of-view. I chose to write stories from the male perspective because that's one that isn't altogether common in this art form. Since I am new to the world of Erotic Fiction, I encourage any and all feedback, particularly constructive criticism. Though the stories are meant to be short, are the characters fleshed out enough? Is there enough buildup? Are the erotic encounters good? I would like to self-publish some day, so any and all help is welcome. | 
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